FF-*Pyar Ke Rang*PART 4 -PG 8-AR teased

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Kanzy

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Posted: 17 years ago

#41

awsum prt! thx 4 d pm! cntd sn!

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Posted: 17 years ago

#42

thanks guys..we'll continue soon 😳

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Super.woman

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Posted: 17 years ago

#43

woow......tht was great.plz continue soon.ofcurse haath humaare hero ka nahi to aur kis ka hoga?..lol...
luv ur ff
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Sanchitha

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Posted: 17 years ago

#44

Part3:

Riddhima is weak and she stumbles while trying to get up……
Man:Memsaab,aap aaram kijiye……aapki tabiyat teekh nahi hai aur haan mei toh bhool hi gaya………uss aadmi ne aapko yeh dawai lene ke liye kaha
Riddhima:Aap yahaan par rakh lijiye,mei le loungi.
She gets up and goes out, but the weather was not good…..it was too stormy!
Man:Behenji,iss mausam mei aap bahar mat jaaye,bahut khatra hai.Pata nahi who aadmi kahaan phas gaya hai,bechara.
Riddhima:Mujhe Armaan ko lene ke liye jaana hoga!
She ignores the man's pleading and goes out fast……though her whole body was aching, she runs as fast as she can with an injured leg to call Armaan back.She hadn't gone far but she felt very tired. The cottage was in her vicinity. She just stops by a tree to catch her breath………just then she feels someone is right behind her. She tries to look back but having overstrained herself, she just faints into the arms of that unknown person. That person carries her to the cottage and makes her lie in the lone room available over there. He notices that Riddhima had high fever…her forehead was burning. He felt hot by the heat radiated by her body. That person places a wet-bandage over her forehead and looks at the calm, serene face of Riddhima.A sudden wave of emotion grips him. He had felt the same emotion surfacing for her…….but he never really realized what all this meant…..why did he like being around her so much????Why did he like irritating her………why couldn't he stop gazing at her…what was special in those big eyes of Riddhima…that he could just drown down in them???Why does he think about her 24x7? Why??? Why????Is it love???Well this feeling kept on troubling him…but now he had more pressing matters……..Riddhima was unwell and he had to do something…
He couldn't see her like this in a pathetic condition….He looked at her face again and put his hand over her forehead…..and did something which he himself didn't realize till he did it………..he kissed her on her forehead…….he thought he noticed a small smile curl upon ridzi's lips…….He felt happy…He was there beside her bed for the whole time and his hand was around her head……He was so involved in staring at her face that he fell asleep right next to her….
Meanwhile in Ridzi's mind some things were going around too….She could sense
someone's presence right beside her…….she could feel his heart beat and hers was racing too……she felt that sense of security by his very presence…..all she wanted was to lay there forever in his arms……..but then why is she feeling all these???She herself couldn't figure out.
In the meantime, that man came there to give them both something hot to drink but seeing them both asleep…he just didn't feel like disturbing them. That man was quite old and noticing that ridzi's wet bandage had to be changed….he went forward and dipped the bandage in water and put it on her forehead and blessed them both..
Man: Bhagwan inn do bacchon ko hamesha khush aur saath-saath rakhe…
Riddhima felt something cold on her face…. she got up…on getting up she saw the face of that person…seeing that she got the shock of her life…IT WAS ARMAAN….it was for him she was having sleepless night…….it was about him she dreamed daily but had failed to realize it………she now understood what she felt for Armaan but was scared to accept it………It is love…….what else can it be she thought……

Edited by Bloomsanchitha - 17 years ago

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Sanchitha

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Posted: 17 years ago

#45

pls comment and criticize and suggest if u feel anything is missing guys.....

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Fariza

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Posted: 17 years ago

#46

yay 1st to comment!! 😉 that part was soo interestin..she finally admits that she loves him..not to him but at least to herself 😆

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Sanchitha

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Posted: 17 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: Fariza
yay 1st to comment!! 😉 that part was soo interestin..she finally admits that she loves him..not to him but at least to herself 😆

lol yeah.........thanx fudgie....lub u😳

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251746

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Posted: 17 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: Fariza
yay 1st to comment!! 😉 that part was soo interestin..she finally admits that she loves him..not to him but at least to herself 😆

thanks😳

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charminggenie

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Posted: 17 years ago

#49

saara it's soooo beautiful,d way both of them care 4 each other n r ready 2 do nythin is soooooooo grippin
i adored d fact that both r realizin feelins 4 each other...i soooooo agree wid d old man......both of them shud stay 2gedr 4evr n evr
u r a grt writer! 👏

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shalini jain

@yachna

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Posted: 17 years ago

#50

hey yaar it ws sooo beautiful prt yaar d wy he care her so mch nothng did wrong nd bth felt same thng bt nt confess yaar soo adorable prt yaar vryyyyy intrestng yaar yaa d old man ws rght thy should be togthr alwys nd remain happy...........god bless thm yaar it ws tooooo gooooooood
lvd it
cont sooooooooooon
luv yachna