FF-*Pyar Ke Rang*PART 4 -PG 8-AR teased

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Sanchitha

@Bloomsanchitha

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Posted: 17 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: zaara.khan
hey awesum part but plzz make it longer and continue asap plzz

aww thanku.....we will surely make it longer next time.....

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251746

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Posted: 17 years ago

#22

thanks fariza

aww so sweet zaara...we'll make it longer cus dis time it was to c if ppl liked it 😳

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mahru

@mahi4u

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Posted: 17 years ago

#23

hey
jus read da prt
grt strt
n plzzzzz plzzz rite a bit longer 😊
cont super soooooooooonnnn
luv ya n tak care
mahru

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unknown cute

@yogzz

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Posted: 17 years ago

#24

hey interesting ff
1st part was superb
plz continue soon

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Sanchitha

@Bloomsanchitha

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Posted: 17 years ago

#25

aww thank u guys for appreciating our work.......and dis is our first FF.....so we didnt actually know the length......nxt time we will definetly post it longer and we will continue asap.....

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Super.woman

@Super.woman

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Posted: 17 years ago

#26

oh wowwwww....tht was so gud.....n i jus luv d way he says BASKET to her.plz continue soon....i think it wud be ridz's might be she wud be scared...bya goat again....lol...plz continue soon
luv ur ff
ishiqa

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Kanchan

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Posted: 17 years ago

#27

Hey, Continue soon and write long parts plzzz

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251746

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Posted: 17 years ago

#28

ok guys...the continuation will b psoted soon ! 2dai ina few mins ! 😆 😳

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Sanchitha

@Bloomsanchitha

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Posted: 17 years ago

#29

part 2

Armaan: Meri Maa!! tum gir jaogi..phir mat kehna ki meri galti hai..stupid basket

Riddhima:Maine kaha kya ..ke main tumhe dhosh dhungi?
Armaan:HAAN RIDDHIMA!! TU TOH IOTM JO HO
Riddhima:(rolls her eyes and takes her tongue out.and.continues to climb)
She loses control and her hands slip...and she falls down into the water letting out a terrible scream which echoed in the darkness of the still forest------------------------------------------------------ -----------------------------------------------------
(2 Hours later)
Riddhima opens one of her eyes..wondering where she is..(she gets up ..
she feels a bit dizzy and touches her forhead...yeh main kahan hoon.aur Armaan
kahan hai..
(Man comes)
Man:Madam..Aap ko ek aadmi ne le kar aaya...aap toh behosh thi
aur aapke sir par khoon tha..lekin..unhone aapko dawai di……who bahut pareshan tha aur ro bhi raha tha….who abhi tak aapke paas hi tha………shayad bahar hoga abh….
Riddhima thinks to herself kaun hoga yeh aadmi...
RIddhima:Saab..unhone apna naam bataya kya?
man tries to remember..
yaad nahin..ek minute...uska naam tha(thinks..Koi...Ar....haan haan Armaan!
(Riddhima is shocked..never in her life she had thought that Armaan would help her)
Ridz:Ab woh kahaan hai...
Man:pata nahin madam ..woh kahin chale gaye..
(Riddhima is worries...and takes herself guilt for not listening to him)
Ridz:thanks
(gets up and goes in the room to find him but noone there..riddhima:O god ab mein akeli.hoon .Armaan please aa jao
She goes out..Riddhima:ab mein kahan dhoondongi usse..
Just den Riddhima feels strange...and feels that someone is behind..Just wen she was going to look bak.....

Precap:Kiska hoga yeh haath?