My new FF...do read n reply !!!

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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey guysss...m bk wid andr FF...well...actuallyy..u cnc all it a prediction,possibility or nethng....but i ws jus imagining if sumthin lyk dis hppns...i mean...now dt v all knw dt AR r bk 2 d usual stuff-arguing n fyting 4 no reason..😆...sso..i jus thot of dis...read on :
Armann n Ridz r in d locker room...ridz is lukin 4 sum file in her locker...arman is standing in frnt of is locker...keeping his lab-coat in it...jus wen anjali cums in n says..
ANGIE : hey armaan...hey ridz...
A : heyy gorgeous...wssup..
ANGIE : kuch nhi...dr.keerti ne aaj nyt duty di hai...i jus hate late nyt shifts...saari neend kharab hojati hai...
A : hmm..well...tum ek kaam kyu nhi karti...i mean..m sure basket tumhari help zaroor karna chahegi...wt i mean is...aaj tum apni nyt duty isse kyu nhi de deti...kyu ridhima..tum apni behen ki madad toh kar hee sakti ho..(n givs a naughty smile 2 her)
R : (makes a disgusted face..bcz jus 2 days bk she had also had a nyt shift) agar di chahti hai...toh i dun hv ne problm..itni help toh mai unki kar hee sakti hoo...
ANGIE : no ridz..its ok..tum ghar jaao..i'll manage..
A : nhi anjali...agar woh tayaar hai toh...u go n relax...n she sed dt she dznt hv ne prblm...ryt riddhima ?
R : its ok di..aaj mai ruk jaaoongi...aap ghar jaao...waise bhi mujhe apna locker clean karna hai...toh..rukna toh tha hee...i'll tke care di...aap ghar jaao...
(den angie thnk's ridz..n leaves...n ridz goes 2 d changing room..leaving her locker open..)
(armaan is about 2 leave..wen he realises dt her locker is open)
A : (he says loudly..so dt ridz cn hear it in d chngin room) yyo baskett..tumhein nhi lagta ki tum kuch zaada hee irresponsible ho..i mean..apna locker khula chod kar jaaogi.....
R : (frm inside d chngin room) tumhein meri cheezo ki parwa karne ki zaroorat nhi hai...main apna aur apne samaan ka dhyan rakh sakti hoo..
A : tumse kis ne keh diya ki mujhe tumhaari parwa hai...main toh aate-jaate logo ki chinta kar rha tha...bechare tumhare locker se takra kar...faltoo mein injured hojaenge...(n gigles)
R : armaan plzz..ab toh mujhe akela chod do..ghar jaoo...
A : (dznt reply...tries 2 close her locker..but den...curiously peeps inside...n finds d pair of 'payal' which he had gifted her..picks dem up..n observes dem...n rmembrs d scene where he had made her wear it..wid all d dialogues lyk ridz sayin "kaha hai"..he replyin "kya"..den ridz sayin "tumhari jaan"..den he says 2 himself softly) "ab toh jaan jaa chuki hai...pata nhi waapas kab aayegi (n quietly puts d payal in his pocket n is about 2 leave)
R : (cums out frm d chngin room in a dffrnt suit..n luks in2 her locker...n realises dt d payal is nt der...she immediately stops armaan hu is leaving)armaan..tumne..tumne mere locker se kuch liya hai kya...
A : xcuse me...tumhara dimaag toh theek hai...tumhare paas aisa hai hee kya..(n mkes a naughty face..n strts walking away)
R : (she wonders...but agen stops him) armaan...main janti hoo...tumhee ne liya hai...chalo..waapas karo..(n brings her hand frwrd)
A : (irritatingly) kyyaaa ??..kya waapas karoo ?
R : wohh..wohh..meri payal waapas karo..
A : tumhaari payal ?...w8 w8...woh tumhaari kabse hogyi..?
R : matlab tumhein hee ne li hai...armaan plzz..waapas karo
A : xcuse me...woh tumhaari nhi hai...woh meri payal hai...ohkk..
R : ohh..toh tum payal pehente ho..(n gigles)
A : haha...verry funnyy....n plzz..mujhe jaan hai...mera peecha chodo..
R : armaaann...mujhe meri payal waapas chahiye...
A : ye kya 'meri payal..meri payal' laga rakha hai...maine kaha na...woh meri payal hai...woh maine tumhein di thi..
R : armaan...kisi ko di hui cheez waapas nhi lete..aur woh bhi tab...jab woh...jab wohh..
A : jab wohh ??
R : jab wph pyrr se di ho...
(both of dem stare at each odr...n ders silence 4 a moment )
A : (softlyy...i mean..softly but taunting at her) oh yeahh..agar aisa hai toh firr..tumne apna dil wapas kaise le liya ?..huh ?
(both keep on staring at each odr..n den suddenly d speaker says "dr.ridhima..nurse station par report kare")
R : (cums out of d starin-session..lol...) uhh..wohh..mujhe der ho rhi hai...xcuse me...(n leaves)
A : (stops her by grabbing her arm..luks at her...luks at d payal) yye...tumhari thi..aur..tumhaari hee rahegi..(n hands ovr d payal 2 her...n leaves)
(ridhima is left all confused...but senti.)
sso guyss...hw did u lyk it...plzz let me knw !! 😊

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nandy_93 thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
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it ws nice..!! u gt a creative mind..
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow awesome yaar 👏
totally loved it
Love Heena 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
#4
awww...choo sweet part
plzz continue 😉
yamnovbloom thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
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nice one yaar just continue sooonnnnnn..... 😳 😳 👏
sabi2010 thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow its just amazing plz do continue writing
-Cherry- thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
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payal sooooo goos
plz try to cotninue it its ur ff now so plz continue it
-tanya- thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
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great job i luv this dialouge u wrote:
A : (softlyy...i mean..softly but taunting at her) oh yeahh..agar aisa hai toh firr..tumne apna dil wapas kaise le liya ?..huh ?
plzz continue..ur great.. 😳
yachna thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow payal its realy amazng pzzz keep cont .
plzzz cont.....
yachna
perfectpiscean thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Payal...awesum concept!

n gr8 part!!

do cont soon!!


Marisha

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