Armaan n Riddhima in luv FF #7 - Page 5

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Posted: 17 years ago
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yessss jia di we want a special romantic part from you 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
#42
hey congrats everyone on the new ff
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u all have done a fobulous jod
do deserve a party guys
so lets celebrate
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enjoy ur day everyone 😛
-prerana
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Posted: 17 years ago
#43
hey please jia continue soon
i am waiting for ur part
i no its going to b awesome for sure
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey

CONGRAGULATIONS


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CONT SOOOOOOOOOOOONNNNN
luv ya n tak care
mahru
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Posted: 17 years ago
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wow... alredy on the 7th thread...
Congratzzz 2 evry1


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Edited by Ravishing_gal - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#46
hey jia galde continue karo na
pleaseeeeeeeeeeee 😛 😊
i am wating to read ur part yar
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey gusy jia siad she is going to post in an hours time
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Posted: 17 years ago
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JUST gimme 10 more mins...............
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Posted: 17 years ago
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(recap: armaan gets ridz ready by applying all makeup and stuff by himself in the morning)

(BEFORE I START JUST TO REMIND EVERYONE THAT AR R IN PARIS OKKKKKK-if u gals hav forgotten😛 and though all the names that i hav used are completely TURE and THEY EXIST TOO their description is my imagination )

(After he finished applying the last touches to her eyes and her lips,making her get up he closed her eyes and made her stand in front of the mirror.Opening her eyes ridz saw a beautiful woman gazing back at her frm the mirror)

ridz:armaan..........i cant believe this......... this is awesome i mean............pehli baar meine apne app ko itna khilta hua dekha hai.

(Hearing this armaan circled his arms around her waist and put his head on her shoulder)

armi: hmmmmmmmm........yeh toh ho na he tha jaan........ i had told u ki mein issme apne pyaar ka rang milaunga........so u see its my immense love for u that is showing or rather u can say tum par mere pyaar ka rang chad gaya hai.........

(On saying this he tightened his grip around her waist once again.Feeling it ridz turned her face and placed a lite peck on his cheeks......)

ridz:(still gazing at the mirror) armaan........i still cant get over this...................u hav kept it so lite and simple and yet i look sooooooo beautiful.i feel i hav never looked more prettier than this...

armi: (placing a finger on her lips) shhhhh.......jaan u hav always looked beautiful............to me.....

(Hearing him say this ridz cudnt stop herself frm blushing.She turned around and buried her face in his chest.Armaan too hugged her back with as much passion......Still in his arms ridz asked........)

ridz:armaan.......toh ajj hum kya karenewale hai...??????? Tum jo kaho wohi hum karenge tekh hai.

armi:jaan this isnt done.......if u anything in mind then plsssssss tell me na.

(Lifting up her face frm his chest she took his face in her hands and drew his lips into a sweet kiss.......)

ridz:nahi tum jo kahoge wahi hum karenge......

armi:alrite toh let me tell u wat i hav planned for today.........

armi:Well first i am taking u sightseeing and then for lunch at milan rouge

and then.........

(Ridz was taken aback by his suggestion of his goin out as she thought that he wud suggest to spend the day lazying around in the hotel)

ridz:armaan.....hum bahar jaa rahe hai??????

armi:ofcourse jaan.......i know how much u want togo around and see and shop tooooo......(he looked at her grinning)

ridz:( she was soooooooooo happy on hearing this that she turned aroundand hugged him tight)

armi:arrey jaan age toh suno.............

ridz:hm bolo........

armi:then i am taking u too disneyland.......

ridz:DISNEYLAND!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! armaan...........tum mazak toh nahi kar rahe na.........

armi:(seeing her face flushed with childlike pleasure he said) nahi jaan u know na yaha paris mein bhi disneyland hai so y not go there and then after that for dinner i am taking u to paris hotel........

wer which is on sort of an island soooooo i hav booked a cottage there for one nite as this the second last nite of our honeymoon.......

ridz:ohhhhh armaan i lov u................

armi:lov u too jaan now shall we leave..........

(They leave for the day.Both immensly enjoy themselves........ridz shops a lot while armaan supports her througout by carrying all the bags..........Finally after becoming children once again in disneyland they go to hotel paris wer armaan has booked a cottage for them.)

(On entering the cottage armaan closed her eyes yet again only to present the most beatifully set up dinner table ever.......

..........................................

ridz:OMGSSSSSSHH armaan its sooooo wonderful........

armi:thanxxxxxxx jaan only for u.........lets toast this evening to our never ending love........

(Saying so they raised a toast to their love.After having dinner while armaan ordered the bell boys to clean up the table and waited outside for them todo so ridz.........went inside to their bedroom.......

(As she looked around she recalled the entire day................she was truly touched by wat armaan had done for her today...............thinking that it wud be their second last nite of their honeymoon or actually the last as the next nite they wud be in the airplane..............as she recalled al those beautiful moments of them together a lone tear escaped her eye.........she didnt realise armaan slowly coming to their room..........)

(Suddenly,Ridz felt the warmth of a caress, the moistness of a breath, she found herself in armaan's embrace.....She turned around and entwined her arms around his neck, .........feeling his lips on her she melted in his warm embraces.........Armaan lifted her up in his arms and kissed away her tear......Ridz quivered at his touch....)

armi:nahi jaan..........ajj nahi........tum bilkul.......no u will not cry at all.........so wat if we hav to go back...........u r crying as if we hav to go back and live seperately...........

ridz:(placing her finger on his lips) shhhhhhhhh............... tum aisa kuch nahi kahoge samjhe.........

(Armaan smiled at her tender love for him........Fully awakened to the splendor of his love, Ridz felt herself caressed by Armaan's lips, held sweetly captive in the embrace of his arms, and touched to her very soul ................she only new that armaan was transporting her to an entire new world.........Her fingers entwined his hair..... The room swam, and she closed her eyes to receive him in whatever way he wished............ both sank deep into a soft enveloping darkness, ......relaxed with a trembling joy. When Ridz opened her eyes,Armaan was gazing down at her. She felt his love and knew that he was, to her, the heart of her life. .......
Warmed by the perfection of their union........they sank into the lambent glow of blissful contentment...............
)

THATS ALL GUYS.....................

I HOPE U ALL LIKE IT............

I HAV TRIED TO MAKE LONG AND ROMANTIC AS NOW TILL MY EXAMZZZZZZZZ GET OVER I DONT THINK I'LL BE ABLE TO RITE......

OPEN TO ALL COMMENTS.........GOOD OR BAD.......😊



Edited by jia.. - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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*reserved*

yay im first to coment 😳

wow wow wow wow wow

jia di meine suna hai ki sabar ka phal meetha hota hain aaj dekh bhi liya

your part was sooooo fantastic itt descirbed the relationship between a husband and wife sooo beautifully it described there love and understanding the part expressed all there feeling sooo nicely. It showed how they can make each other happy. Its not a easy job to write such a beautifully descirbed part but you have pulled it off excellently you have done a highly creditable job i dont know how to put it in words.

all i can say is it was one of the best parts i have ever read fantastic mindblowing outstanding jia di 😳 it was romantic but yet so full of emotions 😛

please keep writing such beautiful parts😃

loved your part

a big hug for you 🤗

aapki choti behen muskaan 😳

Edited by muskaan_2008 - 17 years ago

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