FF shades of luv...pt 27/PG3....13/5 - Page 8

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Posted: 17 years ago
#71
oye hoye... 😆 😆 😳
u rock gurl...
just awesome...
superb..
hats off 2 u.... 😳 😳
👏

cont soon....
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Posted: 17 years ago
#72
mindblowing part sonia!!!!!!!!!!
awoosomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!actually i m speechless!!!i was completly lost in each & every word. it seemed like im ex 👏 perencing the same!!!!!!!!!!u deserve this!!!!!!! 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
#73
wonderful part. their thoughts were written so beautifully. amazing part. please continue soon. cant wait for the next part.
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Posted: 17 years ago
#74
that was really awesome sonia OMG wow u have described it so well 👏 plz plz puhlez continue soon 😛
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Posted: 17 years ago
#75
just read part 17! 😳 loved it! 👏 please continue soon! 😉 and keep up the great work! 👍🏼 and PM me once u update 😃

❤️ Sanya
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Posted: 17 years ago
#76
thx 4 da uda8....im completely awestruck n do nt hv wordz to describe wat i felt abt da part...uve gt amazing talent n plz continue ritin lyk dis 4eva....thnku 4 da upd8 n il b w8in 4 da nxt 1..:)
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Posted: 17 years ago
#77
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sorry 4 commenting late
u were 2 guud
beautifully wriiten
awesum..
yipee next part is confession to each oder
yipeee...
cant asap..
im diein to read d next 1
yay!!! dey hav finally confessed to demselves...
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Posted: 17 years ago
#78
OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
hwt an awesum part sonia
i luved it lyk hell alot
OMG
confessions ahead
i luv it
em waiting 4 d next part
luv sonia
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Posted: 17 years ago
#79

OMG! i am spechless! its jst mind blowin! d way u hve described everyfink its jst incredbly brillant! i loved it! cntd son plz! 😳

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Posted: 17 years ago
#80
Sonia ur too good...amazingly written,i never knew u could write soo well man Until i started reading ur ff, badhi chupa rustam nikle

loved their relationship, its soo sweet n natural and of course natural relationship

ridz is soo different in ur ff, too naughty, they both had locked their principal wow
i always like naughty chilled out people ridz is exactly like that in ur ff
indian yet modern, bindaas yet simple, i love her in ur ff

their confession n stairs scene was truely rocking, mind blowingly written
hats of to u

i wonder wat is armi upto...angad is the mask guy hmmm kool yaar im suprised

i loved the end too "they reached each other's soul which was yelling i love u, their soul expressions eyes..." wow it was like they confession but then too didn't confess

All the best for ur exams
missing u, come bak soon
n try to continue whenever possible

love n hugs, manju

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