FF:BHULBHULAYA:PART 32 PG-146 12/05 - Page 5

Originally posted by: Veiledbeauty

Pinky, dearr, i love your FF!! Don't think there's no one reading.. main hoon na!

Omg... is something really scary gonna happen? I'm a daar pok, cant see horror 😆

And i had one request... can you make a space after each person talks.. it gets hard to read 😳 just a suggestion 😃 and add some color and make is attractive.

Luv ya,
Zainab

thanks for ur suggestion i'll surly work on it.and once again thanks for reading my ff & liking it......and yes the real fun begins now.1 after other all scary episodes will start & u will feel this part was nothing near 2 scary after reading the coming parts.

Originally posted by: aspatel2

Great FF, you are really nice in portraying situation the last part at the end raced my heart 😆 Man i know how it feels to be stuck in jungle 😭 i had an experience of being stuck in jungle at midnight 😆 😆 well that was my short story!

pls cont. soooooooooooooooon

hey even i've experience of staying a night in jungle & i was with my entire family but was very scared 😆

i just wanted 2 say sorry as i culdnt describe the ending properly.i was actually getting late 4 coll & i wanted 2 post the part & leave.sorry once again.....

omg!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! again a cliffhanger lol!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

bt its sooooooooooo gud!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

plz. cont. sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooon!!!!

lv ur ff!!!

Marisha 😳

Originally posted by: perfectpiscean

omg!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! again a cliffhanger lol!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

bt its sooooooooooo gud!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

plz. cont. sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooon!!!!

lv ur ff!!!

Marisha 😳

i dont think i'll be able 2 right next part soon but i'll try.thanx 4 reading.........

heay
nice part plzzzzzzzzzzzz
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz cont soooooon
luv ya n tak care
mahru

PART-6:
IN THE JUNGLE:
No 1 can believe as 2 what just happened.It was something very unusual.All the tires of the bus getting punctured at once in the jungle & that too around at midnight.The night was no longer enjoyable.Every1 scared & shocked.Finally armaan broke the silence.
Ar: yeh kaise ho sakta hai???ek saath sab tires kaise puncture ho sakte hai??? 😕
Driver: main khudh pareshaan hu.maine itne saalon mein aisa pehli baar dekha hai.
Conductor: ab yeh sochne se behtar hai hum yeh soche ki kya karna hai.raat kafi ho gayi hai aur is waqt madat bhi nahi mil sakti hai.
Shubh: lagta hai humme raat issi jungle mein bitaani hongi.lekin jungle mein jaaye bhi toh kaha????
At:wahan......he said pointing at a place.Every1 turned around 2 see.Deep on the inner side of jungle away from the road on which they were standing now was something.It looked as if it was a house or hotel.It was difficult 2 know what it was from this point.
An: yeh kaise ho sakta hai????abhi toh wahan kuch bhi nahi tha. 😲
At: shayad tumne dhyaan se nahi dekha hoga.
An: but its so weired.koi jungle main hotel kyu banayega??? 😕
Keerti: sab log fayda ya nuksaan ka nahi sochte.ho sakta humaari tarah pehle koi yahan fassa hoga aur us se laga hoga ek hotel aisi jagah honi chahiye aur usne banvai ho.i think humme wahan jaana chahiye.yahan thandi ke maare hum sab mar jayenge.
Every1 agrees except for the driver & conductor........
Driver: jee hum apni bus ko is tarah chod ke kahin nahi jayenge.yeh humari roji-roti hai.
Conductor: aap ko jaana hai toh jaao lekin hum dono bus mein hi rahenge.hum aap ko kal subah yahin milenge.

They all left.They are walking & walking.
Ra: woh hotel wahan se kitna najdeek dikh raha tha lekin ab dekho hum jeetna chale jaa rahe hain woh utna hi dur lag raha hai... 🤢
M: oyi!sab cheez jaise ho zaroori nahi waise hi deekhe."HAR CHAMAKTI CHEEZ SONA NAHI HOTI".
Ra in undertone: bilkul theek kaha tumne.tum bhi toh itni buri nahi ho jitni deekhti ho.He didnt realise M had heard him & blushed. 😳

Ri is walking alone thinking about everything that had happened & is tensed.She knew she had 2 talk 2 Ar as he was the only one who knew abt zoya's warning.Ar was walking with Ra.She started walking beside him & whispered in his ears: mujhe tumse kuchh baat karni hai.
She started walking little slow than.Ar tried 2 get rid of Ra but couldnt find a reason.All of a sudden Ri started screaming & yelling in pain.Every1 turned to see she had fallen & sprained her leg.Every1 ran towards her & Ar was obviously the first person to reach her.He took her leg in his hand & asked what happened.Ridz just winked at him making him shocked but soon realised she was faking as she wanted to talk 2 him.
An: kya hua ridz???
Ri: di main gir gayi aur paer mein moch aa gayi.
Keerti: dekhao main check karti hu.
Ar: nahi iski koi zaroorat nahi hai.zaraa si moch hai.is basket toh aadat hai zaraa si baat ka batangad bananeki.At this ridz looked at him angrily & he winked & smiled at her.
Keerti: toh kya aap chal payengi?????
Ri: jee bas main thoda dheere chalungi.
Ar: to phir aap sab aagey chaley aur humare rehna ka intzaam kijiye.main ridz ke saath aata hu.

Every1 leaves & AR also get up to leave.While walking they start their conversation.
Ri: armaan.....woh.....
A: main jaanta hu tum kya baat karna chahti ho.tum ab tak jo bhi hua uske liye pareshaan ho na??
Ri nods her head.
A: main tumse jhooth nahi bolunga......yeh baat ab mujhe bhi pareshaan kar rahi hai.......lekin hum kuch nahi kar sakte....hum kissi ko zoya ji ke baare mein nahi bata sakte.sab bahut darre hue hai.....yeh baat unhe aur daraa dengi.
Ri: tum theek keh rahe ho lekin ab hum kya karen??????
A: subah ka intzaar.aur kuch nahi kar sakte...
Just then they hear the same noise of woman screaming.Ri gets very scared & hugs armaan.
Ri still in A's arms: yeh awaaz dubara.mujhe bahut darr lag raha hai.aakhir kis cheez ki awaaz hai yeh??????
A: pata nahin par ab humme chalna chahiye is ke pehle ki hum ghum jaaye.humme sabke saath hona chahiye.
They start walking when ridz stops all of sudden.
Ri: mujhe lagta hai us jhaadi(bushes) ke peeche kuch hai.woh abhi hil rahe the...
A: shayad koi jaanwar ho ga.yeh jungle khatarnaak hota jaa raha hai.hum yahan se jitna jaldi nikle utna accha hai....
They walk & finally reach the place where every1 is waiting for them.
Shubh: humme do kamre mile hai.ek main boys aur ek main girls.ab humme jaldi andar jaana chahiye.....
They all go 2 their rooms.
IN GIRLS ROOM:
An falls to sleep instantly as she is very tired.M & keerti talk 4 sometime while ridz is just sitting looking tensed.When she was asked by keerti if she was ok she just nodded her head & lay down still thinking.After sometime keerti-M go 2 sleep.
AT SAME TIME
IN BOYS ROOM:
At to Ar: tum jaante ho woh insaan jo counter par baith ta hai mujhe lagta hai us se ilaaj ki zaroorat hai.
Ar: kyu?????
At: jab main aur Dr.shubh us se baat kar rahe the usne kuch kaha hi nahi.
Ar: kya matlab?????
At: humne us se kaha hum me raat gujaarne ke liye kamre chahiye.us ne do chaabiyaan nikal kar de di.humne us se poocha ki kitna kiraya lage ka toh usne kuch kaha hi nahi.humne paisey nikal kar diye toh usne liya hi nahi.bas haath se yeh ishaara kiya ki kal subah......chalo ab main bahut thak gaya hu aur sone jaa raha hu......
Every1 went 2 sleep except AR.they both were still in deep thoughts wondering if all this was just coincidence or something else.....
AROUND 2 AM:
All of sudden ridz hears some payal noise.some1 was wearing a payal & walking out of the room.This same noise distracted armaan.Ridz gets up very scared & opens the door to see who is there but sees no1.she hears the noise of payal somewhere outside & goes out of the hotel checking.Even armaan goes out & sees ridz standing looking 4 something peeping into the jungle.He goes to her & puts his hand on her back 2 call her.She turns all scared & sees its armaan & immediately hugs him.
Ar: kya hua tumhe???
Ri: woh main bahut darr gayi thi aur tumne achanak aakar mujhe aur bhi daraa diya.
Ar leaving her 2 look at her: lekin tum yahan itni raat ko kya kar rahi ho?????
Ri: mujhe laga koi kamre ke bahar chal raha tha aur yahan aaya.maine kissi ke payal ki awaaz suni.
A: haan maine bhi suni
Ri: tumne bhi.......lekin kaun ho sakti hai woh???yahan itni raat ko kaun chal sakta hai????
A: pata nahi par mujhe lagta hai shayad yahan kaam karnewali koi maid ho gi.aur toh koi nahi ho sakta......
Ri: armaan mujhe bahut darr lag raha hai.agar hum main se kissi ko kuch ho gaya toh???
A: hum main se kissi ko kuch nahi hoga.hum sab saath hain.main kissi ko kuch nahi hone dunga.
Ri: mujhse wada karo.....
A: kaisa wada?????
Ri: agar mujhe kuch ho gaya toh tum apna khyaal rakhoge.....
A puts his hand on ridz mouth & says: hum main se kissi ko kuch nahi hoga.hum dono hamesha saath rahenge.main tumhare bina jeena soch bhi nahi sakta.main tumse bahut pyaar karta hu.I LOVE YOU RIDDHIMA.
Ridz immediately hugs armaan.
Ri: I LOVE U 2 ARMAAN.hum hamesha saath rahenge chahe kuch bhi ho jaye.......
But ridz doesnt speak anything further.armaan leaves her & sees she has eyes wide open & mouth open with shock.
A: riddhima kya hua tumhe??????
Ridz doesnt speak anything just points at something at armaans back.armaan turns around 2 see what is it & he is also shocked at seeing this.his face as white as chalk.
PRECAP:what did AR see that they are so shocked.what else is going to happen will all of them???will they ever knw the secret of these unusual things??????to know read next part......
I've again tried my best.i can just hope u like this.plzzzzzzzz leave comments as the parts starting from now require lot of hard work.............

wooooooooooow, this part is awesome!!! is it similar to bhul bhulaya? because the payal 😆 😆 can't wait for the next part!!!!

wooooooooooooooooooooow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
👏

rite nw im tooo scard 2 rite... 😆 ...bt dat was a faaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaab part!!!! i luv ur ff!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! plz. cont.soon n dont leave such painful cliffhangers dat keep me yearning 4 more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😭

Marisha 😳

Originally posted by: Veiledbeauty

wooooooooooow, this part is awesome!!! is it similar to bhul bhulaya? because the payal 😆 😆 can't wait for the next part!!!!

thanks 4 reading........its not like the film bhulbhulaya.i just culdnt think of anything else that would distract them & payal came 2 my mind so i wrote it.