FF:BHULBHULAYA:PART 32 PG-146 12/05

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pinky gandhi

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Posted: 17 years ago

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hey my exam is cancelled so i'll post the next part verrrryyyyyyyyy soooooonnnnnnn.............. 😊

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pinky gandhi

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PART-3:
IN THE BUS:
Every1 has started sitting in the bus.First all the girls sit in the bus.All of them like sitting near window & hence all of them sit seperately near window.then shubh enters & he sits with keerti.they smile at each other.then armaan enters & is confused 2 sit with ridz or muskaan.he smiles 2 himself & sits near ridz.ridz is in her own thoughts & doesnt realise A sat beside her.then rahul enters & was abt 2 sit with anjie but atul pushes him & sits beside angie.he has no option but sit with muskaan.they both make faces at each other & the trip starts.
Ri is in her thoughts & doesnt realise her hair & dupatta r flying & touching A's face gently.A on the other hand is mesmerised by her beauty & is liking it.Ra sees this & smiles & feels happy for A.Finally A wanted 2 talk 2 Ri abt somethingor other 2 make her realise his presence.so he finally breaks the silence.
A:Ridhima.....
Ri looks at him & asks wat???
A:woh .....tumhare baal mujhe kabke tang kar rahe hai......
Pointing at her hair.
Ri:oh sorry
then she takes her hair & places it on opposite side shoulder.she was feeling something different.A's presence was making her smile.knowing A was sitting beside her she also culdnt keep quite.she also was searching 4 some topic 2 talk & this time both broke the silence 2gether.
AR:armaan ridhimaa
AR:woh.....main.........
A:tum kaho.
R:nahi its ok tum kaho
A:ab please pehle tum pehle tum mat shuru karna aur kaho tumhe kya kehna hai?????
R:woh.......mujhe thanks kehna tha.
A with confused look:kis liye?????
R:tumne andar mujhe sambhala aur samjhaya is liye.warna shayad main ab bhi ek darr ke saath rehti.
A:its ok tumhe ek dost ki zaroorat aur kisi ke kandhe ki zaroorat thi.tum jab chaho mera kandha maang sakti ho.main hamesha tumhare saath chaluga.main hamesha tumhari parchaee banuga.har musibat mein tumhara saath dunga.
A didnt knw wat made him say all this & y did he say all this.he was confused as 2 wat happened 2 him.R smiled at him & this made him little comfortable.
R:lekin phir bhi armaan main zoya ji ki baaton ko bhula nahi paaye hu.lekin tumhaari in baaton ne mujhe aur ek hausla de diya hai ki chahe kuch bhi ho hum sab saath honge.
After sometime Ri went 2 sleep on A's shoulder while he was just smiling & looking at her....
Ra-M were as usual arguing but remembering Keerti's warning they were fighting very softly.after sometime both got tired of fighting & M went 2 sleep.Ra saw M sleeping so silently & peacefully & just got lost in her beauty for the first time realising hw innocent she looks.A looks at him & smiles happily 4 him seeing the same feeling in his eyes wich he felt 4 ridz.
On the other hand atul is bugging anjie's head.he is showing her all the trees out of window & describing every1's characteristics.anjie culdnt take it any more & finally says:
An:atul will u stop it please.i'm feeling very sleepy & want some peace.
At:haan kyu nahi anjie.ek kaam karo tum mere kandhe par sar rakh kar soo jaooo.
An:its ok atul mujhe tumhare kandhe ki zarrorat nahi hai.mainkhud aaraam se soo sakti hu.with this she goes 2 sleep not realising wen she placed her head on atul's shoulder & was sleeping peacefully.
Here keerti-shubh are remembering their internship days & such trips where every1 used 2 play so many pranks on each other.
K:humare interns bahut shaant hai tum please unhe yeh baaten mat bataana warna pata nahi hum unhe kaise handle karenge.
After sometime one by one every1 gets up.Every1 r shocked 2 see eachother lying like this on others shoulder.Every1 r very hungry.There's a conductor in bus who sits beside the driver.They always take turns 4 driving 4 long routes.A goes 2 the conductor & tells him every1 is very hungry.The conductor says there's no hotel anywhere near but a famous dhaba will cum ahead.U can have ur dinner there.But u all will have 2 bear atleast 4 half an hour.A goes & sits besides Ri.Ri remembers she kept wafers in her purse.She gets up to take her purse.As soon as she takes her purse the driver takes a deep turn due 2 wich she loses her balance & falls straight on A.A catches hold of her by waist.they both have an eye lock session.Then rahul starts singing"Aankhon hi aankhon mein ishaara ho gaya,baithe baithe jeene ka sahara kho gaya".This brings both of them in real world.A gives Ra i'll kill u look & he smiles & winks at him.Ri gets up but her hair are stuck in A's shirt button.Both of them try removing it but again both get lost in each other.Then Muskaan starts pulling their legs.Finally they somehow manage 2 concentrate on removing hair & they succeed.Ri removes wafers packet from her purse.she offers A but he doesnt take.
Ri:kya hua tumhe bhukh lagi thi na????
A:haan lagi hain.
Ri:to phir kha kyu nahi rahe????
A:kyunki tumhe bhi bhukh lagi hai aur agar maine khalee toh tum bhukhi reh jaogi aur mein tumhe bhukha nahi rakh sakta.
Ri blushes & A smiles at her
Ri:main bhukhi nahi rahoogi.hum dono thoda-thoda khaa sakte hai.aur waisey bhi kuch der mein dhaba aa jaega.
A:theek hai.lekin meri ek shart hai.
Ri:kya??????
A:dhaba pe mein tumhe khilaonga.
Ri shocked:kya??????
A:mera matlab hai tum meri pasand ka khaana khaogi aur tumhare liye mein pay karoonga.
Ri:magar.........
A:magar-wagar kuch nahi.haan ya na?????
Ri:haan theek hai.par ab tum ye khaoo.
With that they both share their wafers while smiling at each other.
PRECAP:
They all reach dhaaba & enjoy not knowing the worst is waiting for them.The dhaaba man is shocked 2 hear where all these doctors r going.Wat's wrong with him?????Wat will happen on their way????To know read part 4.
Alright i'm trying my best but doesnt look i'm doing a good work at all.If that's the case then please atleast let me know its not good.i dont mind even getting bad comments but atleast comment & tell me wat didnt u like.Is it that boring????I hope 2 get atleast get some comment from you all & still if i dont get any comments i'll believe mine is the worst ff ever.Thanks to all the few people who took the pain to comment & i'll continue this ff only 4 those who like it..........

Edited by pinky_5 - 17 years ago

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Kiara

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Posted: 17 years ago

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i luv ur ff!!!nyc upd8...ur doin a gr8 part!!!! plz. cont. sooon!! 👏

Luv ya,
Marisha 😳

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123abc123

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Posted: 17 years ago

#24

hey i fink ur ff
is really gd
i dnt fink ders anyfink
rong wiv it
its really gd
gd job 👏

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Kanzy

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Posted: 17 years ago

#25

dis is really gd! i am ure new ff fan! contd soon! 😃

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pinky gandhi

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Posted: 17 years ago

#26

hey thanx 4 ur wonderful comments.hope i get more of them.i'll post next part soon..... 😛

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heezy

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Posted: 17 years ago

#27

this part was really good, Armaan and Ridz are starting to feel things for each other... sweet

But the whole Zoya prediction thing has got me a bit worried, please don't let anythiung really bad happen to anyone.

Update soon, Lubna 😳

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pinky gandhi

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Posted: 17 years ago

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Originally posted by: na2339
this part was really good, Armaan and Ridz are starting to feel things for each other... sweet

But the whole Zoya prediction thing has got me a bit worried, please don't let anythiung really bad happen to anyone.

Update soon, Lubna 😳

hey something bad has definately 2 happen coz this is a thriller but this bad things will bring every1 closer.The main storyline will start from the next part.so keep reading & enjoy 😃

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pinky gandhi

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Posted: 17 years ago

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PART-4:
AT DHAABA:
The dhaaba man welcomes every1.He tells every1 wat is in the menu.Every1 is confused since they have no idea of punjaabi food.Ra-M tells every1 they'll order.Every1 agrees & they order some really tasty food.A sits besides Ri.
Ri:tumne toh kaha tha ki mere liye tum food order karoge.
A smiles:Haan maine kaha tha par ab plan thoda change ho gaya hai.
Ri:kya matlab????
A:ab main tumhare liye khaana nahi mangaoga.
Ri:toh????
A:bas dekhti jaao.
With that he leaves leaving a confused ridz behind.After sometime the food enters but Ri is not eating.she's waiting 4 armaan 2 cum.
An:ridz tum khaana kyu nahi kha rahi?????aur yeh armaan kahan gaya.
Ri:di aap log khaa lijiye main armaan........i mean........woh.....di mujhe bhukh nahi.
An:bhukh nahi?????theek hai.aur armaan????
Ri:di pata nahi mujhe lagta hai washroom gaya ho ga.di main usse dekhkar aati hu.
An:theek hai lekin jaldi aana warna us ke liye khaana nahi bachega.
Ri:theek hai.with that she leaves in search of armaan.
She had seen A going inside the dhaaba.she decides 2 check 4 the washroom but before she reaches there some1 pulls her & covers her mouth with hand.Ri is totally scared.it was a small dark place where some1 had pulled.she culdnt see the person's face coz it was 2 dark.she culd hear people nearby talking in punjabi & there were noises of utensils.she soon realised she was in a place near kitchen.she was trying her hard 2 get free from the person.then the person puts on the lighter & brings it near her eyes.Ri is shocked 2 see the face.
To know who it is read next part.i'm sorry i knw this part is too small.i'll write the next part soon.please leave comments.....

Edited by pinky_5 - 17 years ago