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Posted: 18 years ago
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okie guys....i havn't penned nethin dwn since my school days...dis is my very first venturs since just abt ages.....so plz plz plz tell me hw it is!!!

Words are too trivial,

let me show you what I feel,

Take my hand,join my soul,

I promise the ride would be all u need,

One chance is all I desire,that one moment with you,

Eternity shall pale beside that second with you,

Give me that today and forever will be forgotten,

For then time shall stand still and a mist will be woven,

Let me shield you this night from all your confusions,

Where are you,

I see my hand is still waiting,

My eyes are thirsting for that one glimpse,

A glimpse of desire,of passion,of love.

Is this the destiny you sent for me.

Take that one step,the rest I shall,

But take care to tread softly on your path tonight,for my love is strewn allover for your eyes,

I've stripped bare my heart for you now,do what you will but be sure,

Hear the gentle wispering on your side,for the nature is with me tonight,

I shall send you dreams with music inside,and a tale with me besides,

With the soothing tide lapping at your feet,I offer you all u'll ever need,

Please don't defy the breeze knocking at your window,

I love you too much to send across a wind,

The bird singing by your window sill,

Know this it bears my will,

With all your thoughts safe with me,I long to know the secret burried deep,

I'll keep that one safe within the folds of my heart,trust me today just give me one chance,

The blood running through these viens,I promise you your love will replace,

If you need more please don't phrase,ask your eyes they'll convey,

Can you not see my patience shall win,

But patience too needs a hope,

Your one touch,that aroma,the essence of my feelings crave,

So close,I feel your breath yet miles apart.

A sigh so softly drawn,gives my love a feeble start,

What is this swirling I see amidst your heart,

Could it be that your will is finally coming apart,

The shadow on my soul cast,is gently being ripped by your dawn,

With all that I am and all that I ever could be,

This precious drop is all I ask for me.

tried my best to pen dwn ar emotions.............

plz comment.......

guys m waiting!!!

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Posted: 18 years ago
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im speechless 👏
i will write a long comment in few mins becoz right now i dont hav words
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Posted: 18 years ago
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toooooooooo gud yaar very very very nicely written dam gud😳
Edited by maha_elahi202 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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awwwwwwwww it is sooooooooooo cute n so truely voice AR's situation n their emotion........ i must say it is brilliant 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: dmg_sonia

im speechless 👏
i will write a long comment in few mins becoz right now i dont hav words

hey thnx sooo very much!!

i ws like pata nahi kaisa hai.....u made my day lol😉

will wait for dat comment!!!😆😉

Edited by pixiecuty - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: maha_elahi202

very gud yaar it was really nice 😳

glad u liked it!!

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: mehak_kapoor

awwwwwwwww it is sooooooooooo cute n so truely voice AR's situation n their emotion........ i must say it is brilliant 👏

tnx a lot hun...

ws really sceptical abt posting it bt seein ur response m glad i did!!😆

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: pixiecuty

hey thnx sooo very much!!

i ws like pata nahi kaisa hai.....u made my day lol😉

thanks 2 u 4 writing n posting it yaar

it was 2 gud,perfect 4 AR ...i loved it, its wonderful yaar, rocking

Posted: 18 years ago
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Love is in the air!!!!
first the promo😍 then aarti's post ☺️now this poem😛.....awwwww i will go insane & have to admitted in sanjeevani 😆

Beautiful, amazing...it struke a chord in my heart 😳 😳 😳

thanks for the treat!!!

cheers
❤️Kai❤️
Edited by Kai_Hiwatari - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: Kai_Hiwatari

Love is in the air!!!!
first the promo😍 then aarti's post ☺️now this poem😛.....awwwww i will go insane & have to admitted in sanjeevani 😆

Beautiful, amazing...it struke a chord in my heart 😳 😳 😳

thanks for the treat!!!

cheers
❤️Kai❤️

hmmmm......glad to b able to help u in getting admitted in sanjeevani lol....dis way u wud b able 2 meet dr. ar!!😆😆

thnk u so much for readin it ya........nd for ur lovely comments!!

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