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Thanks guys for the comments on the name but all the credit should go to Afifa because it was her idea. 😛

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Part 8- Vivek...

Ridhima is jogging early in the morning and notices she is near the basketball court but no one is playing. She runs there and stops infront of the kids.

'What happened guys, why aren't you playing?' she questioned them.

'There's no one to play with!' they replied glumly.

'How about I play with you?' she asked.

'SURE!' they yelled.

So they begin to play. Ridhima is having lots of fun. Running laughing and just enjoying with the little kids. Armaan came running...in hope of playing a quick game before work. He was late, and he knew it. He was really tired. He had gone out with his girlfriend and got home from the club around 3:00 am and slept a bit later than intended. He couldn't tell the kids that he was late because of a girl. It wasn't a good enough excuse for them. He didn't want to come and face them because they knew they'd be mad. But he had to face them some day!

But when he came near the basketball court, he heard a ball dribbling, the pat-pat of runnning shoes against the cement court and laughter??

He hurried and saw the back of a girl with open hair running to the basket and scoring.'Boy does she look hot in black!' he thought. But he was horrified in his thoughts in a few seconds. It was BASKET! The one who usually wore suits to work and looked like a behnji was now looking cool...hot?? He shook his head and went to turn away when he heard his name being called by a sweet, gentle, but happy voice!

'Armaan!' she cried.
'Wait up! I'll walk back with you! We just finished our game. I won!' she caught up with him and walked in step with him. Her face was flushed and she looked cute. In a moment's time she had gone from hot to cute. She looked so adorable, he just felt like holding her. He couldn't hear her voice because he was busy staring at her beauty. 'What are you thinking Armaan? Basket! You're talking about Basket! She can't be hot or cute, she can only be a behnji!' he shook his head. As he did so, he noticed that she had left.

He looked around and saw her jogging back to her house. He was so busy in his thoughts that he hadn't heard her bid farewell.

In Sanjeevani

Atul and Anjali are heading to meet Dr.Kirti because they were asked to meet her early to discuss their arguments. They glared at each other as they left. Sapna is already on duty in the children's ward. Ridhima and Armaan's duty didn't start for another half hour. They are in the locker room and Armaan is thinking about Ridhima playing basketball.

'I shouldn't be thinking this! It's wrong! I'm already seeing Tina. or was it Mina? Whoever, I'm seeing someone! It's wrong!' he thought.'But it's not like a really like Hina, or Nina... she's just a past time!'

'Hey Armaan, wanna go to the cafe?' asked Ridhima walking up to him and while placing the stethoscope around her neck.

'Sure!' he said, a goofy smiling creeping across his face.

They head to the cafe, but Ridhima and Armaan get a pager! There had been an accident involving four men, two of them drunk, and a young girl. The accident happen because the girl, Pia and a guy, Mohan, were running away. The girl and guy were in one car and their was also a friend of theirs, Vivek. He was drinking and drving. There other friends were also coming in another car. The driver, Rocky, was drunk and the other, Rishi, had a beer bottle he was opening. The car Pia, Mohan and Vivek were in had come to a sudden halt at a red light. Rocky doesn't stop and their cars skid and both crash into a tree. Each of the interns are given a person to handle.

Vivek has serious injuries because he had flown into the front mirror and had lost a lot of blood. Ridhima had to handle him.

Pia has the least injuries because she had been sitting in the back with her seatbelt. She was given to Anjali to handle.

Mohan had a deep slash across his right arm and a deep cut on his left cheek and their was glass bits stuck in his right leg. Armaan had to handle him. After Vivek, he was the most serious because he hadn't opened his eyes since the accident but had a light pulse and was still breathing.

Sapna is asked to handle Rishi because he was hit on the head by the dashboard.

Rocky is handle by Atul. He hit his head on the dashboard. There is blood coming out his mouth and broken a couple of teeth. And has a deep cut across his left should and seems to have a minor fracture in his right arm.

All the interns are filling out forms looking tensed. Giving fearful glances to each other....

A while later...
Ridhima has blood smeared against her forehead because Vivek's bleeding wasn't stopping. Armaan went up to her with a wet cloth and handed it to her who didn't understand. So he held face and wiped it for her. There faces were quite close and both had an unusual feeling, but Armaan was feeling stranger than Ridhima. Mohan had been giving an oxygen tank and it had helped. The others were doing fine. They had been dressed and were prescribed bedrest.

Armaan, Atul, Anjali and Sapna are in the locker room. It had been about an hour and a half since the emergency case. All there patients were stable but serious. Dr.Kirti had allowed them a fifteen minute break. She was checking over all the reports.

Armaan closes his eye but opens them. Everyone was there except Ridhima. He decided to go and look, and while doing so he noticed that Atul and Anjali actually smiled at each other.

Ridhima is attaching another blood bottle to Vivek. Who is gaining consiousness. Ridhima smiles and he smiles back.

'Mein kahan hoon?' were his first words after gaining consiouness.

'You are in Saanjeevani. I am your doctor. Dr.Ridhima Gupta. And please don't speak, you are very weak. You have lost lots of blood and need complete rest!' she replied, relieved. He didn't need anymore blood, this was his 9th bottle, and there was one more for him, which she was quite sure wasn't needed.

'Hello Dr.Ridhima! How is your patient Vivek?' came Armaan smiling. Ridhima had been tense since the pager and this was the first time she had smiled since.

'Fine, Fine!' she replied checking his reports.

'Dr.Armaan!' came Dr.Kirti's voice from Mohan's bed.

Armaan hurried away.

Ridhima turned to Vivek,' Well, I have to go and give your reports to Dr.Kirti and I'll be seeing you. This nurse will be taking care of you for the time being! I will be back to check on you in a while.' While saying so she had nodded to an elderly looking nurse who was smiling evilly.

Vivek gulped and grabbed Ridhima's hand as she left! He wanted to the hot Doc to look after him, not the evil nurse!

Ridhima turned around startled. She gave him a questioning look.

'Please don't go!' he said...(I dont know how to explain his tone, let's just say its not Armaan type when he was a patient but totally opposite...sort of sickly!)

Ridhima glared at him and said through clenched teeth 'I have to go!' She tried to make him leave her hand but he held tighter.

Just then Armaan walked in and held Vivek's hand who instantly let go. Ridhima stared at Armaan thankfully but for the first time noticed how he was so different. He had the power to protect her without saying a word.

'Please, this is a hospital and we don't treat anyone so cheaply here! UNDERSTAND?' he said in what was supposed to be a kind voice, but failed in hiding his anger! He led Ridhima away while throwing a disgusted look at Vivek.

'This is gonne be hard, but I'll get my way on her!' Vivek thought.

Ridhima and Armaan are walking in the corridor in silence. Ridhima broke the silence. 'Thanks Armaan!' she gave him a light kiss on his cheek sending shivers down his spine. He stayed glued to the spot while she went to meet Dhoni who had been shifted to the Children's ward....

Ridhima meets Sapna there who looks glum.

'What happened?' Ridhima asked.
'I can't come to the camp tomorrow because my mom said I have to take my rickshawala with me, but I said I can't!' she answered with a melancholy tone...
'I have an idea! I can fix it for you!' replied Ridhima.

Thats it guys.
please comment...srry for the delay.

*Armaan* 😳

Part 9- pg 12

Edited by *Armaan* - 17 years ago
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great... pl post the next part soon....
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Posted: 17 years ago
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gr8 part yar...
continue soon... i so wish to see wat vivek do...
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Posted: 17 years ago
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after todays epi, this really cheered me up! i dont know if ridz is playing a prank in the show about vivek or not, but i just hate this guy! what a slime ball! our hero armaan steps in to save his lady! soooo sweet! thanks fo rupdating, continue soon!
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hey just caught up with your ff and guess what i loved it. it is a really good idea.
conrinues soon
❤️khusi
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Thanks everyone for all the comments! Loved them and if I'm not mistaken there are many new readers! 😳 Thank you all for reading!!

Originally posted by: dilsen1

great... pl post the next part soon....

dilsen1, I am continuing the next part soon, just have to type it up! And I'm sorry I don't know your real name!😳

Originally posted by: $h!V@n!

gr8 part yar...
continue soon... i so wish to see wat vivek do...

thanks Shivani (is that your real name! if its not...srry) vivek will do something and it will bring a twist into the show and thanks yaar for the compliment!😛

Originally posted by: Robin_M

after todays epi, this really cheered me up! i dont know if ridz is playing a prank in the show about vivek or not, but i just hate this guy! what a slime ball! our hero armaan steps in to save his lady! soooo sweet! thanks fo rupdating, continue soon!

Awwwwwwwww, so sweet when I read your comment, I thought...yah! I brightened up someone's mood! And Armaan will have to be ready to save Ridhima some more!! But first he has to save himself...from his Girlfriend right! He can't even rememebr her name...😃

Originally posted by: Teogapi

gr8 part continue soon

thanks Teogapi (is that your real name? 😛) and will continue asap.

Originally posted by: .:.MONA.:.

hey just caught up with your ff and guess what i loved it. it is a really good idea.
conrinues soon
❤️khusi

Thanks khusi and you really are very kind! Thanks a ton and will continue asap.

Originally posted by: pwincess kanzi

really gd contd soon.... 😛

Thanks pwincess kanzi (sorry dont know your real name! 😛) and will continue asap...and please keep reading!

thanks Afifa and thanks even more for the name!! It really is super nice! This is for you .....🤗....👏👏

thanks guys love

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Part 9- Basketball...the beginning

'One minute!' said Ridhima and she took out her cellphone and dialed Sapna's house number. She took her dupatta and covered her mouth so her voice was disguised.

'Hellooooo!' came Sapna's mum's voice on the phone.
'Ji mein doctor Kirti bol rahi hoon aur mujhe patha karna tha agar Sapna kaal camp pe ja rahi hai?' replied Ridhima in an imitation of Dr.Kirti's voice.

Armaan walked by the children's ward. He noticed Ridhima's queer bahiviour and walked in. He stood near Dhoni's bed and listened. Dhoni was busy sleeping. He had been given medicine to sleep...he was having trouble sleeping.

'Jee voh nahi ja rahi kyunki maine mana kar diya!' replied Sapna's mum.

'Kya? Par kyun?' said Ridhima shocked at her own imitation.

'Kyunki uska ricksha wala nayi ja rahe!' replied Sapna's mum furiously.

'kya kah rahe hain aap? Aapko patha nayi agar Sapna nayi gayi toh phir voh qualified doctor nayi ban sakti. Agar woh qualified doctor nayi bani toh koyi ladka uske saath shaadi nayi karega aur agar is ki shaadi nayi hoyi toh phir voh saara din ghar par rahe gi aur yeh saab aapki ek na ki wajah ho gi! replied Ridhima knowing this would guarantee a yes from Sapna's mom.

'Teek hai, teek hai voh ja rahi hai!' Sapna's mum said, a bit scared.

'Great, ab yeh doctor ban jayi gi aur uski shaadi bhi hogi sirf aapki wajah se!' said Ridhima proud of herself.She turned the phone of and told Sapna the good news.

Armaan walked over and said, 'Dr.Ridhima aap itni baadi..baadi dokhebaazi (Falseness) kar sakti hain, mujhe nayi patha tha!' said Armaan surpressing his laughter and giving a solemn look.

'Voh Armaan...' Ridhima began but ws cut off by Sapna.

'Usne yeh mera liya kiya, please Dr.Kirti ko maath bathana!' said Sapna pleadingly.

'Oh alright!' he said, a bit dissappointed. 'Par...(his voice lit up suddenly)...meri ek shart hai!' he said.

'Kya?' they both said shocked and inquiring at the same time!

Just then Sapna's pager rung and she left.

Armaan continued,' Tumko mere...(he thought)...mere saath..ek basketball match khelna pardega aaj raat ko? Manzoor?'

'Of course!' she stuck out her hand to finilaize the deal and he grasped it. Ridhima looked at her cellphone to check the time.

It was her break time! 'Cafe chale?' she asked Armaan who was still holding her hand with his goofy smile. He didn't answer.

'Armaan,' she said again. No answer.
'ARMAAN!' she repeated annoyed.
He instantly let go and said, 'Yes?'

'Cafe chale?' she asked again, arms folded her weight on her left foot while tapping her right foot. She looked so cute.

'Sure!' he said and followed her.

In the cafe...

Armaan and Ridhima are sitting in the cafe.

'What time is the match?' she asked Armaan who was just about to dig into his sandwich.

'How bout 6:30 tonight?' he asked looked up.

'Okay, I'll just tell Di...!' she started.

'Don't tell her your meeting me!' Armaan suddenly said.

'And why not?' Ridhima asked.

'I don't want her to find out that you can beat me at basketball!' he quickly answered.

'Okaayy!' she said thinking whatever.

'I just don't want my Basketball rep to go down! It's just that your the first girl I ever lost...first person really!' he replied hoping it would make up for his idiocy.

'Well, if your competition is little kids than obviously you have no chance of loosing!' she said giggling.

'Well, those kids are really good and tiny. They just slip through my legs!' he said pretending to sound offended and faking a sniffle.

They looked at each other and burst out laughing.

'Guess what!?!' Armaan said suddenly.

'What?' asked Ridhima curiously.

'You know how Angie and Champ are always fighting?' he said.

'Hmmm!' replied Ridhima sipping her coffee.

'Well today they actually smiled at each other!' he said watching Ridhima carefully.

'What!' she cried, all her coffee flying from her mouth and landing on Armaan' face.

'Oh, I'm so sorry!' and she passed him a tissue. He began cleaning it.

He asked Ridhima if he'd cleaned it all up. She shook her head as no.

And pointed to the spot. He didn't understand so she took the tissue and went around him...close to him. She began wiping his face. He closed his eyes. She finished and went back to her seat.

'I'm so sorry but are you sure they smiled...at each other?' asked Ridhima stunned.

'Hmm!' replied Armaan opening his eyes, but his smile still in place. 'I'm 110% sure they did!'

'Wow! I wonder what DR.Kirti said to them!' repledi Ridhima thinking.

At 6:15 pm...

All the interns are in the locker room.

'Di, aaj aap chale jaana. Mein baad mein khud ajaongi,' Ridhima said nervously to Anjali...she couldn't lie to Anjali, it wasn't easy.

'Teek hai, par kyun?' said Anjali.

'Kyunki..woh..mujhe ummmm....Dhoni se milna hai. Pura din mili nayi!' said Ridhima.

'Teek hai!' Lekin bahot daar maat karna, dad wait kar rahe honge!' said Anjali heading out.

'Great joB, Basket. Tum itna acha jhoot bol sakti ho mujhe nayi patha tha!'said Armaan.

'Shut up, Armaan! Maine pehli baar Di se jhoot bola hai!' said Ridhima.

'Whatever, shall we go and he extended his arm out to Ridhima who just walked right in front of him leaving him there with him and his arm. He recovered fast and followed her.

He led her to his car and opened the door. But before he let her in, he said,' Please be careful with this car. She is my life and I can't afford her to break so please sit in it gently.' And then he turned to his car and patted it while saying,' Main jaante hoon ki tum isko batana (sit) nayi chathi lekin mere liya kar sakthi ho na. Mujhe isko Basketball mein harana(loose) hai!

He moved and Ridhima sat in.

At the basketball court...

Ridhima has the ball she is dribbling, shoots and scores. Score is 3-0. It's five minutes into the game. Armaan is in posession and he's dribbling. Ridhima steals the ball and runs to her net and scores. 4-0.
Armaan has the ball dribbles fakes a shot that Ridhima doesn't fall for. She steals the ball, and is about to run to the other basket when she feels a tug on her dupatta and turns. She's holding the ball and sees Armaan is pulling at it. He comes closer and closer to her until there faces are less than an inch apart.

'This is game point, if you score you win. But thing is you can't dribble because it'll be double dribble. So shoot from here and miss or dribble and let the ball be in my posession! By the way if you get the basket, then you'll name will be in history!' said Armaan whispering and his hot breath pushing against Ridhima's cold face.

What do you think is gonna happen.

Thats it for now guys.

*Armaan* 😳

Sneak Peek- pg 12

Edited by *Armaan* - 17 years ago
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wow!!!

nice partt!! 👏
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Sneak preview...

Armaan let go of Ridhima's dupatta and she dribbled the ball to her basket and shoots...scores. Armaan shouts out, 'Hey!' and runs after her. It was his ball and that score did not just count. He's running after her and is less than a foot away from her when he tripped over a large stone lying hidden in the darkness on the court. He bumped into Ridhima who fell and he lost his balance. Armaan landed right on top of Ridhima. They stared into each other's eyes, both getting lost in the depth. Ridhima moved her hand toward his face and he came closer, closer their faces less than an inch away. She touched it thinking if this was all real. He stared at her and wanted to know if it was all real. Both of them didn't have any answers. They felt so close to each other and had known each other for less than a week...

It began to pour and Ridhima instantly removed her hand from his face and he got up. He put out a hand for her. She held it and what they both felt could only be described as a shock for both of them.One that felt good but different. What did this mean. Armaan comes close to Ridhima Takes his jacket off and wraps it around. He was looking so hot in that white t-shirt that was so wet and his muscles were outlined in it. White!?! She was wearing a white suit. Oh she was so thankful for him for putting his jacket around her. She began to shiver and he put his arm around her shoulder. She looked up at him and noticed...

this was a short part cause i am bored and noticed I wasn't getting many replies...so this is basically as a preview..

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Part 10- pg 14

Edited by *Armaan* - 17 years ago

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