KAISI HAI YEH PAHELI [ARSH]

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hhhiii guyzzz...I dont know guyz what m I doing here again...seriously I should study...n look Here m again writing a new story...M so so so so addicted to IF now a days...lol...but on a serious note yeh storyere mind main bht pehle se thi...n I thought to pen it down...I Have one more ff called yaadein which is again a Arsh ff...which I started in jan...but before yaadein I had this concept in mind...but whatever...here m writing this story...hope u all accept me this story...will wait for the response...
Note-this story may contain some violence...so if u are comfortable
...den only u read...but I assure u thre wont be much...



prologue

'plzz sahir...mat maaro mujhe...meri koi galti nhi hai...maine kuch galat nhi liya...aaahhh...plzzz...no no...I beg u...plz...' Shilpa begged her husband while crying bitterly...who was showing no mercy on her...and dragging her harshly by stairs while pulling her hairs in a tight grip...

'tujhe chor doon main...kyu...taaki tu firse us aadmi ke saath...chi...kausi aurat hai tu...apne pati ke hote hue...kisi aur mard ke saath nazaayaz rishta banate hue tujhe sharam nhi ati hai...ghin ati hai mujhe tujhse...'Sahir Shilpa's husband spitted venomously...

'nhi sahir tum galat samajh rahe ho...mera yakeen karo...wo mera colleague h...' before she could complete her sentence...Sahir slapped her with such a force she fall off the stairs...

Shilpa's got many scratches on her body and her forehead was continously bleeding...but does someone care...no...there was absolutely no one for her...or who can stand for...
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this story is pov of a women who fights against all odds of the society shading her inhabitation..
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tadaaa
here I finish my prologue...this story may contain some parts which are not suitable for under 18...so kids stay away...and Armaan pov will also will be shown but slowly in theupcoming parts...characters sketch will be given if u guys want...do mentionim ur cmnts...

and If u want me to conti...plz like this post...
the updates will not be regular untill May...so plz bear with it...and also srnd me the buddy req if u want pm...m
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29priya thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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GUYS I will update this ff...only after I get good response...
so if u want me to continue...U need to cmnt and like my first post...
Edited by pri.29793 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I love arsh...and waiting to read more...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Please update karo jaldi...and do pm me the next part
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Posted: 10 years ago
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So its about domestic violence...?
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Posted: 10 years ago
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interesting concept do continue soon nd plz give me the update too
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Posted: 10 years ago
#7
Wow...
A new ff on arsh...
It's awesome and mind blowing start...
Prologue seems interesting...
It's about domestic violence...
Arghhh shilpa husband...
He is such a low mentality...
Do continue soon...
And thanks for the pm...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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interesting concept do cont soon n add me to ur pm list 😊

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