#2| ArSh FF: Colossal Wounds |Chapter 5 to Epilogue| *Completed* - Page 2

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Posted: 11 years ago
#11
Armaan Malik... I love you

This story is totally not what I had expected from you



Cause it was way better than what I had anticipated


I loved how Armaan took the address and went to Shilpa's home

The flashbacks were amazing... Shilpa and Armaan surely seem to have been really close

I wonder wat had happened with Shilpa

I am loving this totally

Please update soon ❤️

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Posted: 11 years ago
#12

This update just left me gaping... It shook me totally... So much of depth in their relationship... Gosh... I am like wow... This was the best update so far... A lot happened in this chapter... Every scene showed how close they had been... Beautifully written...



"I'll miss you Ammy!", she whispered and snuggled into his chest.

"I'll not miss you!", he replied.

She broke away the hug and punched him on his chest.

"Arey.. You'll not go away from my thoughts so how would ever miss you idiot?", he asked.


The flashback was just so cute... It clearly showed that they were such good friends at some point of time... Armaan and Shilpa were surely inseparable

She made him stand against the wall and unbuttoned his t-shirt and gently removed it. She took a soft towel and wiped his chest and shoulders. Her left palm stayed on his abs. He groaned and started to get unconscious again and was about to fall as she held him. his face was buried in her neck. Her hands travelled down to his jeans. She unbuttoned them as her breathing got heavy. His warm breathe fanned her neck.

Hot... Passionate... Romantic... Yet no such feelings harboured by them... This part was sheer brilliance

"Shona.. I wanna talk to you, please don't push me away!", he mumbled.

"Sleep.", she ordered.

"Please Shona!", he pleaded in a weak voice and hid his face in her tummy and wrapped his bare arms around her petite waist.

"Armaan.. you're cold. Please sleep.", she requested.

His grip on her waist tightened.

"Please tell me what happened Shona? How did we drift so far away?", he asked with a quivering voice.


Exactly my point... They were so close... They had a perfect understanding... They knew each other like no one else did... Yet they drifted away... I wonder what went wrong... the plot is keeping me glued


"They're Dead Armaan. Now since I have answered your question, please leave me. I need to hit the bed and wake up early tomorrow.", she said in a stern voice.

Armaan was taken aback with the shocking news.


Oh my god... Shilpa must have been broken... Armaan didn't know... This is really bad... No wonder she is being so cold


"Bilkul nahi badla.", she thought as she smirked lovingly then stiffened. He had changed a lot.

"Badal gaya hai.. Mujhe Armaan ko waapas laana hi hoga. Usse uski galatiya dikhaani hongi.", she thought to herself.


Armaan has changed but some things haven't which Shilpa couldn't help noticing... These lines were the star of the update... I could actually imagine Shilpa in this scene



"I'll have to be normal to him. I can't be formal with him after tonight. Not so easily though. He has to open himself to me before he finds his old Shona in me.", she smiled determined to make things alright as she closed her eyes and drifted to slumber.

Yay... At least they will talk properly... fingers crossed

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Posted: 11 years ago
#13
This was super cute

I loved every part of it

and Mohabbatein ki meri favourite line hai which you took

I loved the Armaan-Ridhima showdown

Feeling bad for Sid though

Armaan-Shilpa scenes were just fantastic

Armaan is so strict with Yuvi which is not like him though


I wanted to quote my fav lines but couldn't as all scenes were superb

Ammy-Shona gonna stay next doors... really excited for this

Your update made me realised how much Armaan's character had changed in the story and Ridhima loved this changed guy but Shilpa loves Ammy (friendship wala love)


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Posted: 11 years ago
#14
Now I'm done consolidating my comments! 😛

Now listening "Asmani Rang Ho!" ❤️

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Posted: 11 years ago
#15
Mine <3
Unres

Loved how Shilpa cared for him when he was tell her his dukh bhari kahani... 😳

Hahaaha you know.. I had fun reading Armaan fire back at ridhimma siding with Shilpa...

I can't believe.. Riddhima still trying to impose her invalid rights on him.. 😡

Armaan's memory of his time with Shilpa... And the confusion he had then if she was his true love or true friend...

He seems to have got his answer now... 😳

Awww... Loved how he dragged her to clear his confusion.. Their chemistry is tooo Hot!! ☺️

Yeesh!! Riddhima need to reign in her craziness.. Why is she bursting over Shilpa and showing her non-existent right on Armaan.. 😡

Loved Shilpa's retort to her.. and Armaan pops in clearly asking riddhima to stay away from Shilpa and his matter... 😉😆

Shilpa too loves Armaan.. She always had... 😳

Wow!! Armaan getting into action right away... 😆

I don't blame Shilpa for asking if she was Armaan's rebound...

Any sane woman would feel so.. When he was mourning his lost love the previous day and next day he ends up with another in bed almost about to make out with her..

Waiting to know what Shilpa does to console him or does he try to prove her wrong... 😳

Update soon.. 😃
Edited by Divya.S.R - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#16
Pehle toh meri darling babbla goom..congo-shongo for your naya wala dhaaga..may you have many more such dhaagas in the future..and may you keep writing such beyosome fics and chappys on ArSh..never forget that you are awesome and I laaabh youuu!!!!!!! ❤️🤗 😆 ❤️
Edited by OindrilaVirgoan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#17
Now coming to the chappy..what is Riddhima's goddamned problem!! Khud kehti hai usse ki its hight time he moves on and now that he is actually moving on in the true sense of the term, toh fir usse khujli kahe ko ho rahi hai (very sorry for the dehaati-mawaali term but I cant find a word more apt for what she's actually doing) Good that both Armaan and Shilpa told her off and showed her real 'ahmiyat' in their lives..!!

I loooved ArSh moments..I did ask you whether there wil lbe ArSh moments bharpur or not and your 'full-on' wala reply didn't disappoint..and oh poor baybee Armaan cant help it but be jealous even for a few seconds when he hears that she's with Yuvi in the cafeteria, laughing with him and JP..and he literally drags her along!! All their moments were beautifully described..oh they are so totally in love with each other that I have happy tears in my eyes..! But the icing on the cake was the last part..oooh things are heating up between them and quite rapidly at that ☺️ and oh dear tey are gonna live together..iska matlab many more such hawtness wale moments..yayyy yayyy happy dance Rolicking update Mriii..but you really are a maha-tease 😆
Edited by OindrilaVirgoan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#18
hey a big congo for new thread dear 😳 😃
updatesoon plz
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Posted: 11 years ago
#19
Res
Unres---
First
For new thread...
And wow...
Wow dear...
It's awesome, blossom, amazing, fantastic, fabulous, super duper, blockbuster, rocking outstanding, freaking, breathtaking and mind blowing update...
Just loved it...
The whole chapter is superb...
You wrote each and everything beautifully..
Do continue soon..
And thanks for the pm..
Edited by ll_megha_ll - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#20
Wow Ammy and Shona is in love. Ammy confessed to her. That bitch Riddhima 😡
I want to give her one tight slap 😡

M update the next part soon :)

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