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Posted: 11 years ago
#11
Omg atul beats anjali in this
I loved the first part
Curious to know further
continue soon

Armaan r riddhima ka age difference boht zyada h is this ff related to early marriage

Plz accept my buddy request for pms
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Posted: 11 years ago
#12
i am glad u r continuing it
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Posted: 11 years ago
#13
You know it's one of my favourite FF
And I was so disappointed when u thought that theat you won't continue with such an amazing story
Seriously it's a mater piece
I really like this arrange marriage wala stuff and all
Please continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#14
omg this is so different...
I m looking forwards a lottt to the coming parts hehehe...
thanks u so much for telling me about ur FF...
I will surely follow it and let me know whenever u update dear...
take care...
Love the beginning... Muwaahhh <3
continue super duper sooon :D
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Posted: 11 years ago
#15

Originally posted by: armaanriddima

yes u will have to continue

thume pata bhi hai ki kitni bar mene thumara yeh ff bar bar padha hai

mene isko 1 st part se grow hote dekha hai

mene anjali ke riste ko dar se pyaar ki taraf jate dekha hai

armaan ridhima ke ristey ki suruvat dekhi hai
mene unko trust se pyaar ki taraf dekha hai

ab mhuje pyaar ka tofa dekhna hai ab mhuje unka pura rista dekhna hai ab mhuje har vo chezz dekhni hai jo jarori hai


kafi senti ho gaya na ... anyways continue soon i really realllyyy realllyyy want u to continue


awww
yeah thod senti ho gya
but glad to knw kii ko itna pasand hai ye ff
coz mujhe khud is ff mai thoda doubt hota hai
dnt nw achi story kii ko aegi ya nhi
reader k expectations mai utar paungi ya nhi..coz till the end ridz is not going to call him by his name...n i dt knw ye cheez kisi ko achi lagegi ya nhi
ab a sochenge is zamane mi aisa thodi hota hai...but the truth is hota hai
maine khud dekha hai
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Posted: 11 years ago
#16

Originally posted by: anishaalluri

finally ur back with this ff again..

im eagerly waiting to read the new parts so plzzz do that asap

Love


yeah after posting all the parts again
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Posted: 11 years ago
#17

Originally posted by: -Haju-

You know it's one of my favourite FF

And I was so disappointed when u thought that theat you won't continue with such an amazing story
Seriously it's a mater piece
I really like this arrange marriage wala stuff and all
Please continue soon


aww glad to knw u loved this story
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Posted: 11 years ago
#18

Originally posted by: RihooHaws

omg this is so different...

I m looking forwards a lottt to the coming parts hehehe...
thanks u so much for telling me about ur FF...
I will surely follow it and let me know whenever u update dear...
take care...
Love the beginning... Muwaahhh <3
continue super duper sooon :D


thank u o much di
m glad u liked it
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Posted: 11 years ago
#19
Part 2

Armaan is sitting in the mandap and pandit chating the mantras...and then he anounce...
Pandit :kanya ko bulaiye...
(and then padma signals muskaan to bring riddhima dowm)
In Riddhima's room...
After anjali doing her make up goes towards riddhima and lifts her veil...and found riddhima in watery eyes...

Anjali :heyy tujhe kya hua...

Riddhima :di main aap logo ko bohot miss karungi...

Anjali :hum bhi tujhe bohot miss karenge ridhzi...(and they hugs each other...)...dekh ab tu ro mat tera saara makeup kharab ho jaayega.

Muskaan open the door of riddhima's room and found riddhima and anjali hug each other...

Muskaan :are ye kya baat hoti hai...ap log mujhe bhul gye...mujhe bhi hog chaiye...

An & Ri :aaja...(and then trio hug eachother)...

Muskaan :chalo ab ye rona dhona band karo...aur jaldi chalo muhrat ka waqt ho gya hai aur panditji ridzi ko bula rhe hai..

Anjali :hmmm chalo...

and then they help riddhima to stand and goes towards the stairs...her face is covered with long veil but some glimpse of her face seen through the veil...they step downwards and anjali and muskaan are on the each side of riddhima and help her to balance with heavy lehnga...Armaan back face riddhima so he unable to see riddhima then they reach the mandap and riddhima settle down on her seat...and pandit again started chanting mantra after some more mantas

Pandit :var vadhu jai mala k liye khade ho jaiye...after the var mala and some more mantra,pheras,kanya daan,vows,filling vermillion in her maang and tied mangalsutra...they got finally married...and then after the wishes from all the elder and friends they eat dinner...and then the bidaai time arrived...and her daai and ma instructed her do or not to do's and the responsibility of daughter in law and after some rona dhona they sat on the car and leave for the Malik Mansion...the drive is go in full silence...some kind of awarkedness are between them...and riddhima is hell nervous for her new life...

After some minutes they reach Malik masnsion...first armaan come outside the car...then he come towards the riddhima side...and offer his hand for help and she nervously accepted and come outside the car...while holding eachother hand they feel some current running through their body...

At entrence...Ananya welcomes AR with pooja ki thaali and then riddhima lightly kicks the kalash full of rice..and then she keeps her foot in red colour water...while keeping the foot in red water riddhima not balance her properly but armaan hold her from shoulder...and help her to balance properly and then she take out her feet from red water and walk with colour feet and left her foot print on the way from enterence to pooja ghar...All family member and AR settle down in the pooja ghar...and Armaan's Dadi who is the head of the family...strats the after marriage ritulas...

savitri :nayi bahu(riddhima)bahuo ko annapurana kaha jaata hai...isliye pehle tum is chakki ki pooja karke annapurna mata ka aashiwad lekar ismain 5 baar gheu daal kar pissogi...

(riddhima follows the dadi's instruction but its bit difficult for riddhima to do such a task with her soft hands)

Savitri :chalo ye rasam bahu ne ache se puri kari...ab ananya bahu...Armaan aur nayi bahu ko dusri rasam k bare main batao

Ananya :ji maa ji...tum dono ki kalayi par jo kalawa banda hai tumhe use kholna hai...donoko ek samay par aur ek saath kholna hai aur jo kalawa sabse pehle kholega wo tum dono ki grhasti k saare faisle lega...chalo ab dono ek dusre ko apna baya(left) haath do aur apne daye(right) haath se kalawa kholo...

Both try to unknot the kalawa fast and atlast armaan wins

Now the next ritual is finding ring from the large bowl of milk...they played 3 rounds...in 1st roung armaan wins...in 2nd riddhima and in 3rd again armaan...

Billy :are maa ananya...ab bacho ko unke kamre main jaane doo thak gye hai dono...

Savitri :ha ab koi rasam bhi nhi bachi jo rasam hogi ab subha hi...nikki jaa apne bhai aur bhabhi ko unke kamre tak chod k aa..

Nikki :ji dadi...chaliye bhabhi...

Savitri :badi bahu ruko...(she turns towards dadi)...apna chehra mooh dikhayi se pehle tum kisi ko nhi dikhaogi...sirf apne pati ko chod k thike..(riddhima nodes)...armaan tu ruk tu thodi der baad jaiyo...

while going towards the AR room...

Nikki :bhabhi wo aapko rasam toh pata hai na...bhai ko jab tak apna ghoonghat uthane mat dena jab tak wo aapne haato main se apna naam na dhund le...(riddhima nods)...(and then they reach to the AR room...Nikki opens the door...the room is beautifuuly decorated with red roses...al over the room...they reach towards the bed...and niiki helps riiddhimsa to seat properly on the bed)

Nikki :bhabhi ab main chalti hoon aur aapke pati dev ko bhejti hoon...(she giggles...and ridz blushes and then nikki leaves)...(riddhima is hell nervous but she decided to surrender herself to her husband from all ways)(and then the door click opens and armaan enters the rooms...his eyes travels all around the room and then stop on the bed where his wife is sitting like a typical indian bride and waiting for her husband)

Riddhima was sitting in the middle of the canopy bed which has maroon and white drapes over the bed, with silky maroon satin bed sheets . There are rose petals tossed all over the floor and on the bed. Soft music plays in the background as a gentle breeze passes through from the open window,her heart thudded rapidly as she heard the door click open...

Armaan entered the room and was amazed seeing it beautifully decorated with flowers and glowing with scented candle's, his eyes stopped towards the bed ... there in the middle of the bed was sitting Ridhima, his bride with her face covered with veil ...then he took slow steps towards the bed...

Ridhima's heart beat rose as he neared her ... Armaan sat infront of her and slowly reached towards her dupatta and holding his breath carefully lifted it... he slowly uncovered her slightly parted lips and than her lowered eyes...and in her nervousness she totally forgot about the rasam nikki told...Armaan are dumbfounded to saw the beauty sat infront of her...yes he seen her many times but after marriage...he seen her first time not after marriage...he seen her after two days...and as his wife...he only utter a single word "beautiful"...and riddhima blush hard...to hear the comment from her husband's mouth...

removing the dupatta over her head...he tilted her chin making her look at him...Ridhima looked into his deep blue eyes

Armaan :You're beautiful Ridhima...she again lowered her gaze with shyness...riddhima in san rasmon riwazon ki wajha se kabhi hum shaddi se pehle mil nhi paaye...aur na hi hum ek dusre ko ache se jaante hain...aur jab tum cahaigi...jab hi hum apne rishte ko aage badayenge...(he get up from the bed...when riddhima hold his wrist and armaan again sat on the bed...armaan know she's ready but want to gave her time to adjust in the new enviournment properly...

Armaan :tumhe kuch kehna hai...

Riddhima :wo wo...aap main...wo main kehna chahti...(she fumbles with her words...Its embaressing situation for her...to say by herself...she not knows how to say her husband that she have no problem with this relation...and want to beacame his...but armaan understand her silence...and her unspoken words...

Armaan :riddhima main jaanta hoon tum kya kehna cahati ho...aur agar tum ye sirf tumhari maa aur dadi ki sikhai seekh ki wajha se keh rhi ho...(and she immediately said no and lowered her eyes with shynes and smiles...armaan also smiles with her act)

he grazing her cheeks with back of his hand... She blushed crimson red and her eyes lowered. It was only his hand on her chin that made her meet his gaze once more.she gulped and took a deep breath when she saw him looking at her intensely... his gaze dropped on to her soft lips ,which were soo inviting to him ... feeling his hot breath on her lips she just closed her eyes... lowering his head he placed his lips on hers kissing her passionately...while kissind he unpinned her dupptata and throw on the floor he caressed her back gently, while she moaned in pleasure responding and kissing him back,they broke off the kiss feeling breathless armaan start removing her jewellary nd then clothes and than he himelf come out from his clothes...all the time riddhima is breathing heavily..and then he covered themselves with sheet pressing her against him he groaned as her softness crashed into his muscled chest . His head lowered and captured her lips in a deep kiss ...Armaan's hands traced her waist and cupped & squeezing her bare breasts causing her to moan "ahhh" in pleasure his mouth and hands traced her body, driving her crazy His hands went to her breasts and lightly circled her nipples causing them to harden and ache. As if sensing they needed his attention his mouth moved from her and fastened on a nipple and sucked until she arched her back off the bed and then he moved to the other...then he bit hard causing riddhima whimpered in pain..soon he charged riddhima with hi hot wet kisses and caresses armaan locked her hands with his on pillow and he gently parted her legs kissing her vigrously and soon enough armaan was in her and riddhima winced in pain tears bleeming in her eyes and armaan sucked her tears and he kissed her on her full mouth in order to distract her from pain which he was giving her when soon they reached towards their climax and then Armaan moved out of her and rolled to the side not wanting to crush her with his weight , he settled her against his chest. She fell asleep almost instantly, contentedly.

reviews tym guyz
Edited by Devil_kriti - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Amazing
Over it to core.
The way armaan made her comfortable was too cute
And ending was hot
Please continue soon
Edited by -Haju- - 11 years ago

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