|ArSh TS| Jab We Met ~ *Completed*

Since you said I always use the words flawless and brilliant in my comments so I decided to try something else

I found it Lyrical

Not because of the song but it was musical and what I mean by that is pleasing to read

It was Fluent

Everything was so clearly written

You sure know how to Captivate your readers

After reading this who wouldn't be looking forward to the next part

You can easily Awake Interest in a non-reader as well

You can easily transfer your readers to all altogether different world

Your every word should and it does matter

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Now comming to part 1

Shilpa and Armaan's train journey was so cool

Prem and Nisha were so adorable

The whole song was amazing and delightful

Me reading Harry Potter book was so me

Sabah was there too... Yay

Perfect place to stop part 1

Waiting for the next

Update soon

Luv u loads

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P.s. Didn't use graphics as I wanted to keep my comments simple

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Posting my fav lines here

"Hey Prem! Wats happening? Missing me already!", I asked with a giggle.
"Shut up!", he shrieked.
"You called me at 12.45am, just to say SHUT UP??? Have you lost it?", I asked as I bit a laugh.

"Ok! I just called to.", he said as I cut him off and sang.
"I just called to say. I Love You! And i mean it from the bottom of my heart!", I sang.

"Kya yaar! Na ye baat kar raha hai na hi main baat kar rahi hu! How boring! Par main thodi reserved hoon so i won't start the convo! Can't he speak! I'm so freakin' bored!", I thought to myself.

"We should meet up sometime in Delhi!", he suggested. "Sure!", I replied with a grin adorning my face.

He wrote his number on a paper and gave me. I punched it on my cell and gave him a missed call.

I looked towards the ladkiwaale and found a familiar face. I wasn't able to see him clearly but Nisha bhabhi seemed to be speaking to the guy. I saw him get up and suddenly my friend Mahima came and hugged me. Then she went off to Prem and by then the guy had gone! I'm still trying to see his face which was not visible clearly!

I glanced and saw Mahima sitting quietly in the corner reading her Harry Potter novel all over again for the nth time despite of the loud music. I gave a smile to Armaan and made my way to her and pulled the book out of her hand.

"OMG! Sabah!!!!!", I squealed and quickly removed her hands and flung my arms around her.

prem nd nisha r adorable

shilpa nd armaan's train journey was actually funny yet cute..!

I loved it how u ended d chappy wit shilpa staring at d moon standing alone..!

Nice chappy 👍🏼

d song was simply way too perfct nd suits d chappy perfctly..!

Waiting for d nxt chappy now 😳

that was really sweet :)

So adorable. ..

Bakwaas bi ki toh bohut acchi wali ki...
Nice one haan..:-)