SR OS: The Dust As it Settles, uptd Part 2, p.1 - Page 2

So long I waited for this, you gave me a beautiful gift today.
It was beyond beautiful. I have no words but THANK YOU.

lovely OS 👏
continue soon........

*sigh* Only Neetu could bring me back to reading a SR ff again...........*makes fake angry faces at Neetu*

You know very well how completely captivated I have always been with your writing......this one is no exception.
Only you have this ability of sewing words in such an amazing manner.

And you know what even though this is SR, when i was reading it,I was reminded so much of Adi-Mets...........made me nostalgic yaar.

"How was she alive, when life itself, had just walked away..." - -> Beautiful!!

Neetu this was simply brilliant!!

OMG Neetu!

Hi,

u r brilliant...the u way u r writting its just amazing and touching...thanks fr writing dis os...pls continue soon...

Originally posted by: Pragzie

O-M-G!...this OS is so heart breaking!

neetu di i love the way you write..it's just so amazing..the details ad the descriptions make me feel like i am living the OS!and the way you have described riddhima's pain ..it actually made me feel bad for her!beautiful part.My fav parts:

As she poured herself into these pools today, like every other day, the sadness of her own grief-stricken eyes stared back at her, as if to mock her situation. Every day, despite the anxiety it caused her, she went through this ritual of sorts, gathering herself together for this moment of intimacy that she hoped would one day bring out the meaning of life in her monotonous existence... She had tried every time to relieve that pain from her gaze so that it would not misplace the hope in the midst of the ache

gaze ran across the distance of the sand, silently pleading... all in vain. The water seemed to take everything... the footprints... the sandals... and a part of her she was sure she could not live without. Then how was it that she stood still here, in this moment, watching with blurry eyes, the long figure running... away... With each step, he became smaller... now almost a grain of the sand beneath. Yet, she blinked, furiously, hoping it was all but an illusion. As her eyes re-opened, her knees began to lose their strength, and she crumbled... meeting the dust in the horrible realization that there was nothing else left... nothing, but dust. A lump formed in her throat, while the breaths she took seemed to suddenly suffocate her. How was she alive, when life itself, had just walked away... before her helplessness. She recalled how this came to be... it was her fault.

heart breaking🥺..thnkyou or writing this OS🤗cannot wait for the next part!

Pragzie,

🤗 You're such a sweetheart. Thank you. You know, guilt is the most difficult emotion to convey, but I was hoping I would get across even a sliver it. When I thought of this, it didn't stem from the current track. Even still, I'm not sure if anyone has caught it yet, but this has nothing to do with the current track. It starts from where Armaan returns and Riddhima is in a flux. Anyways, I guess it can still be kind of attributed to the current track, I'll think of it... And don't feel bad hun, things will get better, though I ramble the rondhu-style😆 Dil mat todo jaan-e-mann, iss dil mein mera sara jahan bas ta hai

Originally posted by: sajni786

Breath taking neetuuuuuuuu........

nikammiiiiiiii...........why do u ppl always put such cliffhangers..........cant wait for the next part.......

Shilpu,

Thanks darl'in 🤗 ... as for the cliffhanger, geez girl, if life were that simple... 😳

Originally posted by: sidma_love

Neetu * hugs *
OMG OMG what an OS
Beautifully written
I loved d way u described each & every emotions
And d way u described Ridz pain is just amazing
For d first time I am feeling bad 4 her..
Dis is heartbreaking
But why such a cliffhanger Yaar ???
can't wait 4 d next update
Plzzzzz continue soon.....

Harshu,

🤗 Thanks for the sweetness! Aww, I'm glad people are feeling Ridz. You know I cannot forgive or forget what she has done, but in the end, I've always liked something about her. She is one complex woman!... And cliffhangers are the zest of life😆

Originally posted by: StarshineHues

Neetu !! 🤗

This is so heart-breakingly beautiful, I have no words for the way you write. Honestly. Please update real soon.

Aditi! 🤗 Thanks yaar. Madamji, I came across one of your posts and you're a chupi rustam... Well written letter from Mr. Modi to his sanam bewafa, 👏 As for you "honesty" I cherish... I'll post it later today, promise.

Originally posted by: norzar

hi

thanks for this siddhima OS, its awesome and touching

please continue soon

norzar

Hi Norzar,

Thank you so much for the time and kindness, much appreciated😊

Originally posted by: NehaSehgal

lovely OS..thanks so much for writing it....

its realy touching...cant wait for the next pat.....

Neha,

How sweet, thank you!😊 I appreciate your tolerance😉

Originally posted by: funfan

The way you write is amazing!!! 👏 👏 👏 While reading it I could imagine the scene. Very toughing and heart-wrenching.

Thanks for writing it! 😊

Funfan,

Thank you for reading and commenting, means much😊

Originally posted by: pavs

deep n heartfelt..brilliant os..plz continue

Pavs,

Merci boucoup, 😊

Originally posted by: MagicalKash

OMG. The whole part was breath- taking and dream like . You really had cast a spell on me with the way of your writing.. It was heart-achingly beautiful.
Continue soon.

Parul! Gosh its been a while we've heard from you 🤗 Hope you're doing well. As for my rambling, you ppl are way too kind😳I keep hearing about these "heart breaks" guys, I'm no heartbreaker, please stay with me here😆

Originally posted by: kiddo88

Wohhooo brilliant! Like a poem, i could just feel the emotion! Absolutely marvelous piece of writing! 👏

Kiddo (haha, kinda sounds funny to refer to you like that -😳),

I am flattered by your kindness, thank you for the time 😊

Originally posted by: lulu99

So long I waited for this, you gave me a beautiful gift today.
It was beyond beautiful. I have no words but THANK YOU.

Lulu,

"Tatasthu"😃 Lol. You've waited for this? Hmm... have to hand it to you girl, you've got loads of patience!... and please guys, quit thanking me, that's my line😉

Originally posted by: S696

loved it

Thank you 😊

Originally posted by: Wafa_94

Neeta this is amazing !!👏 I love your way of writing. You described everything so beautifully ! It felt like a beautiful illusion. Hats off to you for this piece of work.👏 Update soon.

Hi Wafa,

Thank you for the sweet words, glad you could make sense of my confusion😊 Much appreciated... on a side-note, its Neetu, haha. No worries though!

Originally posted by: sidhima3jsp

lovely OS 👏
continue soon........

Hi there, thank you so much for the time😊

Originally posted by: sidsk

*sigh* Only Neetu could bring me back to reading a SR ff again...........*makes fake angry faces at Neetu*

You know very well how completely captivated I have always been with your writing......this one is no exception.
Only you have this ability of sewing words in such an amazing manner.

And you know what even though this is SR, when i was reading it,I was reminded so much of Adi-Mets...........made me nostalgic yaar.

"How was she alive, when life itself, had just walked away..." - -> Beautiful!!

🤗 Sidddddddddddd!!!...

Haha, one word for you, pagal. 😆😆 Your pagalpan is cherished. I wish I could see more of you, but we run on diff. time zones About your words, as usual, you pass on way more than I deserve. I could say the same stuff about you. I wish you would write more, but I understand life's demands... but I will hope against hope for my own sanity and selfishness😳 ... As for AM, *sighs*🤗

Originally posted by: zeenia

Neetu this was simply brilliant!!

Please dont wait too long to give us the next part!

Zeenu,

🤗 Thanks yaar! I will not make you wait long, promise.

Originally posted by: prejudiced

OMG Neetu!

Awesome! .... I wish we could loan the CVS our wonderful writers!

Please continue.

Anu,

I wish the same, not myself of course... but some of these people, I swear, they have such beautiful imaginations. 🤗

Originally posted by: Ovi_Tanni

Hi,

u r brilliant...the u way u r writting its just amazing and touching...thanks fr writing dis os...pls continue soon...

I am humbled, thank you for the sweetness! 😊


Thank you all for the kind words, I appreciate it!... I will post the next part in a bit.

Cheers,
dc

aaahh dii, it was sooo beautifully written, that i read it twice!

Neetu This is amazing!

OMG You have left me speechless, I could feel the intensity, wow!

Cont soon!