you belong with me (siddhima FF) - Page 2

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Posted: 15 years ago
#11
hey, the first part was really cool.
plz plz plz update soon, i wanna know what happens next between them!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#12
OMG This is awesome
im just happy ki ur writing
thanks all those ppl who request u
ur doing a fab job
in such a small update
u grap my whole attention
plz continue !
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Posted: 15 years ago
#13
My cupid 🤗
dis is awesome 👏 👏
though i already read all d parts 😆 😆
but i want to read dem again...
so plzz update soon..............😉
b/w u deserves to get yelled by me 4 not using d LIKE button
c'mon now press d like button 😆 😉
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Posted: 15 years ago
#14

Originally posted by: hewascool90210

on my friends request i am posting this FF on MF, i usually stay away from writing FF but my friends requested me so i had to do it for them😆
this is after the party scene: you belong with me
as siddhima reached to their penthouse sid got out of the car in a very angery manner, and closed the door with a BANG!! makign ridz jump up, he walk into the house while ridz followed him behind, sid was in a very angery mood now, so ridz called out to him from behind makign sid stop on his track, without turning back, he stood there, all proude and like a roman god, he was on fire for sure, ridz look at his back and very stammering manner akes sid," um si..d, are you okay, the whole time in the party, you were amd at me, did i do something wrong." sid turned around, as he stood there with his hair all messy from the wind, his mascular face, was more handsome now, and the glowing of his eyes, it was like million of diyas, were reflecting into his eyes, but what scared the hell out of those eyes was, that those eyes was not her cute doctor eyes, it was a very differnt man eyes, those eyes had no sympathy,no love,no careness,no boundery, the only things those eyes reflected was pain and angeryness, those big brown chocolate eyes were filled with hatred, and those hatred were only for her and he ronly, a cold shiver ran down her spine now, she was feeling defenseless now, very volurable b/c she knows this side of her cute doctor, and what was coming next it woun't be good at all, she cannot control this sid at all, b/c he was in his sexface mood now, but still she couldn't admire that he was looking mesmerzing in the moonlight, his view was as beautiful as the moonlight, but her dream got distrube as sid started to come toward her, his gaze was burning with angeryness,hot gaze that could even melt a steal, his gaze buring into her skin, and she choked in her breath as sid was two step away from her at this moment it seemed the air stood still and so did ridz breath....

to be contiune.....



I love ur FF bani.
You have alreayd them na , chal pm me whenever you get online.
I am so excited to read this FF.😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
#15

Originally posted by: pinguunique

hey, the first part was really cool.
plz plz plz update soon, i wanna know what happens next between them!!

thank you😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
#16

Originally posted by: kiran255

OMG This is awesome

im just happy ki ur writing
thanks all those ppl who request u
ur doing a fab job
in such a small update
u grap my whole attention
plz continue !

i am happy that my writing has been good enough to grabe your attention and yes i will continue soon.😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
#17

Originally posted by: sidma_love

My cupid 🤗

dis is awesome 👏 👏
though i already read all d parts 😆 😆
but i want to read dem again...
so plzz update soon..............😉
b/w u deserves to get yelled by me 4 not using d LIKE button
c'mon now press d like button 😆 😉

my LG, thank you and yell at, see i am using the like button for now but not always, na na😆
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Posted: 15 years ago
#18

you belong to me part 2: siddhima


as sid stood face to face with his wife ridz, every particle of his skin was alive with fiery tongues of heat, his body was on fire, ready to burst out at any moment now, ridz stood there pale and still,. her skin suddnely got cold, he started to move even more closer to her slowely and surely, determined there would be no mistakes this time, sid spoke up, " mrs.riddhima siddhant modi, oops mr.mali ridz should i say that." ridz raised her head up immeditaly to look inot her cute doctor eyes, unbale to understnad what he was saying, so sid went further, " since you are so busy looking at your ex. in the party, i must say you are really an amazing player, you can make a man turn into molted lava or become a devil from a saint." ridz trying to figure out what sid was saying to her, she seemed very very confused, "sid what are you talking about." BAME!! sid lost his cool and scream at top of his lngs, " REALLY NOW!!, do you think you are that naive, or do you take me for a fool that i will believe you that you have no clue what i am saying, then i should make it very clear now b/c my wife is having hard time understand what i am saying, b/c she never understand me, but she sure understands her ex. oopse her lover (at this point ridz was getting mad for sure) everytime i want to talk about us, you always bring your ex. into our conversation, every time i want to see that you only think about me but i see you only think about your lover, for him you have forgotten the things between US!! screaming in her face, " ridz who am i to you, HU!! who am i to you, a showcase piece or your husband for the name sake, do you even feel anything for me at all or do you think about your armaan when you are with me, is it like this, i stand in front of you but you see the face of your armaan." BAME!! ridz slaped sid acrossed his face, makign sid all suprise and shocked, ridz, " DON"T YOU DARE!! you have insulted my love for you now, you hurt me the most, and today you tainted my every memory of yours and mine, HOW DARE YOU SAY THAT!! HOW!! screaming top of her lungs, I HATE YOU dr.siddhanth modi, I HATE YOU!! she turned to walk away but sid grabed her by the arm and turned her around, making her fall against his heavey chest, both looking at each other with firey gaze, breathing heavely and lost all the control they had...

to be contuine

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Posted: 15 years ago
#19
OMG OMG OMG
THis is soo aweosme
iam falling in luv with ur FF
its super amazing
l'ove sid
gr8 job
thanks 4 pming
looking 4ward 4 next update
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Posted: 15 years ago
#20
Oye hue Fatakkkkkkkkkkkk


but thappar to na marti i cant imagine becharay sid's reaction haha i am do loving it update na yara 😳

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