SR OS-Leaving Assumptions behind- Pt 7 update pg25

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PSharada

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Posted: 15 years ago

#71

Originally posted by: zainab25

Heyyyyyyy. Your one shot is really, really remarkable. I am not going to lie...I am not a reader much (many dislike that), but once I get to reading a piece of fiction and it captivates me then the urge for more is still there. I had begun to read your first part, and I knew it that I would want a second part to it too. 😆 Which you obviously had updated. I want a part 3 to it too soon! Lol. Great depiction of scenes and inner thoughts you laid out, oh and of course the dialogues spoken out were very realistic. I can imagine Siddhanth somewhere down the line being irritated and reminiscing his life back in H-town.

First part was very satisfying because I am sure every SR viewer at some point had wanted that scene, and the mandir scene was very poignant. Wish it could happen in the show too. *sigh* Second part was also satisfying, because I have always enjoyed SR at their intense best....their break down or angst scenes are sort of beautiful. Lol...if that makes any sense, so the tension in the second episode was definitely something that I could picture in my head.

Do write more.

WOW Zainu. Long time I have chatted with you.😃😃😃 How are you doing. Hugs for your very nice comment on my OS🤗🤗. I will update the 3rd part of OS in a day or so. Most of my regular followers have not read the second update yet😭😭😭 so I am kind of waiting for them to catch up. The 3rd part would be up in a day or so.

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Divya

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Posted: 15 years ago

#72

Hey girl (whts ur name)😉😉😉

ur fiction is juz too good buddy👏👏👏..........i really liked d FB idea👍🏼

plz cont soon n PM me 😉😉

vaise thnx 4 PM this time🤗

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Annu

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Posted: 15 years ago

#73

hey part-2 is 2 is sad for all SR fans. we all r waiting for part-3 with happy moment and i hope thier misunderstanding will clear and they start living together once again. plz PM me when u update next part

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PSharada

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Posted: 15 years ago

#74

Originally posted by: divi4u
Hey girl (whts ur name)😉😉😉

ur fiction is juz too good buddy👏👏👏..........i really liked d FB idea👍🏼

plz cont soon n PM me 😉😉

vaise thnx 4 PM this time🤗

Hey my id gives out my name and you still haven't figured it. My name is Sarada. Thanks for commenting. I will post the 3rd part maybe today or tomorrow evening. Enjoy.

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PSharada

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Posted: 15 years ago

#75

Originally posted by: shubham_158
hey part-2 is 2 is sad for all SR fans. we all r waiting for part-3 with happy moment and i hope thier misunderstanding will clear and they start living together once again. plz PM me when u update next part

hey thanks for your comments. I know everyone wants only lovey dovey SR moments but life is not that simple right. And especially with SR the story is going to go with its bumps on the road. So relax and enjoy the ride.

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JATIN THAKKAR

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Posted: 15 years ago

#76

Psarada,😃

Nice Updates but it was Emotional.😉

Next time,Pls solve all the misunderstandings b/w Siddhima.

Hey Sid,Tu ab Indian ho gaya hain.Saale paagal hain kya jo khud ke desh ko gaali de raha hain.😉

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PSharada

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Posted: 15 years ago

#77

Leaving Assumptions behind Part 3

Recap:- So far the flash back was to show Sid's point of view as to what had happened in the last 6 months. This part is flashback of Riddhima which will tell her side of the story. Like they say there are always 2 sides to a coin. So let's see what has happened from Riddhima's point of view.

Ab Aage:-

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Riddhima is sitting in her bed trying to read on her latest medical case but she is hardly concentrating and she knows the reason why. She has been like this whole morning well to tell the truth she has been like this since Sid came to talk to her in her cabin. Riddhima closes her eyes and silent tears which were waiting to fall from her eyes fall down freely as if a gate enclosing them has been opened. She wanted to cry, cry so badly since morning but she just couldn't and now in the peace of the night her tears found an outlet and she let herself cry.

Slowly she got up and went to window to look out at the night sky. This has become a habit of her since she started living with Sid in his penthouse. Sid's penthouse being on the topmost floor had an open balcony and a private terrace and before going to bed, Riddhima loved to relax on the private
terrace looking out at the night sky. Many a times Sid came into the room and found her watching the night sky. He would come and hug her from back and both of them used to watch the night sky together, just talking and relaxing.They used to laugh on things that happened in the hospital and whenever Riddhima saw a shooting star she used to wish that both she and Sid be together forever. Sid used to laugh at her whenever she wished but then it used to touch him so much and once he admitted that he too has started wishing whenever he saw a shooting star.

Riddhima closed her eyes and again tears fell from her eyes. Oh how she missed Sid and how much she wanted Sid to come and hug her from back. She lived a fairytale for the last 6 months one that very few are destined to have.

Riddhima's mind races back through the past 6 months. It was really unbelievable the transformation that took place in her due to Sid. He not only stood by her in her most insane and tough times, he also resuced her from the lows she slipped into after she found out about Armaan. She tried to
take her life because she felt she would never be happy without Armaan by her side, but actually to tell the truth Sid's arrival in her life brought her to a balance. She was so happy when Sid took her back to the penthouse as his wife after all the divorce fiasco and the Lonavala trip happened.

From that day onwards Riddhima never was sad. Sid was such a kid and used to always do some naughty pranks and had this ability to bring laughter to her face. With Sid by her side Riddhima slowly started to be carefree and in matter of few weeks Riddhima became the one she was before. The girl who used to believe in Knight in Shining Armour stories and the one who used to wish whenever she saw a shooting
star in the sky. After all she did find her Knight in Shining Armour in Sid, didn't she. With Sid the house was a mad house but Sid was a man when it came to responsibility. He took over the DO responsibility as fish take to water. Riddhima smiles remembering her Dad's words about Sid's capacity when he told Riddhima that Sid has all that takes to be a efficient taskmaster.

Sid managed both intern job and DO job effortlessly. He was romantic and sweet with her in the house and was a able doctor whenever he assisted her in surgeries. Slowly and steadily Riddhima started to fall deep in love with Sid and even before she herself realized her whole world started and ended on Sid. Armaan became a distant memory for her, a sweet memory but one she no longer wanted for herself. She no longer cried over her fate in Fire Escape but was happy, satisfied and content with her husband whom she started to love more and more as each passing day went by.

Life was like a magical fairy tale for her but alas like the fairy tales which have villians who ruin the love story, her love story also met with a moment which like a villian came between Sid and herself and ruined her life. She remembered the night at the 5 star hotel where Sid took her to celebrate their 6 month anniversary. Everything was a picture perfect. She was happy enjoying her time with the man she loved and the arrangements were perfect, this given Sid's reputation in ruining even the most simple surprise plans. She felt happy that Sid took so much pain and got the arrangements done to celebrate their 6 months together.The thought that most of the Indian men usually forget their wedding anniversaries but Sid remembered their half year anniversary made Riddhima very happy.

Then Sid asked Riddhima to wear the dress for him and come out for a slow dance. Now thinking back, Riddhima felt that she should have worn the dress even for a short time as Sid had gifted it. But at that moment she just couldn't get herself to wear that dress. She refused to wear it and Sid got angry.
And then Sid said the comment which broke her fairy tale.

Riddhima ran from the hotel to their penthouse crying. She still doesn't remember how she came home in a taxi. As soon as she came home she ran to the bedroom, closed the door and flung herself on the bed and cried her heart out. How could Sid say that she must have worn such a dress for anyone before him, How could Sid bring in Armaan in between them. After all wasn't that matter resolved. All Riddhima could think whole night was how could Sid say such a thing to her.She heard the house door open after 1 hr but she still didn't open the bedroom door and didn't go and talk to Sid. Sid went to sleep in the next room. And the next morning Riddhima saw Sid venting out his anger on India and Indians and it hurt her that he regretted his decision to remain in India and marry her.

Riddhima didn't talk at all to Sid after the disastrous morning after their date. But Riddhima could not survive and function without Sid by her side. She waited and actually was little adamant that Sid should come and apologize to her and patch up with her. Slowly the days started to become a burden for Riddhima without Sid by her side in the hospital and in the night she never could feel rested as Sid was not with her. Slowly 1 week passed and it was nearing 2 weeks. Riddhima could no longer take the pain of separation from Sid. Riddhima decided that she should mend the bridges between Sid and herself and if she can say sorry to Sid somehow, Sid would be back with her.

So yesterday when Sid unexpectedly left his locker open Riddhima went to keep a Sorry Card in his locker. Riddhima opened the locker and try to keep a small white teddy bear and a Sorry I hurt you card. Sid being Sid the whole locker was a complete mess and papers were just stuffed in. Riddhima thought of arranging the top most papers and keep her gift on the top and that is when her eyes fell on the
Transfer papers from Stanford Hospital, Santa Clara, US. Anxiously she looked through the papers and they were Transfer papers for Sid to Stanford Hospital and it seems like Sid wanted to move out to Stanford Hospital permanently. Riddhima's whole world started crashing around her(Typical Ekta serial ending with the camera zooming around her).

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Guys don't kill me. Trust me it is a SR OS and you will love the end. But for the time being I hope you will like this part of the OS. If the suspense is killing you then please please comment soon and I will post the next part as soon as I have my readers comments. I hope you liked my writing style. This
part is mainly Riddhima's flashback.

Edited by psarada - 15 years ago