SR OS-Leaving Assumptions behind- Pt 7 update pg25

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Posted: 15 years ago

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Thanks everyone. It really means a lot to me to see your comments. Thanks Monar, Kritishah, shanti, jasangel, sidma_love, Jatinthakkar and everyone.

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For all of you the second part is going to be updated now. Please go through and give me your comments. I will try to send out the pms too. But as most of you are not my buddies yet I have to send individual pms and this may take some time. Sorry for the delay in pm-ing. So without much adieu here is the second part of the OS.

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PSharada

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Posted: 15 years ago

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Leaving Assumptions behind Part 2

Recap:-

Story so far is in Flashback mode wherein Sid is going through what has happened in the last 6 months. So now Sid is the DO in Sanjeevani and he and Riddhima are staying as Man and wife.

Ab aage:-

(Still in Flashback of Sid)

Sid's mind races back to the six month anniversary day which was 2 weeks back. Sid was very happy that now things have progressed to near perfect in the last 6 months. Not only did he become the DO for the most prestigious hospital in India, he also had the love of his wife. The one whom he married out of responsibility was now loving him to such an extent that he felt like the luckiest person on the earth.

Sid woke up on their 6 month anniversary and decided that he needs to do something special for Riddhima.Like they say you become dewaana in love and when in love you just want to make the person feel special and for Sid no matter what he did, he always felt he needs to do something more and something better for Riddhima. So that day Sid planned for an elaborate surprise a candle light dinner in one of the 5 star hotels nearby the hospital. His plan was to bring Riddhima there and surprise her with the special candle light dinner. As a last moment thought he added a gift, a dress for Riddhima, for the evening. That was the wrong doing of him. How was he to know that the dress would be the one that spelled doom
for his relationship with Riddhima.

So the whole day passed for both Sid and Riddhima in the hospital. Both were very busy and had lot of work with Riddhima having to take care of 2 surgeries and Sid having to do his Intern job as well as
the work of DO in Sanjeevani. So after the busy day Sid came to meet Riddhima in the locker room.

Sid :- Riddhima I have a surprise for you. Come with me

Riddhima :- What is it Sid. I am tired today. Can we go out tomorrow.

Sid :- Come on Riddhima we need to go. Please pretty please aao na.

Riddhima finally agrees to come and both go to the car. Sid takes Riddhima to the 5 star hotel and takes her to the place he has booked. The whole place was decorated with white curtains and lovely white orchids which were Sid's favourite flowers and the ambience was romantic with soft tunes playing in the background.

Riddhima(looking at Sid in a surprised tone asks him):- Sid what is all this.

Sid(takes Riddhima's hands in his and kisses the top of her hands):- Riddhima this is for our 6 month anniversary darling. It has been 6 months since you came into my life.

Riddhima has tears in her eyes and hugs Sid. They both enjoy a lovely and quiet dinner. After the dinner Sid takes out his gift for Riddhima. Sid had bought a black lace mini dress for Riddhima(kind of like the same that Dia(Navin Bole) wore in Just Chill sequence). It was shoulder less and was transparent near the waist and was little more than a micro mini. Sid being a person who has lived abroad found the dress beautiful and sexy and wanted his love Riddhima to wear it for him. But he did not think from Riddhima's perspective. Riddhima being a traditional married Indian girl was very shocked on seeing that dress. She just couldn't believe that Sid bought that kind of dress for her. She flatly refused to wear that dress for Sid.

Riddhima:- Are you crazy Sid. Main yeh dress kabhi nahi pehanogi. I can't wear this kind of dress

Sid:- Oh come on Riddhima. I want you to wear this dress and come out. I want to have a dance with you here in this hotel with slow music playing in the background.

Riddhima:- Forget it Sid. I am not wearing the dress and that too in this hotel No way.

Sid(now getting really irrated that Riddhima refused his gift):- Oh Come on, don't act all that prudish now Riddhima. You Indians are always like this. It is like you do everything but if someone
asks you to do it, you act all moralistic.It is not as if you have never worn this kind of dress for anyone before.

The words were out of Sid's mouth before he could stop himself. He was upset that Riddhima refused his gift. He had no intention of hurting Riddhima but still when one is hurt they want to drag the
other person down and play dirty. Sid also was hurt and before he could come to understand why Riddhima may have refused wearing the dress he gave her a even bigger remark which Riddhima
interpreted in a different way altogether. Riddhima thought that Sid was referring to Armaan episode when he meant that she may have worn this kind of dress for someone before and was deeply hurt. Before Sid could realize what he said Riddhima stormed out of the party hall.

Sid was now really angry. He knew that the Indians being prude remark was quite below the belt and he shouldn't have said what he said about Riddhima wearing that kind of dresses before but what to do. Words said are like arrows that leave the bow and there is no way you can take them back. Sid was hurt and in no mood to apologize to Riddhima and Riddhima too was hurt and in no way wanted to understand Sid.

Both spent that night alone in different rooms and neither could understand why their beautiful date got spoiled. Neither wanted to talk out and both couldn't understand how their simple words blew the
relationship between them to pieces. After all neither were in sane mind.

The next morning was worse than the previous evening. Next day both woke up from sleep which they just spent waiting for the morning to come and hardly rested. To worsen the matters their penthouse had a water problem and there was no water in the apartment.

Sid(who was in a furious mood yelled):- Oh God. I hate this goddamn India. I wish I had never come here. I wish I was in Houston and I had my own life. I hate the place, I hate the people. Urhh

Riddhima who came at the most inappropriate time heard everything. She had tears in her eyes when she heard Sid.

Riddhima:- Itni parishani ho rahi hai toh chale jao(if you are so unhappy, you can go).

Sid who never saw Riddhima in the room when he was venting out was surprised to hear Riddhima. That was the last thing Riddhima talked to him.

After the disaster date and the even more disastrous morning both started to avoid each other at house as well as the hospital. Sid being DO assigned his duties with all the other senior doctors other
than Riddhima and Riddhima too avoided Sid. Unfortunately they had emergencies and they had to spend much more time in the hospital.

Usually whenever Sid-Riddhima had tiffs one or other used to apologize and get their life together back on track. But here both were adamant that the other should apologize first.

But yesterday evening Riddhima came from Hospital and directly went to her room. She just packed her things and waited for Sid to come home. As soon as he was in the house she just informed that she was going to her parents house and just left. Sid was puzzled because Riddhima never left things unresolved between them and she always said that it is better they solve their problems before they hit the bed. What has happened that Riddhima suddenly left for her parents house he wondered.

Sid(thinking to himself):- Bahut ho gaya hai Sid. You know you shouldn't have made that comment. You can't allow this quarrel to go on forever. You need to mend the bridges and if that means saying sorry to Riddhima then let it be.

Sid went to Riddhima to talk to her the next morning about her moving out but she hardly spoke more than an yes or no.

Sid (coming out of Flashback):- What has happened Riddhima that you just walked away from the house.You are the one who wanted to stay for saath janams together and you just left my house and me just for something that I said. And why were you crying when I was talking to you asking you to come back to our house. Oh god who will help me now(sits down in the sofa holding his wedding photo and looking at it especially Riddhima).

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Hope you liked it and please do write up your comments

Edited by psarada - 15 years ago

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Zarqa

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Posted: 15 years ago

#43

nice OS yaar....lekin plz don't separate Sid-Riddhima....this one was sad...i wanna see SR romance in the nxt one....plzzzzz....other than that...it was AMAZING!!!!!

Love Always,
Zarqa ❤️

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PSharada

@PSharada

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Posted: 15 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: indian_beauty
nice OS yaar....lekin plz don't separate Sid-Riddhima....this one was sad...i wanna see SR romance in the nxt one....plzzzzz....other than that...it was AMAZING!!!!!

Love Always,
Zarqa ❤️

Thanks Zarqa. But this OS is solely based on SR only so don't worry I won't separate them. Almost all the OS on SR are romantic based only. I wanted to write something which will be more like them in the serial. The way they assume everything before the other talks is my main premise. Before I
give out the whole story I need to go. You read through the OS and let me know if you feel the story
is close to the serial in the sense does the situations remind you of Sid and Riddhima.

Thanks for your comments

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Mrunmayi Naik

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Posted: 15 years ago

#45

oh sarada...lovely dear!!!!!...please continue...but why such a sad ending to this part?????

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supercool3

@supercool3

Alumni

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Posted: 15 years ago

#46

nice update but this part was quite sad 🥺

anxiously waiting for the next part

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Nikita

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Posted: 15 years ago

#47

Thanks for the PM!

Nice update!

Cont soon!

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AnnaNAshley

@AnnaNAshley

Rocker

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Posted: 15 years ago

#48

awesome update...really luved it👏

waiting for the next part😊

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kiran255

@kiran255

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#49

oh sarada

its lovely

i love the fact that u write k when a person in anger says something which doesnt mean what it sounds creates dozen of problem

plz update soon !

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Bhavana

@letitgo

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#50

Hey Sarada,

Loved it .....The most important thing about ur OS is that it is quite close to real life.

1) Husband and wife will have fights, that doesn't mean they will part ways.
2) And it is not possible to have all the puppy love or romance all the freaking time.
3) What u have written is something which happens in real life between couples, unwanted-ly u hurt the other person.

Keep Writing
Lub
Bhavi 🤗

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