SR OS - A Tinge of Jealousy (7/19)

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Posted: 15 years ago

#11

Hey girl, do write more. I really liked the language, dialogues, and diction you utilized in the fictional piece. It was done very well.

Do write more from Riddhima's perspective and how she slowly falls for Siddhanth.

Edited by zainab25 - 15 years ago

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Aishwarya

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Posted: 15 years ago

#12

nainaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

in the words of shilpa shetty khundra, that was rockinggggggggggggggggggggg

haha loved it!!!
i so cant wait for her to be preggers lol like u have no idea haha...
and sid omg he would be bouncing off the walls...

your os was amzinggggggggg
[why do i keep doing that thing with the last letters? anywho]
u have to write more lol. i loved rhidz sitting there with a surprise and instead she of course jumps to conclusions, wallows in self pity, then heads out with her woman power only to be proven wrong... sigh. what will we do with this girl?

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Mrunmayi Naik

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Posted: 15 years ago

#13

hey naina...amazing OS.....SR becoming parents......lovely.....please keep writing!!!!

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petrichorr

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Posted: 15 years ago

#14

Awesome piece!

Loved it! Beautiful, Sensuous and the Jealous Mrs. Modi was just great.

Looking forward to more

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-Harshu-

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Posted: 15 years ago

#15

Naina 🤗

Great OS , beautifully written

Loved each & every bit of it & SR becoming parents wowwwwwwwww👏👏👏

Keep writing !!!!!

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Divya

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Posted: 15 years ago

#16

hey Naina

nice OS yaar

do write more

plz PM me next time

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StarshineHues

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Posted: 15 years ago

#17

This is fabulous- so very well written. The story, the characters, the emotions-absolutely lovely.

-Aditi

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Zoya

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Posted: 15 years ago

#18

Awesome dear!!!
Loved it!!!
Do write more and tell me about them

Take Care
Zoya

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norzar

@norzar

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Posted: 15 years ago

#19

hi

wonderful OS on siddhima naina,

Rids jealous and SR to become parents, how cute

do write more OS on siddhima, you write relaly well

keep it up

norzar