ArSh OS - So Close, So Far ( Part 2 - Page 3 ) - Page 2

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Posted: 15 years ago
#11
First and foremost . . PLEASE CONTINUE IT!!

Aah, well . . you've written it remarkably well.

I pity both Armaan and Shilpa. *sigh*

Keep up the good work. 👍🏼

-Kanky
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Posted: 15 years ago
#12
awesome os
felt so bad for shilpa
plz do con this
its awesome
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Posted: 15 years ago
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AWESOME I AM SO IN LOVE WITH IT.PLZZ CONTINUE.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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WOW that was amazing!! So touching, Sad and intense! Looking forward to reading part 2 !! :D
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Posted: 15 years ago
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so moving!! and i hope even if the two women are twins, they look different!! Pls continue....

viji
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Posted: 15 years ago
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wow!!!
that was awesome soo painful!!
please continue i want to read wht happened next
did the met or not?
love maleeha!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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WOW!!!!
I'm speechless!!!!!!!!!!!!!
PLZ plz plz plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue soon and PM me when yo do!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Love
Mira
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Please continue!! i was shocked that that was the ending i kept going back looking for more!! please please continue! SOON!!

it was awesome!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hey everyone... Thanks for all your comments.
I'm so glad all of you liked it so here is the next and the last part hehe.
Hope you enjoy it.

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Armaan reached the beach in no time, after all he couldn't afford to waste any second. At first he looked around and found no one there to his utmost disappointment.

Nevermind Armaan...She's not here... It seems like even in all these months you couldn't understand her. Of course you couldn't because all there was ever on your mind was Riddhima. Riddhima this, Riddhima that. You completely ignored Shilpa...Didn't you ever realize how much she had gone through because of you. If she wanted she could have just ignored you or left you alone just like everyone else, but she had always stood by your side, like your strongest shield to protect you from everything after you heart-break. What was her fault in all this? She wasn't the one who ask Riddhima to go marry Sid... She wasn't the one who caused that accident that September night...She had nothing to do with all this then why did I treat her this way?Why did it take you so long to realize her love and care...? People are right...You only know the true value of someone after they are gone and now she is gone and I don't think she'll ever return...

As he reflected on what he had done all these months, streams of tears started rolling down his eyes.He felt guilty and why shouldn't he? If he had ever ; even just once, thought about Shilpa's feelings, he wouldn't have to see this day. And what is the point for him to regret? He took out the bracelet from his pocket and stared at it with eyes full of emotion. The feelings were so strong that if anyone else saw him this way, that person would immediately cry.

I don't want to lose you. I ... Can't lose you...Please god, for once think about me. For once, help me.... I have always listened to you no matter how much it had hurt me...Heck I had sacrificed my love and my every reason to live for you....If I lose her, there won't be a reason for me to live anymore. He close his eyes in hope and prayed that there would be a miracle.

Suddenly he opened his eyes as he felt a drop of water on his forehead, he looked up into the sky only to find that it was raining. The wind started blowing even stronger than before and as he was looking into the sky, he saw a shooting star falling towards the middle of the sea. When he looked there, his whole world froze. He could barely see her eyes, and saw her drowning deep into the dark blue sea. The sea showed no mercy and it was slowly dragging her deep beneath.

OH NO. WHAT DID SHE TRY TO DO? SHE CANNOT DO THIS TO ME. NO THIS CANNOT BE POSSIBLE. He quickly ran as fast as he could, probably even faster than the speed of light for a normal person, but love gave him power ; God gave him power and a chance to amend his mistake, a chance to save, not her but HIS life. That's what she really meant to him, she was his life and he had to save her at any cost, no matter what happens. He reached the sea and swam his way towards her. The sea was cooler than ever, because of the wind, the rain or because of seeing Shilpa in that state.

He got hold of her hand, then slowly making his way towards her legs, he carried her in his arms and made his way back towards the sand. He could feel her cold skin against his warm one as he gripped her close to his chest, not wanting her to disappear again. As he reached the sand, he didn't let go of her, he didn't place her on the sand, but he placed her on his lap. He looked down, seeing her unconscious and completely pale with not even a single hint of blood flow. He took her hand and started rubbing it against his, but it was of no use. He tried pressing her right above her stomach and saw water splashing out of her mouth continuously. However she didn't regain her senses which made him tremble in fear. He took her wrist and tried to find out her pulse rate which was very low.

What do I do now, if I take her to the hospital, it will be too late. She has been in the water for too long. Oh god what do I do. Tears weren't stopping at all but suddenly an idea came to his mind but he was unsure of it. There is only one way... I have to give her air...She will have to breathe through me... I'll fill her lungs with my air...Yes, that was the only way out ...Mouth-to-Mouth. But...How can I do that... Armaan...This is not about you or Shilpa... This is about a doctor and his patient... And if you want to save her, you will have to do this or else you know the consequences...

He was battling with his heart and mind, but in the end his heart won. He had to do this and he WILL do this, for her, for himself. He lowered his head and cupped her face into his warm palms and immedately placed his lips over hers as he blew in air into her mouth, but he didn't do this for the least glint of pleasure. As he did that a few more times, she could feel her responding as she coughed out water, he could see her breathing now as she weakly opened her eyes. He was the first thing she saw as she got her new life thanks to him. She gave him a faint smile as he placeed his arms around her back and pulled her close against his hard and wet chest. The rain started getting heavier and the waves were splashing even further, coming into contact with their legs.

As Shilpa gained her senses, she realized what he was doing, so she quickly pushed him and broke away from the soft hug. As he saw her looking into his eyes he felt hurt to see that emotion. Her eyes were filled with anger which was burning him on the inside ; giving him this sort of pain which no physical pain could ever match. On the other side, he just looked at her with his eyes begging for apology, sincerely showing her that he was wrong and feeling guilty of what he did in the basketball court, but he never felt guilty for saving her.

" How dare you Armaan? What are you doing here? WHY did you save me?! MAR JAANE DIYA HOTA MUJHE. KYUN ARMAAN KYUN?!" She questioned him, feeling even more angry. He placed his hand over her shoulder trying to calm her down but she just pushed it away with a strong force and stood up. " DON'T TOUCH ME. JUST GO. LEAVE." Tears started rolling down her eyes as he stood up too. But he had enough of her, he couldn't take it anymore, why was she this upset at him? He is just her friend then why does she care that much?. " Don't you think you are over-reacting? I am just your FRIEND then why all this?" He saw her freeze as he said the word 'friend'. " Friend... DOST... Then WHY DID YOU BOTHER TO COME HERE AND SAVE ME?! You know what Armaan? You will NEVER understand, you NEVER did, NEVER will. JUST GO BACK TO YOUR RIDDHIMA, GO AND CRY OVER HER LIKE YOU ALWAYS DO. I NEVER MEANT ANYTHING TO YOU NA? JUST LEAVE GOO LEAVEEEE ME ALONE FOR GOD'S SAKE." She screamed with all she had and tried to run away but her legs weren't supporting her and she felt everything going black as she lost control over her, but then Armaan quickly got hold of her placing his arm under her waist and looked into her eyes. " Shilpa, I won't even leave you I can't... And I can't imagine losing you." Instead of saying anything this time, Shilpa freed herself from his hold to turn back and walk away. Armaan felt tears rolling down his eyes as he fell onto his knees and said " DON'T leave me Shilpa, I freaking love you. I would have already died that day if I hadn't met you' You gave me a new reason and a whole new world to live for. Agar tum hi chali gayi to Armaan ka kya hoga... I need you, not for yourself, but for myself. I need you to be with me because I love the feeling I get everytime I see you, everytime I feel you' I love you oh-so much baby." She stopped and turned around while her eyes couldn't stop the tears either. She looked at him and said " Armaan..." That was it, she didn't have to say anything more because her eyes said it all to him. The only thing left for her to say were those three magical words. " I ... Love you...I need you more than you need me... I .. " He quickly got up to his feet and wrapped her cold waist against his warm arm as she shivered at his touch. Before she could say anything else, he gripped her tighter and slight pulled her up just enough so that he could capture her lips with his. At first it was gentle, but then all those emotions which were trapped and hidden in their hearts flowed through the kiss and they could feel each other through that kiss. The intensity started increasing as she placed her hand in his wet hair while he caressed her wet back. Both were struggling for air so he moved his lips away from hers and quickly whispered " I love you and don't ever do that again" as he started kissing her bare neck uptill her jawline. She could collapse any second as she felt him sending her to another world, making her lose control, but she gripped his shirt tightly for support. Her action made urged him further making him bite her skin as he heard her moan, but sweetly and gently he sucked on the same place.

" I love you too and I promise I won't ever leave you again." She said as she placed her lips over his again making him forever hers.

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Edited by .-Wish-. - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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lovely update.. do write in more and add me to ur pm list

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