2/04- Sid-Riddz-One Shot: I should've slapped you.

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JennyPenny

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Posted: 15 years ago

#21

WHY ? Why are you not the damn creative of the show??/ I think DMG creatives really don't have much creation left.

E-mail it to the head right now.. Poco, that;s was beautiful. I am speechless.. Beautiful to max.. 👏

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Sofna

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Posted: 15 years ago

#22

😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭

I am at a loss for adj of praise to do full justification for the magic u have created so effortlessly!!!

👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

It's agony watchin or readin grown men cry!!!😭😭😭

I have a done a role reversal nw.......I want Armaan to be happy instead...😉😉 😆😆

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patakhaguddi

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Posted: 15 years ago

#23

Poco-
If I could write anything meaningful I would. Beautiful. Stunning. The way you portray the emotions is such a gift.

You're amazing
-Jaan

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supercool3

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Posted: 15 years ago

#24

I am awed.. i really cant describe my emotions while reading this but it sure did bring a moment of relief and smile onto my face.

Now im going to read it again

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athithi

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Posted: 15 years ago

#25

Poco: I have been waiting the last 2 days for the one shot.. Its worth every minute of that wait... 👏👏👏👏

Thankyou for keeping your word and writing it..

I got goosebumps just reading it..😍😍

Its way beyond magical than what I expected..

loved this line because I no longer know how to take a single step ahead without you.

especially liked the title "I should've slapped you" - how can they ever forget their first encounter..

CV - its a dare!!! - try repeating this magic on screen..

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monar

@monar

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Posted: 15 years ago

#26

Poco I am overwhelmed and amazed, you can do magic with words, rather you just did it.

I have no words to describe how beautifully you pictured the whole conversation. emotions were literally coming out of each and every word.

I don't know if SR will be together in DMG or not, but for me they came to their destination thanks to you.

Doubt if CVs can create the same magic on screen that you created with your keyboard,
I read this while listening to Kailash Kher's "Saiyyan", music and words made Ridhhima "Siddhant" Modi live!

and I just can't stop myself mentioning this. I am your admirer and big fan of your writing!! 👏 Keep writing more and more!

Edited by monar - 15 years ago

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dmg_mjht55

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Posted: 15 years ago

#27

wud have lyk it if armaan was in place of sid

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10124

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Posted: 15 years ago

#28

Poco-absolutely stunning! This is EXACTLY how it should be!

Even if ridhimma returns to armaan in the series,this is the ending Im going to take with me!!Thankyou so much!!

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doukno

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Posted: 15 years ago

#29

What the hell,Poca!!!!Dis is freaking gud,awesome.....I dont hve enuf adjectives to describe it......

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MagicalKash

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Posted: 15 years ago

#30

Nitz!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!🤗🤗🤗

I was in a dreamland all the while I was reading with a silly smile on my face and tears in my eyes.And I swear if Siddhant really does that to Ridz I myself will go and slap him

The OS was just WOW .And I simply loved their confession.So simple but still so enchanting just like they themselves are.