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Posted: 15 years ago
#21
yeah the pain is what they will play on i guess, of seeing the one you love the most with someone else and hoping the person would be happy!!! however i am very hopeful Armaan will not become soppy, he will hide his pain behind his sweet si smile... and urge Riddhima to move forward...


Originally posted by: alekfan

xcellent yaar..but yaar i knoiw she wont choose ammy at the moment..........becoz that wud b wrong to sid...........bt this was areal torture

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Posted: 15 years ago
#22
I have a feeling it might turn out being even better! in the last few days everything has picked up... the story... the acting, the chemistry.. and the intensity.... i am very hopeful, nahi toh i wouldnt have written a prediction- writing a prediction to me depicts my restless state of mind!!

Originally posted by: anizaf

Listen If in tomorrows episode is not good as you predicted here and then I'll be very disappointed and it's your fault.... beautifully written... loved it😊...

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Posted: 15 years ago
#23
hahahah! just got free from work, and have loads of time to spare, thats the reason why i have started bombarding the forum lately, besides... the story has also picked up tremendously which is why i feel like writing as well...

Originally posted by: laxmi73

Good one Niha...I can see that you are really active in the forum... Good to see that!

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Posted: 15 years ago
#24
yeah, i also hope the realisation happens after the hug, but going by the way things are at the moment, i have my own doubts ya... i think she will see him from a distance and shock waves will travel.. they will play more on Armaan and Sid at the moment, and Riddhima will stand there straining her neck, lost for words... cos, iss kahani main its one of the men who is going to end up being heart broken, Riddhima gains either ways....


Originally posted by: desire_20

im sure cvs wont let her pick armaan at the moment... nice prediction though n its nicely written... hope dat if dis happens den d AR hug is long n both let go of reality for awhile

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Posted: 15 years ago
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yeah, i also hope the realisation happens after the hug, but going by the way things are at the moment, i have my own doubts ya... i think she will see him from a distance and shock waves will travel.. they will play more on Armaan and Sid at the moment, and Riddhima will stand there straining her neck, lost for words... cos, iss kahani main its one of the men who is going to end up being heart broken, Riddhima gains either ways....
Good one Niha!! But I feel she gains better with Dr.Malik...Siddhant Modi..I have my doubts!!

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Slowly everyone comes and stands behind Sid, totally shocked trying to be there for him-but he tells them it was bound to happen, they try to tell him they didn't know Armaan was going to come here-Sid says, he had to come some day, and its a good thing is happened, now because, now he will feel less hurt when Riddhima goes away, and in anycase says Sid, main toh super boy hoon na, the cool dude, i am chill, you guys please carry on, i want to be on my own for a while- the friends insist on staying, but Sid sends them away.

Here in the meanwhile Armaan is taken aback at Riddhima reaction, he tries to place his hand on her shoulder but she pushes it away-Armaan is like, basket, i am back, i came all the way for you, and you are still angry with with me-Riddhima is like, why have you come Armaan?

Armaan says, because i realised i couldn't live without you Riddhima- and i knew you were also not happy without me, thats why i came....
Riddhima is like, really? Thats why when i came all the way to look for you, though you saw me, you just chose to walk away from there? Do you even know what all happened after that? Do you even realise what that madness for you costed me?

Armaan is like what else could i do Riddhima, i had no other choice, and till the time you came there, i didn't even know you were alive!
Riddhima says, i dont believe you.
Armaan is like i cant explain myself to you, but it was only when i saw you at panchghani, did i realise you were alive too- i was mad with joy, but i didn't want to ruin your life, by adding the burden of looking after a mad man, after all i had promised to take care of you all my life like a princess, how could i just turn your life into hell just for the sake of my love for you-and i knew you would stay back, you would not go, thats why i decided to leave.... besides i had seen Siddhant there, who had come with you, so i knew you would be safe! I left....

At this mention Riddhima realises there is another factor in her life that she had numbed for the moment-she has tears in her eyes! Siddhant she says.... siddhant...! you left me because you thought there was someone to take care of me Armaan? Is this the love you used to talk and boast about, that you would die, but never leave me-

Armaan is like why dont you understand Riddhima, had i left to become a better man, i left because seeing you gave me hope, it reignited the spirit inside me... and now look i am back! Your Armaan Mallik, who's loved you to no end- is back Riddhima to take his Riddhima Gupta back with him!! This time never to part.... the moment we leave from here i will talk to Dr. Shashank- i cant stay away from you any longer- i want to get married to you right away- he comes forward and hugs her, but this time she doesnt hug him back! She steels her face, and says, Armaan, i am already married.

Armaan is shocked- his head starts spinning! This he hadn't imagined or even thought of- in a fit of emotion he violently holds her by her shoulders and shakes her up saying, " do bara, mazaak main bhi mere saath aise mazaak mat karna" forget marriage i cant even think of seeing you with another man, you are just mine, and moreover basket, " mere ilaava tumhe zhelne ki taakat aur kisi main hai bhala"

Riddhima is silent, she is serious and there are tears rolling down from her eyes-she doesnt say anything- another look into her eyes, and Armaan knows Riddhima is not lying this time- He just silently walks away from there trying to gather all that has scattered around him... knowing fully well he may not be able to do so....

As Armaan comes out, he see's Sid lying on the bonnet of the car thinking-on seeing Armaan he sits up, and wonders happened- Armaan is alone slightly tear stained- Sid goes to Armaan and says him what happened...

Cut to,
Both of them sitting next to one another on a step talking- Sid says, what did Riddhima say, Armaan is like, why didn't you tell me she was married-Sid is like, does the marriage really hold any prominence in Riddhima's life? If it did she wouldn't be with you today- Armaan says, she is not with me-aur main apni Riddhima ko jaanta hoon,she would have never come here, had you told her i was here-kya bola tumne use-Sid doesnt say anything- Armaan is like, i dont blame the guy, Riddhima hai he aisi, he would have fallen in love with her the moment he saw her- pata hai when we first met, we used to fight so much- that, i thought i could not stand her even for a minute forget a life time says Sid- Armaan says, she is mad- if she wants to prove a point she wants to ( he thinks of his moments with her being stubborn with him)- Sid thinks of her climbing those temple ke seedhis-shit man.. says Armaan suddenly standing up- Riddhima ki shaadi ho gayi hai? That seriously feels so weird from inside, maine socha tha, she would yell, should, perhaps slap me- but this, i didn't expect! Whoa! Shaadi! I guess thats a big thing! Bigger than pyar i guess says Armaan with tears swimming in his eyes- Sid is like Riddhima ke liye uske pyar se bad kar aur kuch kabhi tha hi nahi- aur shayad aage bhi nahi hoga.... Armaan looks at Sid, and says, "tum Ridhima ko bahut acchi tarah se itni si samay main jaan gaye ho! Huh says sid, kya fayda.... woh to ab tumhari ho gayi hai na, mera chance toh ab gaya ( he tries to joke)-

Armaan smiles thro his tears and says, woh jo koi bhi idiot hoga na, mann karta hai main use apne samne khada karke itna peetoon, ke woh mujhe aur meri Riddhima ko chod ke bhaag jaye! Shit man! I cant believe she is married, meri Riddhima kisi aur ki- no no no he says as though not coming to terms with it! Sid is like, agar woh itna bhi bura na hua toh? Kya tum apni Riddhima ko kisi aur ko saup doge...

Woo, sauna and all huh says Armaan sounds big and crazy to me, but Riddhima ki khushi se badh kar mere liye kuch bhi nahi hai- kya Riddhima uske saath khush hai? Tum uske dost ho na? Sid doesnt reply as he doesnt have an answer-he looks on at Armaan intensely- Armaan is like, bolo tum uske dost ho na, itne saare din woh tumhare saath rahi... tumhe pata hoga na uske bare main- Sid says, haan- main use jaanta hoon! The sudden change in sid's tone make Armaan realise something is wrong, and it suddenly hits him, how Keerti was going to tell him something, how a while ago Sid had spoken so lovingly about Riddhima and that he has lost a chance and all that, and suddenly the thunderbolt hits Armaan- that it is Siddhant who she is married to- woh tum hi ho na says Armaan! Sid nods! Armaan is so lost, he turns and just walks away from there no knowing what to do...

Inside Riddhima is crying, she says to herself, i am back to square one! What do i do, just when i thought i should give my life a fair chance, what is this confusion! Armaan why did you come in front of me? Now i will not be able to live without loving you, neither will i be able to do justice to Sid! Why god why me? I know what i have to do! neither do i need a husband, nor a lover! I will be on my own!!

Baahar, Armaan and Sid realise, ye kahe ka musibat hai... the cause for our sorrow was a woman! They decide to get together, and Armaan and Sid lively ever after...

😉 😉
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Posted: 15 years ago
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well, agar she ends up with Armaan, picture khatam!! sab ghar waapis chale jayenge.... ! thats why they will continue with more drama... make her suffer cry and crib!! before sid says, qurbaan huaaaa.......

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Posted: 15 years ago
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lolzz 😆 😆 😆
wat an ending!

duh! well as a prediction u cudnt write AR or SIDMA the other(ans) wont be happy, but u were writing really gud...u cud have ended it better without showing AR or SIDMA
instead of making it comical.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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[QUOTE=honeydew_dmg]Slowly everyone comes and stands behind Sid, totally shocked trying to be there for him-but he tells them it was bound to happen, they try to tell him they didn't know Armaan was going to come here-Sid says, he had to come some day, and its a good thing is happened, now because, now he will feel less hurt when Riddhima goes away, and in anycase says Sid, main toh super boy hoon na, the cool dude, i am chill, you guys please carry on, i want to be on my own for a while- the friends insist on staying, but Sid sends them away.

Here in the meanwhile Armaan is taken aback at Riddhima reaction, he tries to place his hand on her shoulder but she pushes it away-Armaan is like, basket, i am back, i came all the way for you, and you are still angry with with me-Riddhima is like, why have you come Armaan?

Armaan says, because i realised i couldn't live without you Riddhima- and i knew you were also not happy without me, thats why i came....
Riddhima is like, really? Thats why when i came all the way to look for you, though you saw me, you just chose to walk away from there? Do you even know what all happened after that? Do you even realise what that madness for you costed me?

Armaan is like what else could i do Riddhima, i had no other choice, and till the time you came there, i didn't even know you were alive!
Riddhima says, i dont believe you.
Armaan is like i cant explain myself to you, but it was only when i saw you at panchghani, did i realise you were alive too- i was mad with joy, but i didn't want to ruin your life, by adding the burden of looking after a mad man, after all i had promised to take care of you all my life like a princess, how could i just turn your life into hell just for the sake of my love for you-and i knew you would stay back, you would not go, thats why i decided to leave.... besides i had seen Siddhant there, who had come with you, so i knew you would be safe! I left....

At this mention Riddhima realises there is another factor in her life that she had numbed for the moment-she has tears in her eyes! Siddhant she says.... siddhant...! you left me because you thought there was someone to take care of me Armaan? Is this the love you used to talk and boast about, that you would die, but never leave me-

Armaan is like why dont you understand Riddhima, had i left to become a better man, i left because seeing you gave me hope, it reignited the spirit inside me... and now look i am back! Your Armaan Mallik, who's loved you to no end- is back Riddhima to take his Riddhima Gupta back with him!! This time never to part.... the moment we leave from here i will talk to Dr. Shashank- i cant stay away from you any longer- i want to get married to you right away- he comes forward and hugs her, but this time she doesnt hug him back! She steels her face, and says, Armaan, i am already married.

Armaan is shocked- his head starts spinning! This he hadn't imagined or even thought of- in a fit of emotion he violently holds her by her shoulders and shakes her up saying, " do bara, mazaak main bhi mere saath aise mazaak mat karna" forget marriage i cant even think of seeing you with another man, you are just mine, and moreover basket, " mere ilaava tumhe zhelne ki taakat aur kisi main hai bhala"

Riddhima is silent, she is serious and there are tears rolling down from her eyes-she doesnt say anything- another look into her eyes, and Armaan knows Riddhima is not lying this time- He just silently walks away from there trying to gather all that has scattered around him... knowing fully well he may not be able to do so....

As Armaan comes out, he see's Sid lying on the bonnet of the car thinking-on seeing Armaan he sits up, and wonders happened- Armaan is alone slightly tear stained- Sid goes to Armaan and says him what happened...

Cut to,
Both of them sitting next to one another on a step talking- Sid says, what did Riddhima say, Armaan is like, why didn't you tell me she was married-Sid is like, does the marriage really hold any prominence in Riddhima's life? If it did she wouldn't be with you today- Armaan says, she is not with me-aur main apni Riddhima ko jaanta hoon,she would have never come here, had you told her i was here-kya bola tumne use-Sid doesnt say anything- Armaan is like, i dont blame the guy, Riddhima hai he aisi, he would have fallen in love with her the moment he saw her- pata hai when we first met, we used to fight so much- that, i thought i could not stand her even for a minute forget a life time says Sid- Armaan says, she is mad- if she wants to prove a point she wants to ( he thinks of his moments with her being stubborn with him)- Sid thinks of her climbing those temple ke seedhis-shit man.. says Armaan suddenly standing up- Riddhima ki shaadi ho gayi hai? That seriously feels so weird from inside, maine socha tha, she would yell, should, perhaps slap me- but this, i didn't expect! Whoa! Shaadi! I guess thats a big thing! Bigger than pyar i guess says Armaan with tears swimming in his eyes- Sid is like Riddhima ke liye uske pyar se bad kar aur kuch kabhi tha hi nahi- aur shayad aage bhi nahi hoga.... Armaan looks at Sid, and says, "tum Ridhima ko bahut acchi tarah se itni si samay main jaan gaye ho! Huh says sid, kya fayda.... woh to ab tumhari ho gayi hai na, mera chance toh ab gaya ( he tries to joke)-

Armaan smiles thro his tears and says, woh jo koi bhi idiot hoga na, mann karta hai main use apne samne khada karke itna peetoon, ke woh mujhe aur meri Riddhima ko chod ke bhaag jaye! Shit man! I cant believe she is married, meri Riddhima kisi aur ki- no no no he says as though not coming to terms with it! Sid is like, agar woh itna bhi bura na hua toh? Kya tum apni Riddhima ko kisi aur ko saup doge...

Woo, sauna and all huh says Armaan sounds big and crazy to me, but Riddhima ki khushi se badh kar mere liye kuch bhi nahi hai- kya Riddhima uske saath khush hai? Tum uske dost ho na? Sid doesnt reply as he doesnt have an answer-he looks on at Armaan intensely- Armaan is like, bolo tum uske dost ho na, itne saare din woh tumhare saath rahi... tumhe pata hoga na uske bare main- Sid says, haan- main use jaanta hoon! The sudden change in sid's tone make Armaan realise something is wrong, and it suddenly hits him, how Keerti was going to tell him something, how a while ago Sid had spoken so lovingly about Riddhima and that he has lost a chance and all that, and suddenly the thunderbolt hits Armaan- that it is Siddhant who she is married to- woh tum hi ho na says Armaan! Sid nods! Armaan is so lost, he turns and just walks away from there no knowing what to do...

Inside Riddhima is crying, she says to herself, i am back to square one! What do i do, just when i thought i should give my life a fair chance, what is this confusion! Armaan why did you come in front of me? Now i will not be able to live without loving you, neither will i be able to do justice to Sid! Why god why me? I know what i have to do! neither do i need a husband, nor a lover! I will be on my own!!

Baahar, Armaan and Sid realise, ye kahe ka musibat hai... the cause for our sorrow was a woman! They decide to get together, and Armaan and Sid lively ever after...

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Posted: 15 years ago
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i left the ending for the creatives to do wad they wad... but but but... i got my happy ending... SID-MAN rock!!! i love them the most at the moment

Originally posted by: VampirePrincess

lolzz 😆 😆 😆
wat an ending!

duh! well as a prediction u cudnt write AR or SIDMA the other(ans) wont be happy, but u were writing really gud...u cud have ended it better without showing AR or SIDMA
instead of making it comical.

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