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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: ..deepu..

wow .superbly written ..!!!



Thank you! X
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: sheena_karan

u hv ritten osum stry...it was full of emotions..nd pain m waiting 4 de letter dat ridhima has ritten to sid plzz rite it fast..m curious 2 know



Thank you for the comment! I've updated the post! Hope you like it x
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: Pocahontas

I am going to so kill you for this! Tell me what Riddhima wrote in that note! I hate to be left hanging mid-air.


Haha! Thank you Pocahontas! I take the frustration as a compliment! :P glad you liked it, really grateful and I wholeheartedly appreciate the comment! Ive now updated the post...I'm reallly hoping u like it! Please let me know


Thanks again x

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Posted: 15 years ago
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I liked it, you wrote everything that Ridz needs to say to Sid but wont be able to face to face
I wonder what will happen next, maybe Sid should write a letter to her 😉
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: nm21



You are too sweet! Thanks sooo much for the comment, it was completely overwhelming, brought a smile to my face =) I am sooo glad to have made it to the list of your favourite writers it is inspiring and reassures me to write more!
Thank you Thank you thank you!!
I am amazed that you have received so much from the post, it really really is fab to know truly, I have updated the post and I do hope you like it, its a lot of pressure when someone compliments and expects so much more! I hope I won the challenge and met the standards you set! I would hate to disappoint!
I am not intending on becoming a professional writer and I'm a student at the minute, if the plans change for the future I will definitely let you know!

Thanks again x



I just finished reading the updated part. And dont u worry, its perfect and it was absolutely a continuation of what i read yesterday. The flashback lines made a good impact. 👏

And in the future , when ever u feel like writing- do it, without any 2nd thoughts, no pressure or any kind of expectations to live up to. just go with ur flow.

I will be there to read and comment 😊
Take care
Bhavi😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
#16

sid ke dil ke jasbat the

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Posted: 15 years ago
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you've done a great job. i don't think the cvs could've come up with something better then this.

please add me to your pm list.
can't wait for the next part. finally someone is writing a fic on sidma.

-ashi
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Wow, you made Sid more determined that ever to not to fall for Ridz words
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Shikha-thank you for the comment! x

can_pak-thank you for the comment! PM list?? I'm not all too technical with india forums, can you explain?

Lennie-haha, thank you?! Is that a good thing, I feel Sid's frustration is justified for the reasons given, although it becomes hard to try and relate to a situation which you've never personally been through before-I'm hoping I've made sense with my take on things! Thank you for commenting though- I didn't see any of the episodes in advance apart from ydays when I started writing this piece and the way I've ended it, it seems to play alongside what is currently shown, the difference being my ff is slightly more descriptive =)

Thanks to everyone again x x
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: nm21

Shikha-thank you for the comment! x

can_pak-thank you for the comment! PM list?? I'm not all too technical with india forums, can you explain?

Lennie-haha, thank you?! Is that a good thing, I feel Sid's frustration is justified for the reasons given, although it becomes hard to try and relate to a situation which you've never personally been through before-I'm hoping I've made sense with my take on things! Thank you for commenting though- I didn't see any of the episodes in advance apart from ydays when I started writing this piece and the way I've ended it, it seems to play alongside what is currently shown, the difference being my ff is slightly more descriptive =)

Thanks to everyone again x x

I thought once RIdz explained herself - Sid would kinda understand esp as what is happening on-screen, she really hasnt said anything about it or her feelings on it, so Sid could understand
But hey you write so well, pls write more 😳👏👏

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