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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey.........hi friends..........a very big hello to all of you..................😛😛😛
hw...u all are feeling..................hope sb bhala changa he ho....................😛😛
i have written my seventh part...............
seventh part had been a bit long thts why i had to divide seventh part into two............
so i m posting seventh part nw n half of the other part ( nw 8th part..) will post ...a bit later......
so enjoy............................
n do tell me u liked it or nt.............plez press the like button if u liked it................
dont forget to comment friends..............
hey hasu kans n nw my dear friends
do comment n reply................



PART = 7


RECAP : - ridhima couldnt belive wht she all saw n heard frm both-------arman n ridhi ....ridhi(sukku) who loved armaan so much.........n still loves her......is on her death bed bt still hearing such harsh words from her lover...............who wishes of her death.............thn armaan comes to ridhima-(jenny) n tells her he wanna tell her something.....................whn ridhima tells him tht at first she need to ask something from ridhi(suku)..........n then she goes frm there.............in anger arman punches wall........................



(Ridhima comes to Ridhis-SUKKUS room bt sukku was crying tht moment)


ridhima (jenny) =====...... r u fine................i mean r u alright........????????????????


(ridhi quickly wiped her tears....n nodded her head in yes.....)


ridz(jenny) ===== .....cn i ask u something......ridhi.....if u dont have any problem.....or if u dont mind telling me..

ridhi(sukku) ===== ......ya sure ridhima....is this the thing to ask......(asked her questioningly.


ridz(jen) === .............u dont consider me ur friend ......right....????????????


ridhi(sukku) ===== ......wht u r saying ridhima........(asked her confusingly.....)


ridz(jenny) =====....( ridhima cuts her...) ....if u would have considered me ur friend thn u wouldnt have hide this from me.......


(ridhi-sukku thought tht ridhima was talking abt arman n ridhi relationship.........thnnnnn)


ridhi(sukku) ==== ....(stammering....) ......... no ridhima.....i was....i was.......

ridz(jenny) ====== .(again cuts her.....) ...y dint u tell us the truth ??????.......nt even me.....m i nt ur friend????? .....if u would have considered me as ur friend thn u would have told me..........if u dint wanted to tell others..........u atleast could have tell me......ridhiiii.........y did u tell dr modi nt to tell anyone abt this....................u know wht.........i thought we have become very good friends....................

ridhi(sukku) ===== ...(...again very confused...)........ wht u r talking abt...???????????


ridhima(jenny) ===
......y.... ridhi........y u dint tell anyone of us abt ur ailment............?????.........


(..........ridhi was shocked to hear tht..... she thought ........hw ridhima came to know about this truth.....did abhimanyu told her.....bt he cant do tht......ridhi was very very shocked hearing that from jenny............)


ridhi(sukku) ===== ...which ailment n wht crap u r talking abt ...... (trying to hide the truth......)


ridhima =====
...tht u r suffering from ''' LEUKEMIA ""....... "'blood cancer"" ..........."'n u r on its final stage""" ......n very soon...... U GONNA......(.....ridhima immediately stopped.....)


ridhi(sukku) === ....(still trying to cover up...) .........r u gone mad ?????? ..... y u r making stories of ur own......dint u know tht on tht day abhimanyu told everyone...... tht i m having just a slight fever....dont u remember...... so y u r telling lie .....stop it ridhima....stop.......plz stop it.......n plz leave me alone....(....ridhi trying very hard to hide the truth..)

ridhima (jenny) === .....(a bit frustrated she shouted).......i have read in ur file tht was kept in abhimanyus office.....i came to know abt ur ailment there.....i came to know abt this truth there....so its better u stop hiding the truth from me..........as i know everything........


(...............hearing this ridhi-sukku .......cries.... n thn after crying her heart out she says............)


ridhi (sukku) ====== .........y...u r right ridhima.....u r absolutely right......ya ........m...... deying........very soon........i will ....die......just sum more days n thn i will ...... begone.......


(she cries hardly.....very hardly........whn ridhima comes close to her n hugs her trying to pacify her.....ridhima also cries with her..........)


ridhima(jenny) ==== .............i m sorry ridhi..................i m really.....................sorry...........................

ridhi(sukku) ===== .........its ok ridhima......u dont need to feel sorry........as this is only the truth na................ u know what......ridhima...?????..........very soon someones wish will come true .............. very soon.......... bt i m nt very sad for this.........really..........infact i m very happy....... tht atleast he wished something......... n i know his wish is coming true........... i m really very happy fr him as well as fr me........ atleast he wished something from me n i m fulfilling his wish........ i m really very happy............really...............

ridhima(jenny) == ..(.......a bit hesitatingly...).....u r talking about ....... A.......R....M....A.....A......N ............ na............


(..... ridhi was shocked hearing tht .........she couldnt believe wht she heard from ridhima...just nw......she remained frozen fr some seconds.......her heart was beating very fast like tht of a jet plane...........)


ridhi (sukku) === .......(TRYING TO HIDE WHT RIDHIMA SAID JUST NW.......CONFOUNDLY....)......... wht R U saying ridhima............did u even realise wht u said just nw ??????.............y.....Y....I MEAN....Y.... i would even...... think abt armaan ...... i even dont know him....... thn y i would.........


(..............she was saying this in confounded manner n was stammering a bit............ trying to hide.........)


ridhima(jenny) ==== ......(cuts her in between...)......oh really.......tht means u r trying to say.......... tht u dont know armaaan.......??????........right......????? ...(questioningly) .......


ridhi(sukku) ==== .......(turned her face other side....n said).....ya......i.......i........ i dont know armaan..........y i evn would think abt him......... u n him both love each other alot.......... i dont love him..........i dont have any feelings fr him .......i dont understand y u r putting the questions to me regarding armaan............( she was trying very hard to hide the truth bt ws quite scared n was a bit trembling ......... in order to hide the truth...)

ridhima(jenny) ==== .....bt ...........ridhi....... i........i ......dint said..........u love him...........or u have any feelings fr him.............u said it just nw urself...............(....ridhima knew tht she is hiding the truth from hr....)

ridhi(sukku) ==== ....(stammering....)........... ya i mean .......... i dont know him.......(still trying very hard to hide this truth....)

ridhima(jenny) ====.......oh stop it ridhi.........if u cant tell lie thn its better u shouldnt lie.......as u can say lie frm ur mouth bt wht abt ur eyes ?????.............which are saying something else..........ur eyes r expressing something else.....which are filled with so much pain.........

ridhi(sukku) ====....(turned her face other way to avoid her contact....).... i m nt getting wht u r saying......

ridhima(jenny) ===..../////..ok let me ask u directly.........just swear on urself n say tht u dont love A......R....M....A....A....N........ u dont have any feeelings fr him.............. u dont care a bit fr him............ u r nt at all bothered for him......................

.ridhi(sukku) ===== ....(gt a bit puzzled...........wht ridhima is asking her..........thn aftersometime........ she gathered sum courage...........n said confidently...).........i dont love armaan.......i swear on myself...........i dont have any feelins fr him.................

ridhima (jenny) === ...... r u sure.........u dont love him..........n.................ur telling the truth????????


ridhi (sukku) ===== ................ya..................m sure..........i dont love him infact ......... i.............


ridhima (jenny) ====== .........(cuts her in between).......ok thn ........swear on ARMAAN n say tht u dont love him..........u dont have any feelings fr him.....................

(hearing this ridhi keeps mum fr some seconds.....remained quite..........n thn)

ridhi(sukku) === ...........i .....i.........dont ..........love...............i...........i................(saying this she started crying........n ws crying ........ coz she couldnt tell more lie to hide the truth....n couldnt take armans swear for this.............)

ridz-jenny === ...... i have gt my answer...........u love armaan........... u only love armaan............u loved armaan.............. n u still love him loads...........(she said while her eyes also became moist............)

ridhi(sukku) ===== ......(ultimately she couldnt control anymore.....n broke down.........crying n saying...) ......ya i love armaan.........i loved him..........only him.......n still i love him alot......n i will always love him.......he is my life.... i love him very much...........(crying while saying...)

(after sometime.......ridhi controlled her tears n thn asked jenny............)

ridhi (sukku) = .......bt hw u come to know abt this.......as neither i told u........nr armaan had told u.............thn hw u get to know abt this truth...............

(at this ridhima tells her tht ........hw she came to know abt the truth..........hw in the afternoon she went to drmodis cabin..........hw she came to know abt her ailment there reading the file.............hw dr modi told her to know abt the truth from ridhi itself as he ws bound by her promise................. th hw she came to see her in her roon................ n thn ...........hw she was trying to make ridhi sleep n in betwwn this she found all those snaps of her n armaan n tht diary note.......thn hw armaan confronted her.............n this way she gt to know abt the truth.................)


ridhima (jenny) ====......bt one thing is really bothering me ridi........n i need to know this frm u....... i know tht u loved armaan n u still love him very much......bt ...............arman..........he..... he...... hates u so much tht he wish to have ur................(at this ridhima stops......ridhii cries.........n says)


ridhi (sukku) ====== ........... tht he wishes of my death,,,,,,,,,,,,,hai..na........(...her eyes became moist...)


ridhima(jenny) ==== ..... i m sorry ridhi.......i dint mean to hurt you..............(after taking a pause....)....... i want to know the whole truth ridhi............whole truth........i want to know each n every thing.............tumhe armaan ki kasam mujhe sab sach batao..........plz ridhi mujhe sach batao.......y armaan hates u this much..........n y u hide the truth abt ur ailment frm us ........??????.....while confronting u..............y armaan said tht u played with his feelings n emotions.......?????????..........y he said tht ............????.....he loved u so much bt u deceieved him.......y he said tht while confronting you...??????........as far as i know u i dont think u can do this to anyone..........???????.......tumhe armaan ki kasam mujhe......... sach batao plz....ridhi....plz...........


ridhi (sukku) ===== ....i will tell u the whole truth ridhima.......bt u have to promise me ................. promise me tht u wont tell anything about this truth to armaan.............


ridhima (jenny) ==== ......(...she asked her confusingly....).......i cant do tht...... as...........armaan also needs to know....wht is the truth.........??????????


ridhi(sukku) ==== ........plz ridhima.........i would tell u everything if u promise me tht u wont tell anything to armaan regarding this........


( sukku takes promise frm ridhima--jenny tht ........she will never tell about this truth to armaan never ......ever....which she is going to tell ridhima nw.......... by making her swear on armaan...........jenny relunctantly agrees.............)



RIDHI TELLS RIDHIMA ABT THEIR LOVE

ridhi (sukku)

...... it was in 2nd year of our college,,,,,,,,,,,,where i met armaan fr the very first time..........he was very popular in college......................he was """""MR SUPERCOOl of the college..............he ws very naughty ........... flirtatious...................used to flirt with every single girl.........a bit childish............yet very good at heart .......... ........ whereas i ws completely opposite to him............... u know ridhima--(jenny)............ armaan used to call me "bahenji"................coz i was only the one who wore suits in the college...........so just becoz of tht......... he used to irritate me alot.............bt see we never knew ..........neither i nor he...........tht someday he would fall in love for this behenji only................(remembering this a slight smile comes to her face..........)


she informed ridz hw armaan confessed his love to her :-

............he sat on his knees........n proposed her in front of whole college.........on tht day he gifted her 1000s of bouquet of flowers one after the another...........""''''''


she further informed ridz about their confession night :-

......... on their night of confession................ armaan came to my house midnight (the house where she was living with one of her friend as pg......)....n gave me a grandsurprise...............he had decorated whole of the place (the terrace) fully with lovely flowers n candles........very......... sweet .....sweet.... fragrance was coming from each n every corner of the terrace........... he had placed my cutouts everywhre on the terrace ..............n thn crackers were bursted which displayed ..............

"'''''''''''''I LOVE U SUKKU VERY MUCH...................VERY VERY MUCH.......................ARMAAN.................""""

Armaan had done all this by himself on their confession day to make their day special............very special.......fr me,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, fr him,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,fr both of us.................. n thn rest of the night was spent................. dancing ................. conversin ..........n looking deep into each other eyes................under the stars........''''''''''''

(...............as ridhi was telling all this to ridhima............thn ridhima noticed hw happy she is looking telling abt their confession day........ridhima thanked god....... tht .atleast she smiled........fr a moment...................)

ridhi(sukku) also told ridz tht :-

''''''''i can never forget our day of confession..... i still gets tht sensational, tickling,, n alacrious feeling remembering our confession day.......""""""

(............ridz-jenny smiled at her............seeiing her smiling.............after taking a pause..........)


ridhi(sukku)
............bt our happiness ws fr short time only.......whn we both ........were madly in love with each other nd sum 7-8 months had passed ...... thn one day........ i get to know abt...............this harsh reality.........of my life......... i went fr my medical check up ..........n it was only 2...3 days before my birthday tht dr finally informed me of my ailment..............tht i am suffering from "LEUKEMIA--BLOOD CANCER--"...... n i was IN 1ST STAGE............N I HAD SOME MORE YEARS TO LIVE MY LIFE..............................(thinking this ridhi --sukku-- cries.........so as ridz--jenny-.............after taking some rest......)


ridhima(jenny) ==== .....did u tell about ur ailment to armaan...??????/.....(she asked ridhi--sukku--questioningly....)


ridhi (sukku) == ........ no, i din tell ARMAAN abt my ailment.......... N U KNOW WHT.............. still he doesnt know tht i m suffering from blood cancer.........


ridhima (jenny) =====.......(ridhima was completely dumbhead tht moment whn ridhi told tht to her......she asked ridhi....confusingly............)..........does this mean tht armaan still doesnt know wht is the truth.....???????........tht u r suffering from blood cancer.......??????.......oh....no...............bt y.... .........?????? .ridhi.....y........????????????...............u dint u tell abt ur disease to armaan y.......?????............y.?????? dint u feel like telling him the truth ???............. hmmn....tell me..............(ridz asked her questioningly) .......dint u just feel like telling him once just once ................... ??????????


.>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>..




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Posted: 16 years ago
#42
OHHHHHHHHHH man ur soooooooooo good, loving it, and i loooooooooove tht u've added pics, makes it easy to imagine scene.
MINDBLOWING. Can't wait for the next part.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#43
omggggggggggg yaar thts a true friendship seriously yaar it ws so heartbreaking story of her nd ar said those hurshful words to him i hope whn ar get to knw abt her illnness thn wht gonna happen aw lv pics of thm soo cute n dorable i wish i could see sukku again wth karan chalo jenny also goi gud but bahut rona dhona ho raha hai gosh lvd it totally cnt wait to read more
cont sooooooon
thnksf r dpm
luv yachna
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Posted: 16 years ago
#44
that was fab yaar...u r a really good writer...👍🏼
loved it....cont soooon....

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Posted: 16 years ago
#45

i m luving ur story sooooooooooooooooooo much! 👏

i hope armaan finds out soon!
plez update very very soon! PLEZ!
i m like dying 2 read the next part!
could u also add me 2 ur pm list! thnx u!
tc! 😉
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Posted: 16 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: karans_angel

that was fab yaar...u r a really good writer...👍🏼
loved it....cont soooon....



100% agree with u.........
the story writer is really very good infact i would say ossumm n the story is just oossssssuuuuummmmmmmmmmm


omg omg omg omg omg
today i dont want to say anything i just want to give u a big round of applause.

👏

wow yaar simply amazing, another great part by u.........
.u r osummm yarrrrr just ossummm
i am just eagerly wait fr your next part like anything..

i just dont understand where are kasu fans??????????????
this fanfic is so fantastic, wonderful, beautiful,wonderful..........................................everything
you can love this fanfic, you can like this ff
but you cant ignore it........
where are kasu fans.......u all cant dare to miss it...
this is just osumm
man.......reallly ossumm


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Posted: 16 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: Jinalee114

i m luving ur story sooooooooooooooooooo much! 👏

i hope armaan finds out soon!
plez update very very soon! PLEZ!
i m like dying 2 read the next part!
could u also add me 2 ur pm list! thnx u!
tc! 😉



totally agree with u jinalee....
u always say tht wht i want to say......😆😆
😆
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Posted: 16 years ago
#48

Originally posted by: imkool



totally agree with u jinalee....
u always say tht wht i want to say......😆😆
😆

lol....great minds think alike! 😆
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Posted: 16 years ago
#49

Originally posted by: pakindmuziq

OHHHHHHHHHH man ur soooooooooo good, loving it, and i loooooooooove tht u've added pics, makes it easy to imagine scene.

MINDBLOWING. Can't wait for the next part.



thnxxx dear...............will post next part soon......i think so......
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: cutie_yachu

omggggggggggg yaar thts a true friendship seriously yaar it ws so heartbreaking story of her nd ar said those hurshful words to him i hope whn ar get to knw abt her illnness thn wht gonna happen aw lv pics of thm soo cute n dorable i wish i could see sukku again wth karan chalo jenny also goi gud but bahut rona dhona ho raha hai gosh lvd it totally cnt wait to read more
cont sooooooon
thnksf r dpm
luv yachna



hey thnxxx to u dear fr commenting........
no need to say thnx fr the pm dear...........................so "aapka hukm sar aankho par...."
thnxxx once again........
bye....tc

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