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Posted: 16 years ago
#51
oh god that was awesome!i'm so in love with this!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#52
OMG!! I think this is one of the best stories wwrm has ever had..Tina , Imane , Sri..AWSOME parts girls..I have time to type a small part..editing.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#53
Dir-Jao baat karo...before every romantic scene she needs your sad jokes...go now!!
Mayank smiled and left..
They had a very sweet director indeed....he dint presurize them!!
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Muskaan reached her van and sat down. She relaxed herself. She wasnt kissing him for REAL. Why was she over-recting? The scene demanded it..so why is she having problems. She moved her hair behind her ears. She took the mirror and adjusted her make-up. Her eyes were moist. She wiped it dry. There was a knock on the door.
"Come in." She sniffled.
"Hey Drashti." Mayank came in.
"Oh..Mayank." She got up and went towards him. "Main ready hun..chalo chalte hain."
"One second." He dragged her shoulders and made her sit down.
"Agar tumhe koi problem hai to mujhe please batao. Aaj tak mujhe kabhi kuch nahin chupaya hai tumne.." He stressed the last words.
"No..nothing.."
"Main director se keh kar scene change karva deta hun. Alrite?"
"Nahin Mayank..its not needed. Im fine see." She gave a fake smile.
"Jhooti hasi dekha ne ki koi zaroorat nahin hai."
Her smile faded.
A crew member called them. Drashti was glad that she didnt have to face him. She litreally ran down the stairs , towards the set..on the terrace. Mayank followed her behind.
Dir:- "Okay guys..ready...take ur positions."
"Hey can I hav just like a minute with you?"
"Mayank we are behind schedule..please.."
"Mayank leave it im really okay." She tried to smile genuinley.
He wasnt convinced. Due to time schedules , they were pushed in to the scene.
"Action."
"Im sorry Muskaan , please mujhe maaf kar do."
Drasthi's tears automaticaly started flowing without glycerine.
"Ra..hul.." She murmered.
"Main tumhe kabhi chodke nahin jaunga , I promise."
He leaned forward to kiss her. He came closer and closer. Drasthi closed her eyes waiting for it to get over ASAP.
While the camera was taking their scene , Mayank looked at Drasthi. Her eyes were closed and she seemed petrified. He caught her palms and gently tried to relax her. She opened her eyes.
"CUT."
Both of them moved away from each other.
"Can we have this scene once more. I want a few close-ups."
Muskaan sighed.."not again."
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Im sorry it was short. I have to study for an exam.
-Mansi
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Posted: 16 years ago
#54
well i am inn love with this like anything.

imane--u r toh wow wow n wow....mayank thinks shes perfect n she is meant to some prince charming....lovely.hun and the letter was just gr8...

tina---amazing gal loved the way she blurted out mayank instead of rahul...n hayee u introduced the kiss and v r making the directoars too sweet unlike the real ones.

mansi---lovely part the way he understands her and wants it to end soon ..really cute

someone plz plz plz continue guys
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Posted: 16 years ago
#55
Imane... Tina and Mansi... Totally awesome parts!! 😊 I am writing now... so do wait!! 😛
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Posted: 16 years ago
#56

Drashti closed her eyes and prayed for it to get over… she could hear the director shouting at the spot boys… she opened her eyes and saw mayank standing infront of her… she faked a smile and looked at him…

Mayank-are you sure??

Drashti-about what??

Mayank-This scene…

Drashti nodded and moved towards mayank…

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Rahul moved his hands towards muskaans waist… and gripped it tightly… he kissed away her tears…

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Director-CUT!!

Both mayank and drashti break away from the side hug…

Director-man you guys are just great!!! Well that's it for you guys today… you can pack up!!!

Drashti ran out of the room in a hurry… not wanting to meet "his" eyes… they made her dream… they made her drown… drashti knew that she was falling for mayank… but she just couldn't accept the fact herself…

Drashti opened her locker… to take out her journal… she wanted to pen down her emotions… but to her surprise her personal locker didn't look so personal anymore… something was missing… drashti wondered what… soon she found out that her pictures with mayank were missing… she looked everywhere possible for the pictures… at last she gave up and hid her face in her hands…

Meanwhile she felt someone patting her shoulder… it was mayank…

Mayank-looking for these pictures??

Drashti stood up and looked at mayank… he was holding the envelope which drashti was trying to find out… she practically snatched the pictures away from him…

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Posted: 16 years ago
#57
TRULY AMAZINGGGG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!👏
Edited by dipi_dipu - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#58
omggggggggggg those scenes were soooooooo awesome!! man i cant believe how much i missed in just a day! that was seriously sooo goood! u all deserve like 10000000000000/100! lol
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Posted: 16 years ago
#59
thnx a lot guys whoever lykd my wrk!!..its jus all of u dat keep all us writers going!.....cmon guys keep ryttn....heres my part
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Drashti looked up shocked !!
Drashti-Uh nahi..h .i mean haan...tumne mere locker ko kyun haath lagaya...??
Mayank-Kyun..mujhse kuch chipati hoon kya??
Drashti-Kisi key personal locker ko nahi haath lagana chahiye..
Mayank-Kyun nahi bataya tune??
Drashti was scared...her heart was beating loud...
Drashti-K..ky..kya??
Mayank pulled her up close holding her shoulders...
A small gasp escaped drashti's mouth...
Drashti-Mayank....yeh kya kar rahe hoon...
Mayank-Tumne aaj tak hamarey pictures sambhal kar rakhe..
Drashti-Pictures sambhal kar rakhney ke liye hote hain na..
Mayank-Shut up Drashti....atleast ab man jao..
Drashti-Kya??
Mayank pushed her against the wall......and there was an inch between them.
Muskaan looked down....she couldnt bear their closeness....a tear rolled out her face..
Mayank bent down and truly kissed it away just as they did a few miutes ago for the scene..
Another gasp from Drashti's mouth.....none had a clue of what was going on until _________________
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I dint know what to fil.....so you can fill it..lol
luv
tina
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Posted: 16 years ago
#60
OMG
iAMMM sooooooo happpyyy their LOVE story started and kissss😳😍 LOLLLL😛
Tinee very amazingg part👏
this weekend is TOTALLLY ROCKINGGG !!!!!!! WELLDONE GUYZZZZ 🤗you alllll are just AMAZINGGG👍🏼
PLZZZZZZ SOME one do Continueee i can't wait to know whtsss happnig nexxxtttt
RM FOREVER😳

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