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Posted: 16 years ago
#71
that was great music diva. very nice. and nice continuation muskaan ankita. very good jobs.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Recap:

Papa-abhi yeh haal hain toh shaadi ke baad kya hoga??

Rahul-shaadi…???

Muskaan immediately blushed and looked down… she knew this was coming

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Rahul - Baap re! shaadi ke baad sach mein ise poori zindagi jhelna padege!! bhagwaan mujhe bachaooo!!! he threw his hands up in an overdramatic tone....

Papa giggled at his cute gestures!

Muskaan looks disbelievingly at Rahul... " KYA KAHA??? mujhe jhelta hai?? huh??" she picks up a pillow on the bed and throws it at Rahul, walks upto him and starts messing his hair in anger, because she knows he hates it when someone touches his hair! She suddenly stops when she sees Rahul's mom walking in through the door!

"MOM! i told u to sleep at home! aap kyun aa gayi??" An irritated Rahul yells at his mom, fixing his hair and shooting angry glances at Muski.

"Beta, meri neend bahut achi ho gayi! aur waise bhi i would get bored sitting at home!"

Rahul - THANK GODD aap aa gayi! warna yeh jangali billi mera yeh haal karti ki isi hospital ke ICU mein bharti hona padta!!

Muskaan becomes even more irritated now, and runs behind him "JUNGLI BILLI MEIN?? HUH??"

he runs for his dear life, and rushes out the door, muskaan following him with a killer angry look, leaving behind aunty and uncle laughing in the room.

"BACHAOOOO!!!" Rahul screems as he opens the door to the store room of the hospital! He tries to shut the door before muskaan can get in, but muskaan pushes the door open and rushes in to hit him hard!

As they continue their fight, they hear the door having a clicking sound while closing, they realize that its locked from outside and now they are stuck inside until someone opens it.

Rahul gives her a naughty smile and hums.. "Hum tum... ek store room mein band ho... aur chaabi kho jaye"... Muskaan looks around the storeroom and remembers the day a year ago when her and rahul were stuck in a similar store room in Sanjeevani, where they fought with every possible thing they could get in hand. She turns back to face Rahul and pretends to be angry to hide her blushing pink cheeks and says "SAB TERI WAJAH SE HUA HAI!!" and starts hitting him again, and messing his hair at the same time. Rahul at once holds her wrists and pushes her against the door, pinning her wrists on either side. Pressing his whole body against hers he looks in her eyes, his own full of passion. He presses his lips with hers and drowns her in a passionate kiss.

Her heavy breaths from the fight get muffled under his stong body and demanding lips. He lets go of her wrists and holds her waist in passion. She is completely under his spell and puts her arms around his neck, gripping his hair. He starts to move down to her neck and removes the dupatta and throws it on the floor. He starts passionately kissing her neck, pulling her waist away from the door just a little so that he could put his arms around her waist. He jams her waist agains him and nibbles at her ears and neck. Her fingers keep playing with his hair, moaning "I love you Rahul!" arousing him even more!

He is jolted out of his passion when he hears someone entering a key in the knob of the door. He realizes that Muskaan is still so drowned in him that she hadnt heard it.. He swiftly pulls her behind a stack of boxes as the door finally opens, and a worker walks in to take some medical supplies from the shelves.

Behind the boxes, Muskaan finally realizes what just happened in the past few seconds and blushes, as she senses Rahul's piercing, but cute gaze on her. She hids her face in his chest and giggles at her own response. Rahul smiles and strokes her hair affectionately and wispers "Thanks muskaan! Thanks for being there for me!" and kisses the top of her head.

"Dont say thanks rahul! Main tumse pyaar karti hoon, so i'll obviously i did it for myself, i would have died if i lived without you!"

Rahul smiles at her cute response and gives her a bear hug, promising all the love and happiness in the world.

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OK i guess this scene turned out a lot different from my last scene, but i like to experiment with different kinds of scenes 😉 its my first time writing a scene like this, so it might be lacking the feel, but i hope i get better, otherwise i'll go back to my baap-beti scenes 😆

And i also think we should continue WWRM every week, so what mayank has left? RM is still alive in our hearts and we can write and imagine many scenes that they never showed! We can come up with our own theme every week and write on it!

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Posted: 16 years ago
#73
AWWWWWWWW sweeety Diva 😃'
u know im still crying but when i read ur part belive me i got a good mood and happy that was really a nice and lovely part and also very Romantic
i loved it when rahul said our chabi ko jaye sooooooooooo nice cute rahul plzzzzzz cum back to usss we realllllllllyyy misss you
cum back plzzzzzzz
thxxxx sweety
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Posted: 16 years ago
#74

Originally posted by: divyashaz

AWWWWWWWW sweeety Diva 😃'

u know im still crying but when i read ur part belive me i got a good mood and happy that was really a nice and lovely part and also very Romantic
i loved it when rahul said our chabi ko jaye sooooooooooo nice cute rahul plzzzzzz cum back to usss we realllllllllyyy misss you
cum back plzzzzzzz
thxxxx sweety

aww thanks so much divya! i was also very sad because i think mayank would have done full justice to their cute scenes that would happen if he never left 😡 its even more heartbreaking when they're showing cute scenes between RM and leaving us to want more, but trashing rahul's character so that we'd never get more scenes! i still hope the rumour is not true becuause there is no trusted news tha the really is leaving, but looking at the storyline, seems like he really is going away 😭
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Posted: 16 years ago
#75
awwwwww ttttttttooooooo cute, sweet at well as passionate..lol....alll of u guys made my day which the stupid episode ruined before...thankkkk u sooo much alll of u for updatingggggggg and plzzzz keeep continuing like thissssssss.........THANX alll of u once again!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#76
omg dat was sooo cute...someone continue lol
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Posted: 16 years ago
#77
Great job Simi and Ankita!!! I am glad you guys are writing again!! I guess I will start a new one tomorrow and maybe we can have Rahul come back to her this time.. I am going to hate seeing that letter thing tomorrow. Ugh!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#78
really good job simi!!!!!!!i'm proud of you!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#79
hey gr8 work!!!!!
keep it going!!!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#80
Simi...that was jus AWSOME!!! Lets jus end it...last chapter..then we shall start a new one! :) Editing.

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