it may sound wierd but this was the goodbye scene i always dreamt of and just hoped that this scene was not the farewell scene but rather it wud result in happy ending but now i had to write it out..
This is my understanding of the chracters rahul and muskaan...
i added some of the unnecessary logics also....
i still wanted it to be still more emotional but cudnt wrtie out properly....
so here it goes
The next day : sanjeevani'
All the interns gather near the nurse station except for rahul. Muskaan is there but her eyes are searching for someone so special to her. She was looking at the door only'She had entirely forgotten that he was leaving for US forever....
All vil leave for their duties and then she gets a call to her cell..she goes to the terrace and lifts the phone
Mu: hello
Silence....no answer
Mu: hello
Still no answer.....
Ra: sorry muskaan 'the voice made her come to reality '
Sorry for everything...
Sorry ke apna waada nibha nahi pa raha.....mein tere saath nahin de pa raha..
Mujhe jaana padh raha hain muskaan.....
Mu: something fell into her throat.......she couldn't speak but finally she gained all her strength ra....rahul tum kahan ho..kahan se baat kar rahe ho
Ra: ab kuch nahin ho sakta muskaan....mein bahut dure hoon tujhse...tu chah kar bhi kuch nahin kar sakti.....
Mein jaa raha hoon muskaan'sab kuch chorke'tujhe chorke..
Jaane se pehle mein tujhse kuch batana chahta hoon jo meine kabhi nahin bataya'.Ek sach jo sirf mein hi jaanta hoon'.
Tu jaanti hain ki tu mere liye kitni special hain.....mein bhi pehle anjaan tha par jab jaana toh bahut der ho gaya...didi ke baad tu hi hain mere sabse kareeb....mein ladta toh tha magar tere liye...mujhe pata hain ki tujhe mujhse ladne mein bahut majaa aata hain isiliye mein bhi ladta tha ...
Mein yahan mumbai sirf tere liye aaya tha...tujhe yahan kuch problem na ho isiliye ...par kabhie nahi jaana ki yahan aake mujhe kuch aur hi milega...
She was puzzled..rahul came here for me she thinks...
Par tere liye mere dil mein jo hain usse jaanane mein bahut der kardi ...
Mein bura nahin hoon muskaan ..bas pyaar kya hain ye nahin jaanta tha...par jab tere saath rehne laga toh mujhe ehsaas hua ki yeh sab pyaar hain..
Teri aadat si par gayi hain muskaan'pichle dino ke baad toh bahut jyaada..bed rehta hain phirbhi takiye ka bistar banake sone ki koshish karta hoon par neend nahin aati 'tu hi yaad aati hain..har pal tu rehti hain meri zehen main...
She's shattered.
Mein tujhe bahut miss karunga muskaan..
Tu iss khankhajure ko yaad karogi na..bhool toh nahin jayegi mujhe...bahut galiyan deti rehna har waqt issi bahane mein yaad rahunga ..and smiles
He cud hear her sobs in the middle...
Jaane se pehle tu mujhe sirf ek jawaab de..Kya tu mujhe aaj bhi nafrath karti hain??
Muskaan tu sun rahi ho na...
She was now kneeling down in distress still holding onto the phone tightly to listen to him intently...not to miss any of his words...
Muskaan kuch toh bol..
Mu: kya sun na chahte hain rahul...haan main tujhse nafrat karti hoon...
he was speechless
par ab usse bhi jyada pyaar karti hoon...
Now she was literally shouting...
yes rahul I LOVE U'I VIL LOVE U FOREVER..I CANT LIVE WITHOUT U RAHUL..MEIN TERE BINA NAHIN JEE SAKTI...I NEED U RAHUL..and the line goes cut..
guys the last terace scene is for muski....she once wanted that she want to shout from the terace his name wen she loves anyone.....now that v cant get a happy scene of that i tried this sad scene...
plz reply....n comment n criticize...
Kyunki Saas Bhi Kabhi Bahu Thi 2
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