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Posted: 16 years ago
yo man!now finally you've written in WWRM!
it was really,as sri put it,the cutest!write more!
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Posted: 16 years ago
awww... sri and sonia... lovely parts!!! 👏
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Posted: 16 years ago
Thanks Shrina, Srividya, Divya, Sakina, and Ankita!
Is someone actually going to continue/write?
I am waiting...
Edited by SuhaniSonia - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
very good job by everyone.............i loved it completly..........due to some reason i wont be able to write but i will completly continue today...........this is going great but i think now we can start right after the upcoming episde...........
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Posted: 16 years ago
ya v can start this time...hope v get something of RM other than the song...
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Posted: 16 years ago
cool soniya. u started writing. very cute.
i still dunt like this story as much as others
Edited by stellarwind - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
ermmm...do we continue as usual or are we starting a new one now that a new episodes are airing??
Not sure if i should carry on...😕
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Posted: 16 years ago
Carry on until we start a new one.
I think this weekend we should start a new one with whatever cliffhanger they leave us on.
Edited by SuhaniSonia - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago

ab finally dono woh ganv me pahonch jate hai .....jaha pe sab in dono ko dekh ke bhage chale aate hai............

Person: dekho dekho........seher se daktarsaab aa gaye.......................

Person: lekin daktarsaab yeh kisko saath laye hai........

Person: are bhai..........unki gharwali hi hogi......dekho na kitne achche lagte hai saath me......waise bhi koi thode kisi parayi aurat ke saath........kyun daktarsaab........

Rahul; haa...........haa........main Dr. Rahul Garewal aur yeh............aur yeh Dr. Muskaan Rahul Garewal.......meri biwi............Muskaan gusse me Rahul ki aur dekhti hai......

Muskaan (apne aap se): oye iski to.........iski yeh himmat ki muje apni biwi,.............kabhi aaine me sakal dekhi hai.............

Person: lagta hai daktarsahiba tak gayi hai...........oye lajjo inhe inki kutiya to dikha do........

Lajjo: jee baba..........aaiye na daktarsaab........aap bhi chaliye daktarsahiba.............

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Muskaan aur Rahul ko woh lajjo ek zopde jaise chote se ghar me chod ke chali jati hai............jaha pe woh itna chota hota hai ki isse bada to Dr. Kirti ke waha ka bathroom............aur sone ke liye koi bed hai hi nahi sirf zameen pe chadar hai..........aur light ki jagah sirf diye hai..........aur kuch nahi hai sirf pine ka pani............

Muskaan; Rahul.........hum yaha pe rahenge........

Rahul: haa koi aur choice bhi nahi........yeh sab teri waje se hua..........nahi tu mujse ladti nahi muje tere saath teen hafte lonawala aana padta............aur nahi Sister hume yaha bhejti..........

Muskaan: aise baat kar raha hai jaise sari galti meri ho.........us din tune mera mood kharab na kiya hota to aaj hum yaha pe nahi hote aur ….yeh kya shanpati kar raha hai…kya bola tu bahar………main teri biwi……..tujse to meri jooti bhi shaadi na kare…….

Rahul; oye akal tujme hai ki nahi………..hum yaha koi morden Mumbai me nahi jaha pe log hume ……I mean ladka ladki ko samjenge……….yeh ganv hai jaisa Punjab me hamara……aur inko pata chala na ki hum aise hi hai to sach much me hamari shaadi kara dete………

Muskaan: tu sach keh raha hai………

Rahul; oye tu mere pe yakeen nahi karti kya………

Muskaan: nahi karti hoon na……..lekin Rahul yeh jagah to kitni daravani hai……..yaha pe to light bhi nahi hai………aur na hi koi TV….aur main soungi kaha……….

Rahul: achcha hai yaha pe koi TV nahi……..waise bhi mera sir pak gaya hai teri boring saas bahu ke drame se……..aur dikhai nahi deta sone ke liye neeche chadar hai…….

Muskaan: oye neeche sone ki aadat to tuje hai………aise to meri kamar tut jayegi……..aur maine suna hai aise jagah raat ko na naag aur cocroches aate hai………yah ape to nahi aayenge na……….

Rahul: aayenge to tuje dekhke darr ke bhag jayenge………aur agar galti se bhi koi tere bal me chala gaya to bechara ghut ghut ke mar jayenga……….

Muskaan: oye chup kar……jab dekho mazak hi karta rehta hai…..yaha ko mere ko darr lag raha hai aur tu hai ki……….aur tere ko to pata hai mere ko andhere se kitna darr lagta hai……….

Rahul; pata hai achchi tarah se……….oye tu darr mat main hoon na tere saath………kuch nahi hoga……….tu ab soja………..tu thaki huyi si lagti hai………aur waise bhi kal bahot kaam bhi hai……….

Muskaan: haa sahi keh raha hai……..agar raat ko main tuje bulau to tu mere pass jaldi aana……………..muje waise bhi kuch ajeeb lag raha hai yaha……….

Rahul: tera irada to thik hai……..

Muskaan: oye main aise waise nahi sochti tere jaisa…….main darr ke mare bata rahi hoon…….

Rahul: ab tu jyada soch mat aur soja…………

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Muskaan apni chadar leke ek khone me jake so jati hai……….aur dusre khone me Rahul so jata hai………ab raat ke do baje hote hai jab bahar se janwaro ki chikhe sunai deti hai jisse Muskaan ki neend khul jati hai……….Muskaan apne kaan bandh karke sone ki koshish karti hai lekin phir bhi aawaz se who darr jati hai………jab who Rahul ko dekhti hai……..

Muskaan: kitne chen se so raha hai ullu ka patha……….koi farak nahi padta is kameene ko………..abhi to yeh uthega bhi nahi…..main kya karron……..muje darr lag raha hai……..babaje me kya karoon……..

Muskaan dheere se Rahul ki aur dekhti hai……

Muskaan: sorry Babajee………….muje maff kar dena papajee ……..

Muskaan jake Rahul ke pass so jati hai rahul ko dekh ke……..thodi dair bad jab rahul apni side palata hai to apna haath muskaan ki upper se hoke dusri aur karta hai………..jab uski aankh khulti hai…….

Rahul (thinks): oye yeh yaha kya kar rahi hai……..yeh hosh me to hai…….agar nahi to subaah mera omlet banake kha jayegi………

Jab Muskaan neend me Rahul ka haath pakad ke so jati hai………

Muskaan (neend me): Rahul……….muje na bahot darr lag raha hai…….tu muje chodke to nahi jayega na…………

Rahul: kaise baat karti hai………tere ko chod ke main kahi ja sakta hoon…….oye ab tere ko kaise batau ki kitna pyaar karta hoon tere se…..lekin tu hai ki samajti hi nahi…….main to tuje her din isi tarah apne saath apni baahoin me dekhna chahta hoon……..muskaan ek bar keh dena kit u bhi mujse pyaar karti hai……….I love you Muskaan….

Rahul apna haath chudane ki koshish karta hai lekin Muskaan chod hi nahi rahi thi au aise hi Rahul bhi muskaan ko dekh ke so jata hai…….

Ab raat to itni haseen thi lekin kya pata inki subaah kis tufan ke saath ya to kis bahar ke saath aati hai……….

Edited by goodkashish - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
wow kashish...nice part dear....the last part was v cute and that rahul saying tujhe ekhke bhaag jayenge was funny......thanks that u hav wriitten ...its been a long time....

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