weekend wid rahul muskan 3!

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Rashmi

@aandhanika

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Posted: 17 years ago

#11

@Sheeelroxx & AshiYuvi4life
Very good written... do continue

Edited by aandhanika - 17 years ago

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Sonu

@x.sonia.x

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Posted: 17 years ago

#12

that was so cute... 😳 poor rahul

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Mitsy

@mits002

Dazzler

Posted: 17 years ago

#13

She was not at all comfortable.
R: Muskaan, tu pichhe jake let ja.
M: huh? (kinda shocked by his concern)
R: Jaa, pichhe jaa ke let ja, taki main teri shakal na dekh saku.
M: memememe (imitating him)
She scooted over to the back and laid down, curling up her knees.

Morning.

Muskaan woke up, her body aching.
M:Ahh! uima!
She woke up and saw Rahul sleeping upright in the front seat. She betted that his back would be killing him. And then suddenly whatever happened last night flashed right in front of her. She just stared at him for a couple of minutes. And she felt good.
Rahul's eyes wrinkled as the sun shooted its rays right onto him. She suddenly realized that she was actually staring at RAHUL for last couple of mins. She stretched over him to the sun blocker and put it down for him. and just as she was settling back, her shoulder touched his and he woke up.
R: huh?
M: Abbe ooth. Ulle ke patthe. Meri poori body dard kar rahi hain. Saari raat, pata nahi vo Atul kaha mar gaya!
R: hmm...(yawns) kitne baje hain?
M: muje kya pata..kaankhajure!
R looking around to see outside the window.
M: Kaisi car hain teri, ! Isse acha to koi khatara hain. Atleast usme "central locking system" to nahi hoti. is band gadi mein mera dum ghut raha hain!
(Rahul still looking outside, not listening to her)
Muskaan irritated more by the fact that rahul was soo cool with her, grabbed his collar. He looked back towards her.
M: tujhe meri baat sunai de rahi hain ya nahi.? Meri baaton ka koi asar nahi padta tujpe!
R: Nahi, kyonki ....teri aadat si ho gai hai.

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FANA

@VM_lover

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Posted: 17 years ago

#14

m=kya!dekh rahul subah subahi muje irritate mat kar

r=tum muje irritate kyon kar rahi hai

m=acha ithna irritate horahi hai go away from me

rahul grabbed her stare her with full anger & irritate nd leave her hand nd turn away

muskan felt bad that what she had told to him

m=rahhuul main bas....

suddenly atul comes

a=oye ye kya tum lokh subha subhahi gadi me kyun beta hai

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~ Disha ~

@~ Disha ~

Inactive

Posted: 17 years ago

#15

😡

Originally posted by: sweet anju
m=kya!dekh rahul subah subahi muje irritate mat kar
r=tum muje irritate kyon kar rahi hai

m=acha ithna irritate horahi hai go away from me

rahul grabbed her stare her with full anger & irritate nd leave her hand nd turn away

muskan felt bad that what she had told to him

m=rahhuul main bas....

suddenly atul comes

a=oye ye kya tum lokh subha subhahi gadi me kyun beta hai

Atul: oye ye kya tum lokh subha subhahi gadi me kyun beethe ho

Rahul & Muskaan (screaming their heads off): Abey teri toh....GAADI KHOL......!

Muskaan(fuming like nuts): Ullu ki dum tu gaadi toh khol tereko batati hoon ki hum gaadi main kyun baiteh hain!......Tereko nani yaad dilla doongi

Atul (not realizing wat they were saying): KYA??? huh....paani....abey yaar ek toh gaadi mein band hain aur ab paani maang rahi hain....😕.....poori raat baarish ho rahi thi...utna paani kaafi nahin tha😕

Atul finally fishes out the key and opens up the car. Both R and M scuffle out fuming in anger!

R: Abey oye kameeney kahan mar gaya tha.....😡

A: Umm main woh.,,,,pipe...anj......

R: CHUP! pata hain poori raat iss dimag se paidal chudail ke saath goozarni padi😡 (obv. within he was happy abt being so near M but he's not gonna let it show)

M: Abey oye teri toh....

She stomps R's foot so hard that he howls in pain!

R:Teri toh main.....

R starts chasing M......

A: Abey yaar.....kya log hain....poori rraaat gaadi mein guzari ..phir bhi ek dusre ke peeche bhaagne ki shakti abhi bhi hain!😆

R: MUSKAAN ...teri toh...abey oi RUk....rukja...

They're chasing each other like mad and R's almost reached to catch M when suddenly she slids on the wet road and R catches her just in time!!!!

SORRY i am so bad at this!!!.....i just realli felt like contributing ....didn't write anything extra mushy or romantic coz i think i aint that good....anyways wat happens next is upto the next writer😃

Edited by ~ Disha ~ - 17 years ago

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sheena

@sheena_12

Rocker

Posted: 17 years ago

#16

Nice update evry1 this will be my frst attempt on RM scene..so plzz fr gimme fr my mistakes.... They have an eyelock session fr few minz n suddenly cumz atul they both were so lost in eachoder tht they din even realise atul was there
A:oye!!!

both of them getz bck 2 their senses hearin his voice....both r embaressed rahul is smiling while muskaan is totally confused....

A:oye...kya hgaya tum donon ko....kahin bhi there shuru hojatey ho

Rahul lookz @ muskaan whoz gaze is on the floor 2 embaressed 2 look @ny1 but manage 2 say

M:main...main andar jaati hun....woh...fresh hona hai....

n leaves widout lookin @ ny1 of them

R:mein bhi chalta hun he sayz wid a grin on his face realisin tht he is in love wid muski n muski likez him 2 but is not acceptin...but hs satifies knwin tht @least she likez him...toh kya hua agar accept nai karrahi hai eke na ek din toh karne hi padega na....lolz

n he leavez 2

Atul 2 himself :yaar ye dono kabhi ladtey hain toh kabhi ek doosrey mein itna khojatey haink aaspaas kya huraha hai kuchqabar hi nai hoti....ajeeb hain....

scene shiftz 1 RM's Room

Muski cumz out of the washroom wearin her usual dress n finds rhul lost in himself n has a grin on his face(yes...hez thinkin bout the last nyt n all the reactionz of muski wen they were close 2 eachoder...)SHE LOVES ME TOO!!!!!!!!!!!!! he thought

now his gaze felt on muskaan whoz lookin absolutely fresh n stunnin wid the soft smell of her rose water...lol...hez continuesly starin @ ger

while muskaan is feelin really shy by his gaze on her....she wantz 2 tok 2 him but is feelin really shy

M:ra...rahul..

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M:rahul...

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M(shouts):RAHUL!

he quickly getzup by her sudden loud voice n sayz

R:Kya hua??? tum theek toh ho....askin her while holdin her by her shoulders

she can c love,concern n care in his eyes

she takes a step back.....

M:rahul mein...mein theek hun bas tujhse kehna hai kuch...

R(he getz surprised as well as happy thinkin tht shez finally gonna confess her feelings fr him)mujhe bhi kuch kehna hai muskaaan...

M:tujhe kya kehna hai?

R:wohi jo tujhe kehna hai?

M:toh tu jaanta hai mujhe kya kehna hai?

R:haan muskaan...ofcourse

M(starz in her normal voice wen speakin 2 rahul...which dont really sounds normal...lol):oye!!toh idhar there mera muh kya dekhraha hai jaakar nahaley...bathroom khali hogaya hai n walks away

R 2 himself:isko yeh kehna tha?...yaar kab bolegi ye....

plzz comment or criticise i tried my best 2 make it gud but m sry i dont think i did it well...nywayz rest depends on yo commentz or criticisms....

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Mitsy

@mits002

Dazzler

Posted: 17 years ago

#17

All the updates were realllllly goooood!

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FANA

@VM_lover

Navigator

Posted: 17 years ago

#18

okkkkkkkkk thanks nd pls sm1 continue plsssssssssssssssssssssss😭

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FANA

@VM_lover

Navigator

Posted: 17 years ago

#19

r will cm out frm toilet were m is being ready 2 go hospital n r is staring at her suddenly she will turn n say

m=oye jao or dress change karo

r=haaan............

she go 2 take her were suddenly her shall got stuckon table she is trying 2 tak out bt she cant thn r will cm nearer 2 her that r can here her breathings they lips almot 2 reach & m is getting nervous as ussual suddenly he will take out the shall n theycm 2 normal

thn m will run away

r wll grin n go 2 chane dress

thn all of them in sanjivini

sooooooooooorry i know it was wooorst