Predicted OSs...The Victory of Love*Part(C) pg19* - Page 6

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Posted: 13 years ago
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STORY 2
Part(B)
Raghav reached outside the garage.He thankfully didn't find Viraj so headed to the main road.After a minute or so he saw Viraj's car coming & pretended as if enquiring a guy about something important.Then he felt a tap on his shoulder & turned around to find Viraj all confused.He asked him about the hermitage, and wether he found Sia or not.Viraj replied in a dull tone "No Raghavji there is no sign of her, she didn't visited there too.Well did you got something".Raghav got startled at this point as to what he shall say him now, what story should he make?Raghav reluctantly replied "Oh no I also didn't find any clue and the guys are fast asleep as its late night".He saw Viraj's concerned face & continued "Well don't worry we'll continue it tommorow morning & yes I'm going to get that Shekhawat this time".Viraj thought 'why everyone is after Shekhawat, he can't just make plans man'.He agreed to what Raghav said & both headed towards the car and went home.

Sia couldn't actually sleep well and started to have thoughts & flashbacks that what Viraj has done to her family and if he does the same to Raghav's family then she won't forgive herself ever.Here Raghav too was having sleepless nights with all the things what Sia told him.Only he knew how he was controlling himself over all these Viraj's tortures to Sia & the misories to his family.He wanted to have a check on Sia once again & see wether she is doing fine.But he knew she is there lieing on the mat and gazing at the eternal stars & he did the same.

The night not only went restless for both Raghav & Sia but also Viraj.He was in a deep thought about his Jhaan to whom he had given the misories of all times.At the break of dawn he immediately dialed to Shekhawat.The call remained unanswered & he got frustrated and said "Why are you doing this to me Jhaan.You know that I cant live without you.But no problem I'll find you whereever you are".Raghav was in his room getting ready for his first day in his mother's business.He was all set with his formals & his hair combed in a office style when Viraj entered the room.He got pissed of at his sight & thought "why this mechanic has to do this...oh yes I forgot his moma made him do it because he is no worthy of it and REALLY NEVER made for my Jhaan".Raghav noticed him and said "Are you just going to blabber by yourself and stand there or say something?".Viraj came back to his senses and praised Raghav for his suites & his style and said he loved it.He wished him a good day.Raghav asked him "Now hurry or we'll be late for office, I'm going to drop you in MY OWN CAR" and focused on those words.Viraj got angry and said "Raghavji I'll come later on, actually I've got to get ready you know".Raghav agreed and moved on.Viraj quickly tried Shekhawat's number again but failed, Shekhawat wasn't attending his phone call.Although Krish was adamant at the fact that he won't go to school without Sia butRaghav left him to his school as Sia couldn't.He promised Krish to give a surprise after he returns home.Krish agreed.

Raghav got a phone call from his friend to Shekhawat's hideout and left the office in the lunch brake.He ran his car to that place & finally found him.He took some of his aquientances who were waiting for him.He found a chance & grab hold of Shekhawat & gave him some of his good punches and kicks.Shekhawat really tried his best to defeat him but failed.Atlast Shekhawat failed & got tired .Raghav held him by his neck and asked him about who made all the plan.Shekhawat told him about Viraj's plans.Raghav went all furious & said that he won't get him arrested if he helps him.Shekhawat at his stake of life, agreed to Raghav's plan.

Part (C) Coming Soon.Stay Tuned!😉
Edited by stephenie - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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plz do comment guyz.That's what makes me write well!

I REALLY NEED THEM!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Oooh interesting ! Beware Viraj, Raghav is on your trail ! ;)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thnx Monu di =D for commenting!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thank you!
Keep commenting!👍🏼
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Posted: 13 years ago
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STORY 2
Part (C)..
Raghav in a rage returned to his office.He got freshen up & started working again as if nothing happened.When the work was over then he remembered that he has to pick up Krish so he took his blazer where he met Viraj.He just wanted to shoot him there & then but this time he's going to do it in Viraj's way.He enquired Viraj about Shekhawat and Viraj blurted out that "No Raghavji he's not picking up th..." and stopped in the middle.Raghav made a doubtful face and said "What you called him?But how do you know him?".Viraj went puzzled and made an excuse that he doesn't know anything about him so he was unable to find his whereabouts.Raghav nodded an acceptation then Viraj said "Let's go home together".Raghav disagreed saying that he has to go to Krish's school to pick him up then he'll go home by the time he can go home and take rest.Well Viraj didn't wanted to waste his time at that brat's school since he had many things to worry about so he went straight home.

Krish was soon in the car with Raghav but didn't even smile a bit.Raghav was also unhappy keeping Krish away from Sia but what should be done should be done, and that too for Sia & his family.Raghav began "I have something for you but first promise me you'll keep it a secret".Krish's eyes became bright with hope in them and he nodded in happiness.Raghav reached at wooden warehouse & knocked the door.Krish was a bit confused.Sia woke up & couldn't figure out that it would be Raghav so she picked up a wood stick & headed to open the door.She was about to bang it on Raghav's head but Raghav instead of holding the stick in defence, shouted "Please don't hit me!".Sia got embarassed & blushed hard at her foolish act.Raghav gave a ghostly shying smile too.Well Sia was awestruck at her sight, seeing Raghav in such wonderful black pairs of formals.She complimented "Raghavji ..ermm..actually you are looking different..well you are looking..great!"Raghav got astonished at what he heard.Sia saw Krish hidden behind Raghav and said "Krish won't you give your Sia didi a hug?I'm waiting".Krish didn't had made any idea of that sort & hid behind Raghav's legs.Raghav gave a pacifying look at Sia.She asked Krish's apology for leaving him like this when she asked him to be by her side always.Krish forgave his Didi and hugged her.She told him that she's here because they are in the story she told him and has to fight the bad magician.Krish mimed that he wanted to fight as well but she made him clear that he's a prince and she's the fairy so she will fight for him with the help of his Chachoo & then they will surely win.She gave a warm hug to Krish and Raghav found Sia's eyes tearing up again.He asked Sia to promise him one thing if she wants him to help her.She agreed.He continued "Promise me Siaji that you will never ever have tears in your eyes and fight bravely along with me".Sia hesitated but Raghav insisted her to and gave his palm to her for accepting the vow.Sia boldly kept her palm at his and said "I promise that I will never ever set back and be always by your side no matter what situations be".Raghav gave a big grin & Sia returned it back at him.Krish gave a cheerful smile and joined the duo.Both Raghv and Sia kissed Krish on either of his cheeks from both sides.


Edited by stephenie - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice. Raghav in formals for office 😳 I wish we get to see this in the show too. And bechara Viraj lol finally theres someone who can compete with him in his games, Raghav the hero of course.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Oh, didnt see you update part (c) too. Nice one again. Loved how Raghav is feeling so much anger towards V but is keeping quiet. Aww and the scene with Krish was lovely. It would be nice to see something like that in the show too, that Krish refuses to go school without Sia and gets all upset, sweet 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome job! thanks for pm!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#60
Aww loved full part (c). What a lovely RaghaVi scene. And RaSiKri scene too. I loved this "Both Raghv and Sia kissed Krish on either of his cheeks from both sides." I would love to see this kind of scene in the show hehe 😳

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