Predicted OSs...The Victory of Love*Part(C) pg19* - Page 3

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Posted: 13 years ago
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thnx guyz fr ur support..!

i'll try & write the part(c) today itself..inshallah

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Loved it. The way you wrote "his Sia" <3 Hope Sundar is able to tell Raghav the truth, wanted that to happen in the actual show too.

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STORY 1
Part(C)..

Sia was kept questioning about Krish by the goons who didn't spare a minute to her.They kept asking her about Krish to which she didn't bother to reply.Suddenly the mobile which she gave to Krish rang nearby.Everyone went alert as they didn't knew that Sia had a mobile with her.The mobile kept on ringing, and Sia wished for it too hang up soon but it was no use.The goons grab hold of Sia and hid her somewhere with a cloth tied to her mouth so she couldn't scream or speak anything.Little Krish got scared since the mobile wasn't stopping to ring.The goons were searching for him all around and he prayed for his Chachoo to come soon.He was at the peak of crying when the mobile stopped ringing and there was silence everywhere.His breathes became heavy & heartbeats fast.Suddenly someone picked him up from the ground in his arms.

Krish got nothing to do when he saw his Chachoo holding him in his arms.He hugged him there & then and lone tears flowed down his chubby red cheeks.Raghav didn't say anything and wiped off his tears and kissed his forehead.Sundar came running from behind and said "You've got Krish but what about Siaji they've hidden her too and no one is to be found in the farmhouse, I've searched for her everywhere but I couldn't find her".Raghav got astonished and handed over Krish to Sundar and asked him to get Krish home and he'll find Sia.Sundar agreed but again lost the chance to speak to Raghav.He scared entering Raghav's house as Viraj may find him & he may never get a chance to speak to Raghav again but he had to do this for his Raghav Bhai.He boldly took Krish in his arms and headed home.

Here Sia screamed and screamed to death so having a hope that maybe someone nearby may listen her plight, but unfortunately the goons have changed their hideout when Sia had dozed off to sleep.She was now all drowsy and very weak after 7 hours of no water or food.She started to cry and thought that why does it always happened to her.Was she created to be treated in this manner by everyone?At that thought, it clicked to her that was Viraj really behind all this.But how could he be she thought "If Viraj has lost his memory then why would he have to do like this or is it that he hasn't forgotten anything.But thank goodness that she has told atleast half of the truth to Raghavji or else if Viraj is really have planned something then Raghavji will help her to fight..!"Tears trickled down her cheeks and she sat sniffing softly.

Raghav searched the whole farmhouse but couldn't find Sia.He got frustrated and said "I will find Sia today or I will never go back home..ever." He asked everyone and everywhere and got some of his aquintances to help him find her.It was 11:00 at night Raghav reached his garage and found a letter at its doorstep.He went forward and picked it up.He read it.It was a ransom letter left for him to Sia.It was a really big amount to be paid but he didn't want to pay any amount to those rascals instead wanted them to pay for his Sia's kidnapping.

He went with empty suitcase to the same place where it has been asked.Sundar accompanied him.Sundar couldn't keep his mouth shut anymore and told that "Raghav bhaiya I want to tell you something about Viraj.He is...".Raghav stopped him and said that he heard some rustling in the bushes and went forward to check.Sundar tried to stop him as he has determined to tell everything to Raghav today or never.Soon both of them found goons and handed over the empty suitcase.When they were about to check it Raghav kicked him and gave some good of his punches to them.They found Sia tied and Sundar untied her and woke her up as she was unconcious.Raghav came and said "Viraj didn't appear for you so I did.Are you alright?.." Sia replied suprised and said "Why would Viraj come for me he has nothing to ...to do with me?..".Raghav said in frustration "Then why don't you tell him that you LOVE HIM..?" Sundar got what Raghav was saying but Sia got amazed.She didn't understand and said "Because..because I don't.".Everything was full of confusion.Sundar said that this was what I was trying to tell you the whole day that the letter you read wasn't from Siaji but Viraj instead.Both of them stared at Sundar.He said that he would tell them everything but first they should get out of here.All of them got out of the old place and were out in the moon light.Sundar told him everything clearly.Both Sia & Raghav stood still for a minute or two both tearing up their eyes.

Sia said "And all the while I thought you knew everything every truth about me but..but..Viraj again made it.."after this she wasn't able to say anymore and started to cry with a thud on the floor.Raghav sat down heard each and every word from her while he pacified her.Although she choked her words but completed the whole thing this time and Raghav caught hold of her hand and caressed it and said "No more tears for you Jhanvi,now this is the time for someone else to feel the pain...I'm always by your side no matter what the situations be.." Sia rested her head on Raghav's chest and said "Thank you Raghavji ..I don't know how will I repay you all this.."Raghav replied "By loving me forever.."

Both of them stared at each other.

The End..(Story 1)




Edited by stephenie - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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ah this was a long one..and i think i've compensated the last one..
don't u think?

well tell me how was it??

ah im tired!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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lol nice twists and turns ;) atlast they r togehter ;P nw torture viraj :Pthankss continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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thnx..!
NOTE:
but actually u see i'm going to make stories like..Story1,Story2,etc.(each story having it's own story!)
Every story will have 3-4 parts like A,B,C,etc.
I will have to do it every sat. and sun...
So probably my next update will be with next precap..i.e Sat.!

thnx fr liking it!
Edited by stephenie - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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plz also mention what you didn't like ??
do not worry about criticision..go ahead.!
help me improve my grammar and writing..

plz mention everything in ur comments!
Edited by stephenie - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Like it dear ... 😊


go on rolling ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#29
LOVELY STORY...

i really liked the way truth came out...

and the last line when she asks how will she repay him... ahhh let me drool for a while, raghav' s answer "by loving me forever".. still cant get enough of this.. wanted to see Jhanvi's reaction. atleast a nod of acceptance..

good job overall.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#30
oh thnx a ton !
actually cudn't show Jhanvi's reaction bcoz she was drooling like us too!😍😆

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