Predicted OSs...The Victory of Love*Part(C) pg19* - Page 2

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Posted: 13 years ago
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sure will add u...just like it!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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I've updated it's 1st part but..u may say that it's much similar to the epi. but i wrote it in a hurry and even couldn't write much!

let me know how was it??
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Posted: 13 years ago
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The first was part was good. I liked how Sia is suspecting V. And the end part when Raghav comes into the garage and Sundar receives phone call from R's mobile. Do continue soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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gud part... update sooon... im depending on u becoz lost hope in CV's.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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thnx guyz fr encouraging!

i'll try my best to continue soon..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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loved your first OS..

infact i loved your idea of precaps prediction..

i'm in for it..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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STORY 1
Part (B)..

Sundar got confused and asked Raghav in nervousness that what is he doing in the garage and where is his mobile while Sundar's mobile rang.Raghav went all astonished seeing Sundar asking such a silly question at a time like this.He wanted to blast him there and then but asked him to answer his call first and tell him who's it.Sundar replied that the call is being done from Raghav's mobile itself.Raghav got a flashback of Krish keeping his mobile in his bag while Raghav was about to leave.He immediately snatched the Sundar's mobile from his hand and answered it.

Raghav heard Sia's voice not quite clear but understood that she was along with Krish all the while.He was about to ask her whereabouts but the call hanged.Sia was just able to say that "Sundarji, I and Krish have been kidnapped.Please come to the big farm.."
Then the call hanged and this didn't point any where except the abandoned old farmhouse near Gurgaon station.This meant Raghav has got it and he's going to find Krish and his Sia.

Sundar stopped Raghav and said he wanted to talk with him.Raghav replied sarcastically that he will have him invited at the evening tea when they have found Krish and Siaji!! But Sundar was serious and argued that it was urgent, and the situation's like now or never.Raghav agreed but said not now and come along with me.

Here our brave Sia wanted to get rid out of the place any how and moreover she had a golden chance when there were no goons around except one who was snoring high.
She asked Krish to creep slowly and jump through the small opening in the window and told him that she will follow.Krish did as told and soon was out of the window with a big thud.Unfortunately the goon who was snoozing woke up.Sia screamed and asked Krish to hide somewhere good.The goon tied her up this time and all of the goons went for hunting for Krish.Soon after they had gone Sia threw the mobile out of the window to Krish and asked him to just keep it by himself and promised him that he will be fine and no need to worry because Chachoo is coming to take him back.

Raghav raced his bike all through the city to the old farmhouse he knew with Sundar riding at the back.Sundar wanted just a chance to spill the beans infront of Raghav and the true face of Viraj but unluckily didn't got a chance.When they were about to reach the goons hideout, Sundar said that the place and area is huge where will we find them.Then Raghav said he should ring his mobile when he reaches there although the goons may get the idea but he can manage everything & everyone!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey guyz didn't post long this tym..sorry and also sorry fr the late post !

I didn't post anything related to friday's epi. as there was no precap..although i cud use my imaginations!

bt im lacking tym u know..!
so plz spare me!
Edited by stephenie - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hope Sundar tells him truth soon like your version better than actual show
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: stephenie

hey guyz didn't post long this tym..sorry and also sorry fr the late post !


I didn't post anything related to friday's epi. as there was no precap..although i cud use my imaginations!

bt im lacking tym u know..!
so plz spare me!

no worries steph... 😳
its better than never lol.as. nobody write os or ss or ff on raghav sia.. except u 😳
gud update.. hope sundar will tell n find sia. 😭

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