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@april10

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#21

Agreed with Aanchal

Seems like CVs has decided to follow strategy of Satymev Jayte when women spoke that they stayed with their abusive husband for 14-15 years.

CVs are forgetting that show does not run that long and story progression has to be there. Sia has to speak up. I do not know how CVs are not showing her thinking that he has done same thing with her family first put them in trouble and then save them and become hero.

Sia is not thinking in other direction except that he has lost his memory or not.

Actual concept of the show has been lost somewhere in race of TRP and glorifying evil character so much. Everything is good in moderation but excessive of everything is no good. CVs have ruined Viraj character completely now a days it looks like more of comedian than anything else. It is good to watch when he raise his eyebrow once or twice but not in every single scene. It becomes boring after couple of times.

How can they turn Krish against his Chachu who is father figure to him.

Edit: By the way Ana you have penned down all frustration (including ours) very well. I feel the same way as everybody else

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sara rafeek

@Ooolalala

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#22

I am watching this show for raghav sia. They are the main reason. I am gone crazy for their chemistry.

Ana All episodes are not the same. All shows have good and bad episodes. its better to accept bad episodes like we do good onces. Always expect one or two bad episodes in a week and this case is with all the shows on indian television

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vandana

@VandyP

Trailblazer

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#23

ely...no comments onthe epi...

it was full of flaws...

i would just like to point out at one thing...

cvs just coz raghav-krishh are a hit pair...does not mean u have to force krishh-viraj pairing down our throat...

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sam123_0

@sam123_0

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#24

Ok looks like everyone has pretty much said what I wanted to say but dont any dare try to stop me from venting😡😆😆

The non-continuation of scenes, the change in char thinking, and the editing of scenes in this show is driving me nuts seriously!

Yesterday's first scene of Gayatri-Vriaj-Mr Bhalla was ok... I mean Mr Bhalla told her abt that other gyu and so gayatri trusted him .. fine I get all that... Her telling Sia that she would feel better if Raghav had told her this himself also made sense to me. Raghav's instant reaction to call her... very cute! Then started my annoyance with the entire episode after that... What I would have liked is... them showing, Gayatri inviting Viraj for the opening... knowing fully well that Raghav would never do it himself... raghav not liking it but accepting it bcoz he is more happy with the fact that his mother is coming for the opening!

Next the scene moves to the opening... THERE WAS NO .. ABSOLUTELY NO NEED FOR GAYATRI TO ASK VIRAJ TO COME CUT THE RIBBON!

and this has nothiong to do with my hatred for viraj or my love for ragahv... my frustration is entirely for gayatri's char... she knows very well... raghav cant stand him... and she was there to be "shamil" in raghav's "khushi" and THE gayatri that they have shown us in the last week would never call viraj to be part of raghav's khushi... and in this nonsense... CVs made a mess of gayatri' char!

Next shot, that dream... someone pls tell whose bloody dream was it

Sia's... Viraj's... whose

Sia woke up with a start... did they try to show why she woke up like that... or did sia see that torture with open eyes😲... did viraj dream of it... if that were so then, shouldnt he dream the full way ... like even the torture ... why stop in the middle! That scene was so not needed and made no sense at all!🤢

Next shot, breakfast scene... aagain very poorly edited... i get it viraj has played a magic trick on krish... and the kid liked it then, but yesterdy the kid jumping and running to him was just plain stupid🤢... it would have been better, if they had shown krish saying no... and gayatri butting in and saying it is rude manners to say no to mehmaan and so go to him... krish not liking it but still going bcoz of his dadi, but once viraj mentions magic the kid forgets his dislike and is happy! This would have made more sense... but the way these (CVs) fools showed krish jumping and running to him... they just killed the krish char🤢

What is with this tashu's char... I have no words for her🤢

Ok now coming to my main frustration with this show right now... what is with women in this show... i dont think i can tolerate more of this crap...

Janvi/sia... why are they making her so so so freaking stupid... she is a graduate (only yesterdy I got to know this...😆) but why is she shown to be so stupid! Her always thinking, ...is Virja responsible for this... oh viraj has changed completely ... is getting on my nerves now

! If they were going to get janvi and viraj to be near each other there was absolutely no need to introduce raghav and his family... even those fool aunty and uncle would have served their purpose!

Gayatri who is shown to be this powerful, strong, women suddenly acts all stupid by calling viraj to cut the ribbon🤢

Viraj and his double... I think this is most annoying thing right now... 🤢🤢🤢🤢. they are making a mockery out of the evil, they are turning him into a joke by showing him like that...

It almost feels like they (the CVs) are directing some scenes separately... as and how they like, then some one comes along on the sets, takes a few scenes from the lot and joins them without checking if there is any continuation, without bothering with the story or the char!

I remember during my school days, our teacher used to ask us to prepare something and talk in front of the class for the first 5 minutes of the lesson. We had to make sure all those 5 minutes are utilised.. not a minute less or not a minute more... some how seeing these episodes of SB, reminded me of those days... the CVs, directors, producers are just trying to show some nonsense crap to fill up the 30 minutes .. not a minute, less not a minute more🥱... ...

Ok that sure looks like a "short" venting 😆but let me make one thing clear... i am not annoyed with the actors... my frustratiion and annoyane is entirely for the CVs... so if something is not liked in my post (which I have not bothered re-reading😳) then please excuse me.. .. i do not mean any disrespect to anyone!😃

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Aditi

@mysticgoryfilms

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#25

^ Oh yeah. Jhanvi suddenly waking up was confusing. That's the only thing I didn't get.

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tweetie19

@tweetie19

Dazzler

+ 9

Posted: 13 years ago

#26

I'm fed up with all the characters except Raghav...when i watch the show i'll be wondering "what the hell is going on???"

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381490

Hibernated

Posted: 13 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: april10

CVs are forgetting that show does not run that long and story progression has to be there. Sia has to speak up. I do not know how CVs are not showing her thinking that he has done same thing with her family first put them in trouble and then save them and become hero.
Actual concept of the show has been lost somewhere in race of TRP and glorifying evil character so much. Everything is good in moderation but excessive of everything is no good. CVs have ruined Viraj character completely now a days it looks like more of comedian than anything else. It is good to watch when he raise his eyebrow once or twice but not in every single scene. It becomes boring after couple of times.

Bold in PURPLE: That's it, Shiv. Story progression and character development. The CVs have three strong leads and a cast of multidimensional characters connected to the leads. There is so much substance to explore, layers to uncover, and development to show. The fact that they established a powerful, sharp-minded, independent woman in Gayatri. Then indicated that she could match V's power. Only to have her become completely blinded by him and turned into an ignorant fool rather than business woman with wits. UGH.

Why? Why would they make such a huge character blooper?

Bold in ORANGE: The problem is that they're not showing her thinking at all. I mean, we can recall episodes in which we were shown the deliberate and detailed thought process of V, the abuser. But can we call episodes in which we have been shown a deliberate and detailed thought process of Jahnvi, the victim? All that we've been shown is nightmares of hers, sudden breakdowns, etc. Oh, yes, in one episode we heard her scream at V, asking him why he'd taken her child from her.

Recently we saw her venting by punching that bag.

But have we been shown how her mind works? What she's constantly thinking about? Or how she's perceiving her own situation? What she's pondering in terms of her future? We were given a sudden hint in the episode that she wants more to do. But we weren't shown her progress toward reaching that decision/wish.

Her character is flat. The CVs are way too focused on creating suspense. They've started to overlook the characters themselves.

Bold in PINK: Exactly. I know that we can't begin to fathom what it's like to be a channel crew, competing with other channels, other shows, standing in a situation where the TRP falls and then have to take fateful decisions.

But suspense, twists and turns, can be introduced while still sustaining logic in relation to the characters. How would Gayatri originally have reacted if her employee was accused? She wouldn't have interrupted him while he attempted to clarify. She wouldn't have simply cut him off and believed whatever Mr. Bhalla said. She would've heard her employee out, and then asked Mr. Bhalla to have the case investigated -- and then maybe suspended her employee for the time being until the case was solved.

She would've considered a higher power behind the forging of her signatures and she'd have wondered why they would target her son's home.

Suspense could still be there since she made V a manager in her company and since he wasn't caught in the forging act. Plus viewers would wonder why Mr. Bhalla was keeping the truth from his boss.

Bold in RED: YES, Shiv. They've ridiculed a dark and powerful character. V had a morbid sense of humor which was a part of his character. But the Dual V is ridiculous. The cycle scene, the shirtless-in-bed-next-to-orginal-V scene, the lying-on-the-dinner-table-with-legs-swinging-like-a-school-girl scene, etc., etc.

*shakes head*

I've only caught two glimpses of the original V in this entire ridiculous track. 1) When he'd grabbed Jahnvi's dupatta and smelled it, and 2) during his fantasy in which he got close to her face and brushed her forehead with his nosetip.

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