RiKara TS: Baarish *last part-pg2* 17.05.2017 *THE END*

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Posted: 8 years ago
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ch1.

Clad in beautiful,designer bridal attire,Gauri stood beside the window,leaning on the window frame while she gazed at the moon. She pondered over all the happenings,be it good or bad.

She went near the mirror and started to unclasp the heavy gold jewelleries. It added an additional weight to her body. As she was opening the jewelleries,one piece at a time,she looked at herself in the mirror. She has lost a considerable amount of weight.. Under eyes also developed due to constant stress and pain and what not. She lost the colour of her face. It felt as if someone else had taken Gauri's place.

Till date,she couldnt come to terms with what Omkara had said before he found out the truth.

"Aaj bhi woh din yaad hai jab Mr.Oberoi ko saara sach pata chala.. Ekdum tootke bikhar chuke thhe woh.Ekdum baukhla gaye thhe.. Kitni baar mujhse maafi maang chuke hai mujhse.. Sabke saame kehto diya hai ki maine unhe maaf kardia hai par kya sach mein kabhi bhi main unhe dil se maaf kar paungi?" Gauri pondered as she applied moisturiser on her hands when she heard Omkara coming in and closing the door.

"Maaf kijiye.. Humne aapko nahi dekha.. Maine aapke raat ke kapde nikal diye hai.."

Om smiled softly as he noticed Gauri who always took care of his needs,diligently.

After changing clothes,Om laid down on the bed and was waiting for Gauri to come.

He was looking for Gauri when he noticed Gauri sitting near the poolside,enjoying the rain. She had a soft yet soothing smile etched on her face and her long hair was flowing along with the cool air,which made her look more beautiful.

Om absent-mindedly took one of his sketch pads and a pencil from a nearby table and started to sketch Gauri's portrait,just the way she sat on the poolside.

Gauri could feel his stare on her and as soon as she turned,she felt Omkara coming near her. Omkara sat beside her and took her warm hands in hus cold hands,which sent shivers through their spines.

Precap: RiKara Suhagraat.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#2
So cute and romantic dear.
Update soonish.
Please pm for next update,otherwise I might miss them...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#3
Nice one.. So there something wrong that is done by MR. OBeroi ab main yeh kaunsa smjhu Bhut se hain...

HE apologises but she is not ready she was in omkara's room correct their room... thinking when omkara enter..

Nice way to explain rain... and the omkara sketching...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#4
Love the setting, the rain and artistkara making an appearance.
Gauri is doubtful whether she can truly forgive him... are we gonna get flashbacks?

Hooked already... please update soon!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Why did u end it there.
Please continue soon
I just loved it
And do pm me ...please


~Aditi
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Posted: 8 years ago
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awesome update yar
loved it
Gauri in rain and an artistic Omkara is just perfect
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Posted: 8 years ago
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ch2.

"Main jaanta hu tum kya soch rahi ho! Yahi na ki kya tum mujhe dil se maaf kar paogi ya nahi?"

Gauri looked at Om with a shocked expression. She fumbled nodding her head in a No amd turned around.

"Aisa sochna tumhare liye jaayaz hai aur main naaraaz nahi hu Gauri.. Main jaanta hu ki jo maine kiya hai woh maafi ke layak nahi hai.. Meri Maa jis halaatho se guzar chuki hai,unn sabko dekhke maine aise soch paalne shuru kardiye thhe ki har ek aurat Svetlana jaisi hoti hai.. Tumhe dekhte hi maine bhi tumhare baare mein aisi ghatiya soch bana baitha jabki tum woh thhi hi nahi.."

"Maine tumse kitna kuch kaha..kitna bhala bura sunaya phir bhi tum apni jagah se hili nahi.. Humesha mera saath diya har burai ke khilaaf.. Svetlana ke khilaaf.. Mom aur Mr.Oberoi ke rishtey ko suljhane ki koshish kar rahi ho.. Tumne mujhe maaf zarur kiya hai par dil se nahi.. Par meri koshish rahegi ki main tumhe aur hurt na karu.. Hosake toh mujhe maaf kardena Gauri.." Om replied,relieving a sigh of relief.

"Shankarji,ab hum kya karein? Omkaraji ne apni dil ki saari baatein kehdali.. Woh bohut pachta rahe hai. Woh haalat hi aise thhe ki unhe aise bartaav kiya.. Jo shabd unhone kahe hai mujhse,woh unka dard thha jo shabd bannke zubaan se nikla.. Haan.. Mujhe bohut chot pohuchi thhi par galati toh insaano se hi hoti hai.. Agar maine unhe maaf nahi kiya toh woh humesha keliye apne aap ko dukh dete rahenge aur mujhse yeh bardasht nahi hoga... Ab aap hi koi raasta dikhaiye.." Gauri closed her eyes and prayed to her Shankarji.

After a moment,she opened her eyes and she got her answer.

"Maine aapko dil se maaf kardiya hai,Omkara ji.."

Omkara turned around to see Gauri smiling with happy tears as she looked at him. He couldnt believe his ears. He was really very elated.

"Maine aapko sach mein dil se maaf kardiya hai,Omkara ji.. Main apni jatadhari hippie se itni der tak naraaz nahi reh sakti hu.." Gauri came and hugged him tightly.

Omkara feltnat heaven as her petite body hugged him.. He dipped his head on the crook of Gauri's neck. Tears fell from his eyes which wet Gauri's shoulders.

"Main bata nahi sakta ki main kitna khush hu.. Main aaj se waada karta hu ki Omkara Singh Oberoi apni Gauri ka dil kabhi nahi dukhayega.. Aur galti se dukha diya toh woh uska aakhri din.." Omkara couldnt speak further as Gauri slammed her soft petal like lips on his.

Omkara was shocked at her sudden move. He knew that she couldnt bear all this nonsensical talks. She bit his lower lip to gain his attention and she succeeded in doing so. Omkara poured out all his love and care in that single kiss,which was soft yet passionate.

They broke their kiss due to lack of oxygen. Gauri was blushing fully,like a red tomato. She ran towards the other end of the pool while Omkara tried to hold her. Her child like giggles were echoing in the whole pool area. The sound and rhythm of the rain were the bonus points.

Gauri went towards the place where the rain was falling. She spread her hands and twirled around which made Omkara smile from his heart,after ages. She looked like a fairy in that baby pink salwar suit and her open hair added more to her beauty.

"Chehre mein tere
Khud ko main dhoondhun
Aankhon ke darmiyaan
Tu ab hai iss tarah
Khwabon ko bhi jagah na mile.."

Omkara slowly went forward Gauri and pulled her towards him by holding her waist. She looked at him with love filled eyes. Omkara moved a strand of hair which was blocking her face. She blushed again under his gaze.

"Yeh mausam ki baarish
Yeh baarish ka paani
Yeh paani ki boondein
Tujhe hi toh dhoondhe.."

Omkara leaned towards her soft lips and olanted a soft yet chaste kiss,which was only full of love and care. Gauri wrapped her arms around his neck and stroked his back slowly to ease him. Gauri also followed Om.. Om wanted to take it slowly and didnt want to hurt her... She felt him backing out but held his hands and said, "Mujhe apna bana lijiye Om.."

Om looked at Gauri who was looking at him with hope filled eyes. She went near him and hugged him tightly. Om lifted her up and laid her down gently. She turned around as her heartbeats were rapid. She prayed to her Shankarji to keep them together always.

Om turned her slowly and covered themselves with the soft duvet. As he blew away the candles,the moonlight spread across their room,makin it more sensuous and romantic. Gauri blinked her eyes softly to permit him and taking it as a cue..

Om made love to Gauri and they became one soul.

"Yeh milne ki khwahish
Yeh khwahish purani
Ho poori tujhi se
Meri yeh kahaani.."

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The End.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Ye aapne kya kar diya Annika-ji!
I needed to stay mad at Omkara to keep writing my stories aur you made me start to forgive him? Ab kya hoga? Main apne angry Omkara fics kaise likhoongi?

JK...😆 this was amazing... that shaayari, the tone you set for the entire piece. It was so romantic and graceful in its execution. I simply love it... It feels like I just had fun in the rain.

Thank you for that!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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awesome Loved it...
its was so cute
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Yeh kya hai.. injustice kar diya tune..
I feel you should have written more.. 😆
You know when i read beautiful stories and am eager to read more the story ends.. 😆
You have started off beautifully, i thought you will continue much longer. Please write more parts on Omkaara yearning for G also. Our girl deserves that.. 😊

Coming to the parts.. the pool setting was just perfect.. rain, pool Rikaara are all one perfect combination and the entire scene was very poetic.

You have potrayed the very forgiving nature of our GKS in the last part. She is like that when it comes to Omkaara he is her weakness.. I for one was liking that she told him, make me yours.. She should do it.. It was very sweet update.. but am longing for more.. 😳

Thanks for PM!!

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