RiKara OS - Aaj Jaane Ki Zid Na Karo - Page 3

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Aaj jane ki zid na karo... ufff.. sounds totally filmy n passionate n works brilliantly for these soulmates... RiKara... yet another so much in love take from ya... hats off girlie... 🤗... you are on a creative roll n m super glad... yeah RiKara need to begin asap in the show for your creative juices to keep flowing n aur kuch nahi toh definitely for this reason m getting impatient.. cant wait for their story to begin now.. and with the glimpse that we had with the star parivar video.. these two are gonna redefine every commonplace venue n activity.. 😆.. can totally see Omkara getting flirty with this super busy Gauri n pouting when she doesnt give him time... off course after two hundred rounds of get lost... preferably from both the side 😆... okay i need to stop n talk about this story n i will 😆

So we have this Gauri who finally takes things in her hands.. Omkara re Omkara kya hoga aapka... thank God for Gauri... n then the song simply elevated this romantic rendezvous to another level... such depth such fire... such all encompassing passion finally makes the mask of fake detachability slip away n Omkara gives in to his feelings... i grinned all through...so lovely to see them like ... blissful n far removed from all the darkness of the world.. just the two of them n their love... wow...

Brilliantly written... its all heavily laden with emotions n all romantic... me loves this fiery Gauri... such amazeballs.. cuties... 😃... chalo am off now to comment on your ff... you will be hearing again from me 😆...

Bye for now
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Loved reading it, awesome work!
Totally dig the way you pen down your stories-and this goes for all of them!! 👏
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Ooh another one
Honestly you are too good
I loved it
Thought the use of the song was just something
I think you show intimacy really interesting look into gauris pov
Love it love it love it
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Posted: 8 years ago
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woow...It's awesome...so beautifully written...
Edited by arohiarsh16 - 8 years ago

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