Shattered. [FF|Rudra. Soumya. OBros] - updated: page.5

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Ashliana

@wayback

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#11

It is just brilliant..

This is what exactly wish to see for Rumya ...

A lovely one.. grey fl is a lovely idea with so much potential to show.. but alas cvs..

Waiting for the next part...

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1018283

Hibernated

Posted: 8 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: Madhura..
Noor, did not know you write so exceptionally Amazing! This is a whole thriller, Grey shades and gripping! Superb and on Rumya and Obros.
Gosh so Om saved Ru and not Saumya ka bhai!!

Thanks, Madhu! 😳 Glad you liked the introduction to the story! 😆 Been wanting to write something on RuMya with grey Soumya for ages and ginally, thoda time milla! And OBros are never missing from my stories 😛

Let's say, the situation's a bit more complicated - but the crux is exactly that 😆

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1018283

Hibernated

Posted: 8 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: manny136
Loved it. I so wanted sumos bros death be connected to the oberois. Can wait for next update.

I've always wanted his death to be connected to them, too! 😆 The brother-angle just seemed so essential to Soumya and her backstory - even with the Kapoor angle coming up, I'd like it to stay. Glad you liked the prologue! 😉

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Lekha

@Echo.of.Hope

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#14

Noor...Ami...I read the first chapter and I've decided that DBO doesn't exist to me...only your FF does because you are doing justice to characters.

It's brilliant and as always I love your writing. 'Damocles sword' ... 'Achilles heel'... you like the greek mythology huh?

I liked to be added to your PM list... waiting for the next part.

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arachne

@arachne

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#15

Res

I see people asking for updates already. Poor souls..they have no idea of your fickle nature 😭

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LiveLoveLaugh96

@LiveLoveLaugh96

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#16

This is so amazing
Can u email this to Harneet
She might need some inspirations 🤣
But no, on a serious note
This is awesome
Lovedd itt ❤️
Cant wait to read the rest
Do update soon

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1018283

Hibernated

Posted: 8 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: .Khamosh.
Interesting prologue
Eagerly waiting for the updates

Thanks! 😆 And you're Anisha, right? UN change? 😆

Will try to update soon! 😉

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1018283

Hibernated

Posted: 8 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: wayback
It is just brilliant..
This is what exactly wish to see for Rumya ...
A lovely one.. grey fl is a lovely idea with so much potential to show.. but alas cvs..
Waiting for the next part...

Thank you! 😳

The grey angle has a lot of potential - and would be such a great story if handled well 😆 Don't know what the CVs have planned for the show, but I'll try to give it my best 😉

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Madhura

@Madhura..

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#19

When are you going to update? Soon does not give time frame.

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1018283

Hibernated

Posted: 8 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: Echo.of.Hope
Noor...Ami...I read the first chapter and I've decided that DBO doesn't exist to me...only your FF does because you are doing justice to characters.

It's brilliant and as always I love your writing. 'Damocles sword' ... 'Achilles heel'... you like the greek mythology huh?

I liked to be added to your PM list... waiting for the next part.

Aww, thanks, Lekha 🤗 Glad you liked the start of it! 😆

And yes, I do! 8 years of Latin classes - I love the ancient times and their mythology! 😆

I'll PM you 😉