Creative Critics Corner: 05/09/11

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This Thread will be opened only by the the following Piya Bawari's exclusively for now.. As we days go by the other sincere Bawari's will be given an opportunity to open the Thread.

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Monday : Elizabeth Darcy - Lizzy

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Wednesday: Manasi

Thursday : Vandy

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PoV of Overall Epi: Take a bow, CVs, you did an incredible job today!! Nice and pacy, non-judgemental (again) and well-shot and well-acted...the cast and crew did a FAB job today 👏 10/10

Points that we liked: Where do I start! I loved Kastur's nervous blurting-out in front of Mohan, that was wonderfully natural, as was Mohan's reaction to Jai Shree Mohan. 😆 Baa's little tidbit about them playing together helps us a little in terms of timeline and how they used to interact...Baa's conversation with Baapji gave us the right amount of laughter, as did the way Kastur's brother kept teasing her. I also loved how you show the Galla family as a family that does like its own sense of freedom through Vipul's dialogue about the drinks. Also loved the dance...it was amazingly performed, peppy and fast, with reminders of how Kastur was feeling. I ALSO loved the precap: so far the CVs have shown us many scenes of Kastur but much of these scenes don't tell us much about her individually...in this I love how Kastur is looking at the entire situation practically and trying to see whether it will work or not.

Points that we disliked: Chunks of the dance were edited, other than that I don't really find much.

Mention Bloopers: None so far...but why does Mohan still not remember Kastur despite playing with her as children and how come they never really properly met as teens? Please give us proper background on MohUr prior to Mohan's departure, please!

Msgs for the lead Actors (Sincere Comments): HC was absolutely brilliant today...from the 'what' when Kastur says Jai Shree Mohan, to the dance, to the expression on his face when Baapji catches him drinking...HC was REALLY superb!

Aasiya did a lovely job of showing her utter nervousness and confusion...she was fumbling and saying silly things and completely natural about it! I loved her in the precap too!

Msgs for the rest of the cast../team/makeup/costume department: Costumes and overall look was terrific today, even for the minor characters such as Nikita. ALL the crew did a great job today...Baapji's draamebazi seems to have toned down a bit, which is wonderful, and Baa really rocked it in that convo with Baapji...loved Vipul and Kirti's interaction as well as the way Kannu and Jassuben danced to the music...you added little little touches that gave the epi that great feel without sacrificing on the pace or dragging anything.

Suggestions for handling of tracks: Please give us a full overview of the history behind the children's interactions and whether they knew each other that well. It would be hard to relate to a character who has fallen for a picture only, so something that includes her admiring him from afar when they were in school would work - she is after all 3-4 years younger to him and it would be normal for someone her age to have a crush on a senior. Also, you are now developing the characters...please focus on them, and focus well.

Other suggestions: Keep the pace crisp and the lines effective, and we'll have a winner on our hands! 👍🏼

Sry ppl...Gonna break from the format this time.will try and stick to it as much as possible...No offence haan...

For the time being we will follow a format for the review, which will be as follows:

PoV of Overall Epi:

Entertaining

Points that we liked:

The bit where Kastur said Jai shree mohan and mohan's amazing reaction of "what" to it 🤣

Mohan keeping his hand on nee kee taa's shoulder and whispering in her ear and getting closer to her and Saroj getting delighted seeing his happy son 😳

Mohan's dance on IHLS ofcourse 😍

The Baa-Baapji convo was light-hearted and quiet alright and thankfully it wasnt PJish 😆

Points that we disliked:

Constant shifting of the camera to Kastur during IHLS dance sequence ... Agreed Kastur's reaction needed to be shown, but what I didnt like was how the camera not only focussed on kastur's face but the camera went over kastur from bottom to top at places very unnecessary

Mention Bloopers:

As said by Baa it seems MohUr knew each other quite well before Mohan left for London ... Yet Mohan didnt even remember her name... There I hope they do give a proper explanation of how and why Mohan didnt seem to recognize Kastur since acc to what Baa said MohUr were quite close and friendly with each other 4 years back... Point taken that its possible to forget someone whom you dont consider important over a span of 4 years abroad, but yet they do need to give some explanation on this part

Msgs for the lead Actors (Sincere Comments):

Harshad rocked it yesterday! In each scene he was he rocked ... Aasiya too was spot on in the Jai Shri Mohan scene and even after that when she runs away and blushes ... ummm the reactions she was giving during the IHLS seq seemed kinda repetitive and consistent.. May be it was the editing that added same bits in between but would have liked if there would have been atleast slightest variations in expressions while reacting to Mohan-Nikita chemistry

Msgs for the rest of the cast../team/makeup/costume department:

Harshad was looking hawt and totally dashing ... loved his attitre ... and his attitude added charm to it all the more ... Thankfully he had udti zulfein and no gelled hair 😍

Aasiya's dress was pretty .. her hairstyle needs some changes now and then .. cos she is getting the same hairstyle in every epi .. some slight changes here and there would make it just better ... thankfully her makeup is minimal but its too light for her..a lil bit bright one would add glow to her and would help kastur stand apart from the crowd ...

Supriya ji was looking gorgeous in the red saree ... her makeup too does suite her and her character ... She was so cute when she was enjoying Mohan's dance and his moves 😆 and also she was so delighted to see Mohan share a nice comfort level with Nikita 😆

Suggestions for handling of tracks:

The show is finally picking up pace and moving forward after the dragging ... Hope they keep up the pace and dont slow down anywhere .. Also CVs need to remember time and again that Baapji is NOT the lead of the show and so too much focus on him will really not make things interesting ... We have already understood the strict character of Baapji so they can now stop focussing on building up his character 😆

PoV of Overall Epi:

Points that we liked:

Points that we disliked:

Mention Bloopers:

Msgs for the lead Actors (Sincere Comments):

harshad...harshad...harshad...

none...for now

Suggestions for handling of tracks:

Other suggestions:

none