17th July Written Update

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Posted: 17 years ago
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😆😉😆ITS ME!!!!

Thanks guys for praying for me!🥰 You guys are so sweet!😀 And today I am updating in the kitchenConfused And there are loads of people still hereConfused Koi privacy nahin raheeOuch
Oh and yesterday I missed that Shera quote the doli one😆 and its cause my mum was calling for me so I kinda rushed the last part of my updateShocked I know very bad wont happen today!😀 Inshallah...Confused Allah hi jaaney... iss kitchen main bahut zyadah hi family hain....
Anyway!
Here we go!

RECAP:
Veer nightmareOuch
Dharam Veer Moment😆🥰
Veer Shera Fight😆😉
RamJaane gone to Baba to tell all the latest news about KhazanaConfusedOuch
Nivriti also having nightmaresOuch
Pari and Nivriti have A mOMENT...
Malik threatens Agni😆
Agni panicking about Jai mamas slaps😆
Malik dresses up in fancy dress and steals clue from DharamDead
Shera knows a shortcut😀👏🏻

AND NOW....

We start with PariOuch who is in Veers room and imagining him everywhereConfused Veer is dressed in BLUE😉 and hes lying on the bed and Pari reaches out to him but he disappearsOuch
Meanwhile Nivriti is also remembering VeerOuch and remembering when Veer covered her eyes with his hands and asked her if he could go to the Shramiks place to catch Bhimsen for Dharams Birthday (Wow Veer looks good in green/blue too! What colour does he not look good in?😉)
Nivriti is sobbing her heart outOuch and so is PariOuch God this is depressing...

Family member1: Hey what are you watching?
Aisha: Um excuse me Im kinda busy can you leave?
Mum: Aisha! We have parohnay!
Familymember2: Hey thats DharamVeer!
Aisha: For Gods sake! Im trying to do something! Do you mind?!Angry
Family member3: Why are they crying?
Aisha: *Feels like bashing her head on the wall* Look! I have something important to do! Either be quiet or leave!Angry
Mum: AISHA!Angry
Aisha: Muuuum.....Ouch
Familymember4: Hey those two women are remembering the same baby? Whose the real mother?
Aisha: Bravely ignores Annoyingfamily and keeps typing

Right where am I... Ah yes! Nivriti and Pari are both remembering Veer as a baby, Nivriti is remembering when she found him in the basket and Pari has gone nutsConfused and is imagining Veer sitting at the window He smiles at her🥰 and reaches out to her but when Pari reaches out to him he disappears.... Wow this is such a sad scene....Ouch And now both Pari and Nivriti are praying for him.... *sighs sadly*

Over to Shera and DharamVeer!!!!😀
Shera runs forward with DharamVeer following her!

Familymember2: Woah... she's HOT!😜
Aisha: God! Will you shut up?!Angry
Mum: AISHA!Angry
Familymember2: Well she IS
Familymember1: If anyones hot its that guy in orange.... He looks nice.....🥰
Aisha: HEY! He's mine! Go get someone else!Angry

Sorry guys. Anyway Shera points somewhere and says: Look over there! We've reaches the Graveyard!
DharamVeer follow Shera as she moves forward Veer has his sword out 😀

Familymember1: Wow that Purple guy is HOT too! What programme is this?
Aisha: None of your business Get lost!

Veer smiles at Shera *swooning* Pepsi! Oh I dont have any...Ouch Anyway Veer says: So you get scared huh?
Dharam: Thats enough Veer stop joking Before Agni and Malik get here first! We have to get the treasure and get out too!
Shera: Dont worry! Only Ananya and her father know about the shortcut! It'll take Agni at least a day to get here lets go!
Veer goes in first and Dharam smiles at Ananya Veer then lights a torch-

Familymember5: What are you watching?
Familymember2: Be quiet yaar I cant hear if youre talking
Familymember1: What there was a torch just lying around there in that cave?
Aisha *imagines bashing them all in*

ANYWAYAngry Veer lights two torches and gives one to Ananya and then watches her as she goes ahead of him-

Familymember2: He likes her does he? No wonder... look at how Hot she is...That guys lucky...
Aisha *glares at him*

Veer lights another torch and gives it to Dharam and they both follow Ananya into the cave. I wouldnt go in. I watch horror movies people I know what can happen in a situation like this...Confused
Oh great theres RamJaane and Baba behind them and RamJaane already has a torch

Familymember5: If anyones hot its that guy!
.........................
Everyone stares at Familymember5Confused
Aisha: Youthink RamJaane is Hot??!!Confused
Familymember5: No! But hes cute too No I mean that pirate guy!
Aisha: Ewwwww!!!! Baba????Confused

Ew. Moving on. Agni and Malik are wandering around. Malik no longer dressed up. thank God.Dead

Familymember5: *whistles* Whoooo.... THOSE GUYS ARE HOT!!!
Aisha: ConfusedConfusedConfusedDeadDeadDead I will pretend that I didnt hear that...

Agni is getting fed up wandering and starts complaining to Malik
Agni: If you walk this slow DharamVeer will get ahead of us and leave with the Treasure!
Malik swipes at Agnis feet with his crutches
Agni What the hell are you doing?!
Malik Trying to see how fast you walk with broken legs
😆 Agni shuts up

DharamVeer and Shera are in the cave looking around and Dharam says He doesnt see how a flower could grow down here....
Shera: The special thing about this flower is that it opens only at night! Dont know what it looks like but its probably really beautiful!🥰
Veer looks at her!!!😉😉😉

Familymember5: Wow does he like her?
Family members2: Yeah... lucky *censored*
Aisha: HEY! Dont you swear at him!Angry
Familmember2: SorryOuch

Dharam: Ok look we'll all search for it seperately ok?
Shera: okay...
Veer looks worried as they all seperate....Ouch
Bad feeling Alert!!!

Familymember2: Oh great... This is going to be bad... You NEVER split up! EVER Somethings going to happen I bet its going to be bad.....
Aisha *nods worriedly*

Dharam Veer and Shera are all searching in seperate places and theyfind nothing but vines and dust and stones
Veer then goes into a place where there are some creepy statuesConfused and goes forward.... What is that?

*Aisha and FamilyMembers12345 lean forward eagerly*

Veer smiles (!!!!!)🥰😜😉
Familymember5: WHOOO!!! *fans herself* Now HE is SUPERHOT!!!
Aisha: I know! *squeals*

Veer calls for Dharam Dharam hears him and goes to him Then Veer remembers Ananya saying that she always wanted to see this flower so he goes looking for her!!! AWWW!!!!😀🥰 He finds her searching in another room and calls her!
She goes to him!!!!🥰😉
HE TAKES THE TORCH OFF HER!😀😉 OHMYGODOHMYGODOHMYGOD!
Ananya is surprised 😜
Veer tells her to close her eyes (OHMYGOD!!!! *SQUEALS*) and come with him
Ananya starts to argue but Veer tells her to close her eyes
Ananya is like What-The-Hell?
AND THEN VEER REACHES OUT AND CLOSES HER EYES FOR HER!!!

Familymember135 and Aisha: *squealing*
Familmember5: GOd hes so romantic!!! HOT AND ROMANTIC!!! WHAT A GUY!!!
Familymember2: *sulking* Hes not real....
Familymember135 and Aisha *ignore him and jump up and down in excitement*

Oooooooooooh Veer is so dreamy and DropDeadGorgeous in this scene!!! He takes Ananyas hand and they both leave! AWWWW!!!!🥰🥰🥰😉😉😉
AND THEN VEER LEAVES HER BETWEEN THE TWO STATUES -oops sorry caps lock- and he stands in front of her and says: Heres your flower
And he moves aside and Ananya opens her eyes and sees the Flower and then shes all happy😜 and Veer is just watching her😉 and then Ananya looks at him 🥰 they both smile at each other!!! and ITS SO CUTE! AND SWEET! AND ROMANTIC! AND-

Familymembers: Hey! Move on with the story yaar!

Ahem. Yeah sorry. Veer smiles *squeals* and asks: Do you need anything else?
Familymember5: Hell yeah... I wouldnt mind having you....
Aisha: Hey! Keep your eyes off him!

Ananya looks longingly at Veer *sighs dreamily* and they just look at each other and-
Dharam comesOuch Way to ruin a great Moment

Familymember2: Kabab mein haddi!😆😆😆
Familymember1: Hey! HE IS NOT!!! HES JUST AS HOT!!!Angry

VeerShera look at Dharam as he points out the flower and says This means the Khazana is here! Veer Shera smile!!!!

Familymember5: Khazana? What Khazana?Confused
Familymember2: Hey keep up!
Aisha: Shut.Up.

Anyway over to RamJaane and Baba who are entering the cave-
Familymember5: They're entering it now?! What were they doing just standing around???
Aisha *glares at FamilyMember5*
FamilyMember5: Thats so stupid-
Aisha *Hits her in the head*
Mum: AISHA!!!Angry APOLOGISE!!!!
Aisha*Apologises*
Mum leaves kitchen
Aisha: *Hits FamilyMember5 harder*
FamilyMember5: HEY!
Aisha: Talk again and I'll kill you!Angry
FamilyMember2:😆😆😆 Dont make fun of her programme she'll kill you! She's obsessed! Mental problem! Obsessive Compulsive Disorder!!!😆😆😆
Aisha looks at him warningly
FamilyMember2: *Shuts up*

Right as I was saying before I was SO RUDELY interrupted *glares at family* RamJaane and Baba are entering the cave and DharamVeer and Shera are looking at the flower.
Dharam: Veer! This flower is only on one cave!😀👏🏻
Veer: The way to the Khazana must be thriough this grave!
Shera looks worried ........Ouch
They all go forward to check out the grave and Shera finds the SunSymbol on the grave!😀 They all try to open the grave but they cantOuch and Veer gets annoyed and hits his fist against the Sunsymbol and a door opens up behind them!!!😀
Shera tells Veer to turn the Sunsymbol and whne Veer turns it the door opens wider!!! So Indiana Jones!!! YAY!!!!😀
Veer looks inside then he looks at Shera and then he says: What if theres a ghost inside?😆😆😆
Shera looks a little annoyed😆😆😆 and says Ananya isnt scared of anything!
Veer😆😆😆 Yeah! Youre just like them! Oh God! I just got scared!😆😆😆
Dharam: Ho gaya? Ab chaley?
😆😆😆 Ah Dharam Youre so funny!😀😆
Dharam goes in and Veer asks Ananya if shes coming or not and Ananya looks away annoyed so Veer just goes in😆😆😆 and Ananya looks offended and follows!😉
RamJaane and Baba watch as the door closes behind themOuchOuchOuchConfused and RamJaane says: Theyve gone into someones grave!😆
Baba: soon it will become their grave as soon as they come out we will steal the Khazana and kill DharamVeerOuchOuchOuch
Ah damn it....

Meanwhile Malik and Agni are still wandering aimlessly and stop to rest Agni starts complaining and moaning to MalikDead and they bothe start arguing about whats more important Killing DharamVeer or the Khazana😆 Agni gets threatened by Malik😆 and Agni gets angry and starts ripping the tree up😆 and curses Maliks Khazana😆

While theyre fighting DharamVeer and Shera are going through a dark tunnel-

Familymember2: Thats a room Aisha not a tunnel cant you see?
Aisha *glares*
😆😆😆
They are going through a dark ROOM not a tunnel *sniffs haughtily*
Shera: ITS SO dark here... I cant see anything...
Veer: Even in daylight you can see nothing clearly😆😆😆
Veer lights another torch goes past Ananya and gives it to Dharam😆
They all go forward into another room
and Shera says: This place is so beautiful!
Veer: If you want you can stay here! Me and Dharam will come and visit you huh Dharam?😆
Dharam: Yeah and all night you can sit and see your Flowers too😆
Aw theyre so bad teasing her like that!😀😆
Veer laughs and Ananya looks at him a little upset (Aww becharee Shera! Shes so sensitive!😉)
Dharam notices and says: Uh I mean-
Ananya cuts him off and says: The work weve come for we should complete no?
Veer: haan haan mein toh bool he gaya tah you only care about the Khazana
Ooooh...
So they all go forward and were back to RamJaane and Baba
RamJaane is making funny faces😆 and is all scared but when he tells Baba Baba gives him the evil eye😆

Shera Dharam and Veer are searching the room and wouldnt it be funny if the khazana wasnt gold but a moral lesson?😆 Sorry I got sidetracked.
Theyre searching searching searching...
Shera says Theres nothing here
Veer says There must be some path forward
So they do some more searching....Sleepy
That set is really lovely.....
And while searching Veer Shera bump into each other😆 and they stare at each other and then Shera stalks away😆 and Veer says: Ziddi!
😆
Look whose talking!!!!
So they search more and then Ananya stumblesShocked
Veer calls out to her😜
And grabs her hand!!!🥰😉😉😉

Familymember2: Uh Aisha? You need to mention the torch falling and putting fire to the oil on the ground?
Aisha I was GOING to mention that *glares*

Yeah the torch falls and sets fire to the oil anyway Veer grabs Shera!!!!
And he pulls her towards him!!!
and they have an eyelock session!!!😉😉😉
YAY!!!!
SO CUTE AND SWEET AND ROMANTIC!!! AND -

Familymember2: Aisha? The oil is on fire. Aisha. The oil. Hello?
Aisha: Yeah I KNOW! *Glares*

Yeah so the oil is on fireDead and Veer and Shera are lost in each other🥰😜😉 and dont notice but Dharam notices and calls Veer and then they realise that the place is on fire!!!!
And-

Thats it!
Episode ends!!!!
Oooooooh wonder what'll happen tomorrow!!!!😀
MORE VEER SHERA MOMENTS HOPEFULLY!!!

Familymember2: Yeah and that can only happen if they escape the fire
Aisha: Hey noones asking you okay?Angry
Familymember2: What? Im just saying!
Familymember: Plus hes right How can they have moments if they die in the fire?
Aisha: They arent going to di-
Familymember5: How will they escape? And why was oil there anyway? Thats so weird and stupid
Familymember4: I know that is stupid. Theyre gonna die.
Aisha: No theyre-
Familymember1: Of course they wont die if they die then thats the end of the programme!
Aisha: Hey you-
Familymember2: They could always replace the characters but theres no way they'll find someone hotter than that Ananya girl
Aisha: Hey could you-
Familymembers *ignore Aisha and leave kitchen discussing MY programme*

GodAngry My family is so..... ANNOYINGAngry
*sighs*

Tomorrow guys!

Aisha xxx😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
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🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗 thanks first...
will comment afterwards
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Posted: 17 years ago
#3

thanks alot dear.. a wonderfull update as always 👏🏻 👏🏻 👏🏻...

& I liked the family update too 😆 😆 😆.. thanks again Aisha 🙂...
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey diaa got any of that chocolate and pepsi left?😆

Aisha xxx😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
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OMG! i really love ur updates..this one of the family members was really good (atleast for me). So many opinions..wow!😆
its clearly visible that memeber 2 is a boy...ahem...me deviating from the topic.
thax for the update, i hope u make written updated of all episodes
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Posted: 17 years ago
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wat a lovely update .... thanks Aisha for putting up such an effort
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: thornewood9

hey diaa got any of that chocolate and pepsi left?😆

Aisha xxx😉

yeah I always have plenty of that 😀.. I'll PM u some 😉 😜 😆 😆 😆...
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Good written update...
Keep it up ....
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Gr8 update as usual.Ur family is also so funny just like u.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hehe thnk u fot the wonderful update...i loved ure family update to..jkes...n dharam is even funnier ''ho gaya tho chale''😆

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