Poem for Rajat written by me...do read!!

Hey guys herez a poem I wrote for RT...(I can't beleive I can write poems😲)My first try at poem-writing..😛

19th July ke din ek anokhe taare ne janam liya,

Jald hi usne sabka pyaar haasil kiya,

Bade hokar usne pure sansar main uska naam roshan kiya,

Naam hain uska Rajat Tokas,

Aur usne itni choti si umra mein itihaas likha.

Prithviraj Chauhan ke kirdaar main usne paya aisa mukam,

Ki har taraf hui uski prashansa aur usne payte bahut se inaam,

Phir Veer ke andaz ne sabko dilon par raaj kiya,

Aur Television ne apna naya sitara paaya,

Aur apni laajawab acting se Rajat ne sabko lubhaya.

Aaj uske janamdin ke avsar par,

Dil se dete hain hum use yeh dua,

Ki woh pehne Kaamyabi ka sehra,

Kaayam rahe humesha uski cute si muskaan,

Aur jeevan mein har taraf mile use khushiya beshumaar.

Do tell me if you like it 😃

hey reets,its superbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbb bbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbb bbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbb bbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbb yaar 👏 ........r u sure that this is ur 1st try??????? 😉 😉
man....wat a poem!!!!!!!!! 👏
u must include it in the b'day card that u've made for rajat....he'll love this!!!! 😊

Awww Astha...*blush blush* 😳 Yeah..I have included it in the card..but dunno whether it'll reach him..I sent it a bit late ..Well yeah it is my first try 😛

fantasticcccccccccc.....if there ever was a poem competion then im 10000000% sure u will tke the trophy..... 😃
n i think ure lying this cnt be ure 1st try...... 😉 😆 it was superrbbbbb 👏 👏

Originally posted by: mad-about-Rajat

Awww Astha...*blush blush* 😳 Yeah..I have included it in the card..but dunno whether it'll reach him..I sent it a bit late ..Well yeah it is my first try 😛

don't loose hope yaar 🤗 🤗
he'll get ur card & will read it on the show..... 😳 😃

Originally posted by: heaven princess

fantasticcccccccccc.....if there ever was a poem competion then im 10000000% sure u will tke the trophy..... 😃
n i think ure lying this cnt be ure 1st try...... 😉 😆 it was superrbbbbb 👏 👏

Thanks a lot Seema🤗no i'm not lying😆

Originally posted by: frend4ever

don't loose hope yaar 🤗 🤗
he'll get ur card & will read it on the show..... 😳 😃

Hope so😳

GUrrlIee.!!
oWWwsSUmm!! maZzhtt..
jaaKaaZzz..
laaajaaavaaAab!!
innsssshaallaaHh.!!

laage raahoooo !! 👏


aache temme u're sending personal cardds ki ek IF ki taraf se? 😕 😕 😕

Wow reeti, luvly poem dear 👏 👏 👏 I do hope it gets read on sbs 😛 & Do post it in RT fan thread # 5 also 😊

Originally posted by: mad-about-Rajat

Hey guys herez a poem I wrote for RT...(I can't beleive I can write poems😲)My first try at poem-writing..😛

19th July ke din ek anokhe taare ne janam liya,

Jald hi usne sabka pyaar haasil kiya,

Bade hokar usne pure sansar main uska naam roshan kiya,

Naam hain uska Rajat Tokas,

Aur usne itni choti si umra mein itihaas likha.

Prithviraj Chauhan ke kirdaar main usne paya aisa mukam,

Ki har taraf hui uski prashansa aur usne payte bahut se inaam,

Phir Veer ke andaz ne sabko dilon par raaj kiya,

Aur Television ne apna naya sitara paaya,

Aur apni laajawab acting se Rajat ne sabko lubhaya.

Aaj uske janamdin ke avsar par,

Dil se dete hain hum use yeh dua,

Ki woh pehne Kaamyabi ka sehra,

Kaayam rahe humesha uski cute si muskaan,

Aur jeevan mein har taraf mile use khushiya beshumaar.

Do tell me if you like it 😃

tooooooooooo guddddddddddd