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Posted: 16 years ago
awsome update Shona...loved all of it!...loved listenin or rather readin VV's lovestory lol...loved da dias...absolutely fab! wah else can i say...u av left me a lil speechless...mwah xxx
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: jigs_b

wow!!!!!!!! great part shona....lovely.. ...vishva part 1 ki sab puraani i mean starting episodes ki saari baatein yaad aa gayi😳😍 yup it was like going down memory lane for VV

back to this part....
Its great that Sia Maharani hote hue bhi shramiks ki itna care karti hai....dharam ki jai ho....jo usne sia ki soch ko badal diya!!!👏 yup well as she isnt like that in the show i thought i'd make her like this in my FF atleast....true round of applause for Dharam for changing her so much!
hahhhaha...vishva is giving training to Parth..how to propose sanchi...😆....but Parth is a gone case🤣...he cant easily speak those words...😆...he cant even say it in front of Vishva..abb sanchi ko kya bolega??... true parth is pathetic when it cums to proposing....but in the coming parts u will see he will act normal n will spend more time with Sanchi...he is following Veer's tips n advise😆
Ohhh..so here comes our hero too...they involved veer too😆..yup veer must be involved...u cant get a better love guru than him can u?
Veer remebered his n Vishva's first meeting. And Vishva also recollect all those memory...wow...Shona sach me woh first part yad aa gaya..it ws so lovely part!!!🤗yup they are remembering their prem kahaani ki shuruat...which does remind of the first part...i loved it n im glad u liked it too
Vishva is so glad that veer changed her life...yh she feels like its a new life for her n she wants to forget the 17 yrs of life she spent without Veer😳
wow...Veers is sooo romantic..i like the way he explained eveything abt Vishva..jab woh dukhi hoti hai, woh khush hoti hai,woh soch rahi ho ya kuchh kehna chahti ho...sab kuchh veer ko pata chal jaata hai..wow..hubby ho to aisa...again i m using this word..hehehhe..but veer hai hi aisa..uski taarif karne se dil nahi bharta....😆yh he is romantic n knows all the small habits of vishva...he is a perfect hubby...
wow..kya explainantion diya love ke baare me veer ne...n also he made painting of vishva....so cute n lovely😳😍yh tahts love for him...n the painting also was a cutre idea i thought😳
and also like the way veer explained to parth how to know abt his feelings for sanchi....wow....veer show him the true way...ans he asked him to spend some more time with sanchi..so he wud understand what he really feels for her..is it love or something else..?? and he also come to know what sanchi thinks abt him...gud gud veer..i like ur view....yup vishva was hurrying things but Veer is thinking it through n asking Parth to be very clear and all...also having been in a similar situation with Vishva he has experience😃
Precap....hehheh shona..hume intezaar karne ke liye chhod diya..this is not fair yaar...hum nahi kar sakte wait..😆lol sabra ka phal meta hota hai
sanchi aur parth ki takkar....kitna takrate hai dono!!!😆..wow n sanchi red red!!!😳yup agen takar
ok now me waiting for the next part...jaldi update karna dear...will update it faster this time
Fantastic part...shona....thanks tum mujhe Vishvas ki puraani yaadon me vapas le gayi...because Vishvas part 1 is one of my favourite story of DVs FF...thank u so much nima di....im realli happy u liked this part n that it reminds u of Vishvaas 1...wow i didnt know it was one of ur favs....thank u so mich for ur comments 🤗
Awesome work dear...keep going!!!🤗

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: meghaparti

Well the colourful update was great as usual shona....Awee that was so cute...veer knew whatever vishwa did whenever she is experiencing different emotions of life....that part was really cute....Pls. continue...waiting for the next part

thx megha...im glad u liek the colourful updates
yup veer notices all these little things...yup it was cute
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: CutieA

awsome update Shona...loved all of it!...loved listenin or rather readin VV's lovestory lol...loved da dias...absolutely fab! wah else can i say...u av left me a lil speechless...mwah xxx

thx ams
im glad u loved it...
wow im realli happy u liked the dias n the story
🤗
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Posted: 16 years ago
aaawwwwww so cute and romantic part i really liked sia caring for shraamiks so cute yeh sab to dharam ka kamaal hai na and vishva she is advising parth how to propose so cute and now veer is invoved so nice and wo yaadien phir tum ne yaad diladi shona wo haseen lamhe hum kabhi nahin bhool sakte, and veer making vishva's painting so romantic aur ab phir se parth aur sanchi ki takraar kia baat hai yaar plz jaldi continue karo i can't wait...
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Posted: 16 years ago
AWW...shona..it is sooo romantic.....loved VV part😍...this part reminded me of the First Vishvaas......woow...veer is such a romeo.....😆..i loved the colourful update as usual....😳....vishva teaching...parth how to propose ..but bechara nai kar sakha..haha🤣 vo apni didi ko nai batha sakha...tho sanchi keh samne kya apna mu kholega...🤣🤣😳
Veer painted Pictures of vishva😲 vo bhi ab multi talented nikla.hehe......and sia caring for the shramiks..so nice .....👏taliya for dharam for changing her so much.....from a
attitudefull...Rajkumari to a sweet caring...wife...

i love how Sanchi and And parth...love updates are going..so romantic and funny...😆

cnt w8 4 ure next update....it was worth waiting for this...😳

update soon,.....and keep rocking the fan fic😉

Seema
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: hiri

aaawwwwww so cute and romantic part i really liked sia caring for shraamiks so cute yeh sab to dharam ka kamaal hai na and vishva she is advising parth how to propose so cute and now veer is invoved so nice and wo yaadien phir tum ne yaad diladi shona wo haseen lamhe hum kabhi nahin bhool sakte, and veer making vishva's painting so romantic aur ab phir se parth aur sanchi ki takraar kia baat hai yaar plz jaldi continue karo i can't wait...

esha

im glad u liked sia's part...yup all is dharam's kamaal
yup VV saath milke Parth ki prem kahaani savarenge
yh i guess this part tends to remind ppl of the beginning parts of vishvaas where VV had just met...im glad u remebered them😊
yup veer is very romantic and made the painting
Parth and sanchi collide agen and this one will be gd hopeful
will try to update today!
thank u for reading and commenting esha!
Edited by **Shona** - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
@ ekta-Thank u ekta im pleased u liked it
@ xoxcuddlesxox- thank u im glad u enjoyed-btw whats ur name?
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: heaven princess

AWW...shona..it is sooo romantic.....loved VV part😍glad u liked it...this part reminded me of the First Vishvaas.yh it does remind of first part.....woow...veer is such a romeo.....😆yup he is onli it was vishva who jumped through teh balcony n not veer😆..i loved the colourful update as usual....😳..glad to hear that😃..vishva teaching...parth how to propose ..but bechara nai kar sakha..haha🤣 vo apni didi ko nai batha sakha...tho sanchi keh samne kya apna mu kholega...🤣🤣😳tru parth can do all the flirting and all but when it comes to proposing he is lost for words
Veer painted Pictures of vishva😲 vo bhi ab multi talented nikla.heheyup veer is a gr8 artist too......and sia caring for the shramiks..so nice yup it is...wish she did that in teh show.....👏taliya for dharam for changing her so muchyup well deserved applause👏👏👏.....from a
attitudefull...Rajkumari to a sweet caring...wife...

i love how Sanchi and And parth...love updates are going..so romantic and funny...😆 im glad u like their story...thats why i putting teh whole mission thing off for a while

cnt w8 4 ure next update....it was worth waiting for this...😳

update soon,.....and keep rocking the fan fic😉

thank u seema for reading n commenting..im glad u liked it...hope u like the following parts too



Seema

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Posted: 16 years ago

Vishvaas 2 Part 9

Parth and Sanchi stare at each other lost in each others eyes...Sanchi came to her sense and immediately retracted her hand away from Parth's and Parth noticed that...he remembered his conversation with Veer and decided to be more himself...he broke the silence

Parth: do din mein do bar ap humse takrayi...kahin ye takrar pyar na ban jaye
Sanchi: nahin bane gi
Parth: dekh te hai
Sanchi: dekhiye ga
Parth: waise apko lagta nahin ke hum itafak se bohat bar takrate hai
Sanchi: kya matlab hai apka
Parth: hum itni bar milte hai...shayad ye ek sanked hai ke humme dosti karleni chahiye
Sanchi: shayad ye sirf ek itafak hai
Parth: ab jo bhi kahe humme aisa nahin lagta...
Sanchi: humme jaana hai...maharani bula rahi hai
she goes to take the bowl from Parth's hand only he doesnt let go
Parth: kya ap mujhese dosti karengi
Sanchi looks down for a second...she spends a couple moments looking down n then looks up at the handsome features of Parth....she wanted to accept his friendship but didnt want to land herself in trouble and all
Sanchi: teekh...teekh hai
Parth: ye hui na baat
Sanchi: dekhiye humme der ho rahi humme chalna chahiye
Parth hands over the bowl to her...it contained flowers...she gives a final glance before turning round and gracefully walking away down the corridor...Parth watches on...Veer was rite he thought...he needs to know sanchi first before concluding he loves her
on the otherhand Vishva is in her room looking around for Veer where she spots a piece of blue cloth lying on the bed it read:
" mujhe dhoond rahi ho?...kidhki ke niche dekho"
Vishva hurries to the window where she finds another cloth
"bahar bagiche mein ao...
mein tumhara besabri se intazar kar raha hoon,
tumhara Veer"

Vishva smiled...what was veer up to now...whatever it may be she knew it was something mega romantic...she quickly examines herself in the mirror before hurrying outside into the gardens
She sees a maid walking towards her with another cloth
maid: maharani ki jai ho...maharaj Veer ne apke liye bheja
she leaves and Vishva read the message:
"peeche mudh ke dekho"

Vishva turns..she finds veer waiting there with a huge smile on his face
She embraces him...when they break apart he picks her up in his arms and begins to walk
He cares her to a beautiful jula(swing) and makes her sit onit
Veer: kaisa laga
Vishva: bohat acha
Veer moves over to teh back and pushs the swing forward
Veer: hum rajya sambhal te sambhalte apko waqt nahin de paye...isliye ye sab
Vishva: accha...humme laga ke apko humpe thoda pyar ah gaya
Vishva was teasing Veer
Veer: nahin...humara matlab...hum toh bas aise he
Vishva: kya hum nahion jante ke ab ap humme kaam aur rajya ko ziyaada chah ne laga...ap humme bilkul bhool jate hai aur
Veer stops the swing...n pulls Vishva to him
Veer: jab tak veer ki saasein chalegi tab tak vishva se ziyaada woh kisi cheez ko ziyaada chah nahin sakta....
Vishva: maharaj hum toh bas aise he mazak kar raha teh....
Veer: aisa mazak?
a fast breeze blew...a few leves from the tree on which the jula was fell down on Veer n Vishva
vishva gave a laugh
she picked out twigs from his hair and he did the same for her....Niviriti sees this from her window
she thinks to here please god keep my children happy like this and keep them away from the evil shadow of Pratab singh
sorry no precap today
Enjoy
Shona
Edited by **Shona** - 16 years ago

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