rajat gets angry....

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Rati Gupta

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Posted: 17 years ago

#21

where is the next part???????i wanted to read whole today...its really very good sorry intresting OMG i m not getting words..i m ean to say it is fablouse...plz continue further..
i m sorry that i didnt read ir before 😳

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Ahuta

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Posted: 17 years ago

#22

Just read all the parts together! 😉 😛
Really fantastic! 👏 👏 👏
Please continue 😳

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mahi

@larki_punjaban

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Posted: 17 years ago

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Originally posted by: Dershna11
My God so hillarious! 😆 jst loved all three parts DV_Freak! Pls do make another part! 😊 Jst imagine if Rajjy, Mughda & Vikrant read this...they wud be in stitches! 😆

woh teeno has has ke pagal hojaynge heheheheh 😆

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Daksha

@Dershna11

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Posted: 17 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: dv_freak

woh teeno has has ke pagal hojaynge heheheheh 😆

i bet!😆

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mahi

@larki_punjaban

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Posted: 17 years ago

#25

awwwww so sweet of ya all

part4:

they both get up in the morning, rajat sitting there and thinking something and looking very sad...

good morning! kese ho? did ya sleep well? are yeh kya why ur so sad?

rajat: i miss my family

ohoooh idhar aa yaar.. *hugging*

to fon karlo na...

i would like magar mobile mein charge kahatm hogaya hai...

tum dono ka shot ready hai...

after giving the shot both sit and talking...

*sitting and talking*

dehli se fon aya tha abhi kuch deer pehle...

acha? what did she saY?

ane ko kehrahi thi but i said ac usual bz bz bz bz...

haan yaar kya karen... meri woh bhi kehrahi thi that when ill meet her up...

acha ? who is dis by the way...

*vikrant thinking: agar meine ise bta diya to ... kya khyal hai ullu na bnaye? hayee bache man ke sache heheheh *

ab btahi do bhayya plzzz

udhar dekh * and showing mugdha... *

hain yeh dono muhe aise kyoun dekhrahe hai... typical boys!!! larki dekhte hi... fisaal jate hain... aur bacha bhi ab bacha nahin dikhta idiot!!

reaalllllllllyyyyyyyy??????????? OMG i cant belive this mugdha!!!! woh jangli billi ?

hahahahahahahah khuuuuuuuuuuuuuub jamegi

are ise kuch nahin hua? hmmmm... kuch aur hi karna parega...

hmmmm yeh majra kya hai vikky looking shocked and thinking and rajat laughs.... pata lagna parega .. shera i mean mugz bhi kisi se kum nahin .....

to be continued...

Edited by dv_freak - 17 years ago

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mahi

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Posted: 17 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: Dershna11

i bet!😆

theheheheheheh

aur haan check out page 4

Edited by dv_freak - 17 years ago

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Rashi

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Posted: 17 years ago

#27

OMGOMGOMG.......
aaj toh yaha pe hassi ki bahar aane wali hai 😆 😆 😆

coolllllllll
nice script me in splits 🤣
🤣
🤣

kepp writing dear 👏 😆

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uighyuihui

@starpisces123

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Posted: 17 years ago

#28

wah excellent kya baat hai
tooooooo good
😆

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Sharlene Gandhi

@Baby S

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Posted: 17 years ago

#29

wow mahi! your ideas are awesome! very creative! 👏 looking forward 2 part 5

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mahi

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Posted: 17 years ago

#30

thnk u allll

love u

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part 5:

kya hua rajat tum itna moonn par par ke hans kyoun rahe ho?

rajat keeps laughing!!!
vikrant tells mugz his plan....

tumhe kya lagta hai ke ise fool bnan koi asan kaam hai?

tum dekhti jao mein karta kya hoon.... theheheheheheheheeee....

vikyy tumhari pol jaldi khulni wali haiiiiiiiii... mugz ek baat btaoon kya ... is lamboooooooo ke bare mein...

to tum kya lambe nahin ho... wese vikyy kuch jalne ki smell a rahi hai nahin?

haan aye gi to.... chalo koi fan na sahi yahi se sahi

suddenly rajat become quit...

haiin? mujhe to nahin a rahi...

* thinking: yeh majra kya hai... kya koi nayee sajish hai kya? kya yaar harwaqt dono mujhe hi tang karte rehte hain,... acha bachu hum b kisi se kam nahin

after that rajat and mugdha had 2 do a romantic scene but rajat just couldn't concentrate that well so he has to take toooooooooo many takes ke akhir sagar uncle ne kaha: yaar rajii i think aaj tum chutti karo...

haan aaj tumhe kya hua hai...

kuch nahin... im sorry sir plz ek mauka aur de plzzz

sagar uncle: acha beta chalo ghalti to sabse hoti hai, ek kaam karo abhi offscreen practise karo 10mint mein abhi ata hoon...

ajj to yeh bacha gaya kaamse... wah vikki kya baat hai ise soch mein daldiya hai tumne...

haaan... kya hua? shuru karen...

*even during the practise he was doing so many mistakes...

maloom nahin aaj kuch mood nahin ban raha...

what's up? kya horahahi? haath mein papaers... practise...

kya khaak practise hogi on screen se jyada ghaltiyan horahi hain...

haiin rajat? sahi baat hai kya? yeh kese hosakta hai tum to mujhse bhi achi acting karlete ho...

baat suno? tumhe problem kya hai? jalte to tum bhi ho... meri acting se...

hahahaha, yaar mughz bache kitne man ke sache hote hain... chalo acting to tum achi karlete ho magar phir bhi jalte to tum bhi ab socho kisbaat se

itne mein sagar uncle's antry: mughz and rajji are u ready...

after the shot they come back adn thnk god it wasmuuuuuuuuuch better then before and all were talking well agar rajat bura bhi kare yeh scene to sabko acha lage ga khaas tor pe larkiyon ko thiihihihihi

rajat becomes pareshan after vikky reactions: abe yaar is ehai kya? * he baghwan i think ajj mera bohut bura din hai!!!! for sure!!!