Samyukta Pt 20Siya accosted on all sides - Page 2

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: **Shona**

hi shraddha di
wasnt able to comment on 19 n im too busy to give lamba comment on 20 as well coz of exams

But i read both parts n both are really amazing n spell-binding as always 19 esp was very descriptive n really well written n this part also is excellent...loved it

keep it up!

shona

shona tum please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please mujshe apologize karke mujhe sharmindaa mat karo...ye lashy nalaayaak ne tumhaare Viswaas ke parts padke bhi ab tak comment bhi nahin post kiyaa hai.. 😡 isliye... tum apne marzi se padna aur post karna and best of luck with your exams.. 😳

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: **Shona**

All the best with ur GCSEs dershana-hope papers r easy like mine are!

awww thnx best of luck 4 urs too😳

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Another rocking Part Shradhha......... 😃this was too too good........ 😛specially Sia's confession part...... 👏 Oh my GOD mein tumhe kya batau...... I enjoyed it so much....... I did not expect that Sia's parents and Harsh will come to know about Dharam-Sia's love story so soon... 😲 But it wa damn good. The way Harsh and Sia's parents approached Prayer chamber ... in a serious fashion... i was thrilled..... ab kya hoga..... 😛 and u potrayed Sia in that part so brave and courageous..... 😍 pata hi nahi chala ke woh kab matured ho gayi..... 😳 ....like her father even i was surprised. Well love makes all these things happen...... kudos to u and ur creativity Shradhha👏

I liked Harsh - as villian, wow now waiting to see what Harsh will do and also Sia's Mom- what decision she will take 🤔 ?

And Shera and Shakshi r friends ..... 😉.. wow anothr twist. I like the way she listened to her heart and went back to Veer 😳 and that dialogue was too good....... "Fighter , aren't u?" which Shera says about Veer.

In ur story Tasha - shera r fnds kya?

Well simply loved it...... actually i loved all ur parts...... 😃 Just remember u did not answer my previous queires Anyways....

I m fan of ur Samyukta Shradhha...... 🤗u r really superb in it. U know what, ur each sentence is so heavily weighted with quality writing..... great yaar..... 👏 and so much creativity is flowing into it, I loved the story in the first place.👏 I m in love with ur DV and after reading part 20 i started liking Sia so much.⭐️

For ur sincerity and regularity 👏

U r a professional writer...... just shift into this, or u ve already?

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Posted: 17 years ago
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*has gone to byheart the dictionary*
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: *Jr.Nancy_drew*

*has gone to byheart the dictionary*

lo meri chotu ka bhi mere jaisa haal hain... 😆

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: lashy


shona tum please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please mujshe apologize karke mujhe sharmindaa mat karo...ye lashy nalaayaak ne tumhaare Viswaas ke parts padke bhi ab tak comment bhi nahin post kiyaa hai.. 😡isliye... tum apne marzi se padna aur post karna and best of luck with your exams.. 😳



thx di
oh its ok...i understand u were ill n all...its completely ok as long as u read it

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: Dershna11


awww thnx best of luck 4 urs too😳



thx
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Posted: 17 years ago
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lashy, 🤗

here comes your commentator😆 😆. Another brillant, mindblowing part and this time i will sing a song for you "Kya khoob likhti hoo badi sundar kahaani likhti hoo" 😊 👏

This part had me literally on the edge of my seat as siya's mum finds the scroll, siya confessing her feelings for dharam and everyone giving siya a hard time. 😭

What i loved :

    how could shera say that agni will be pleased that veer is dead 😭😭😭 I was shocked when she leaves him and go and was thinking in my head "besharam kahi ki" 😆
    how she keeps seeing veer's image and cannot concentrate. so sweet 😳
    Picture of veer lying there all by himself 😭 and loved shera's pink dress, she looks so beautiful 😳
    shera trying to find food for her tribe and children. 😊
    Shielding her face from the rain with her cloaks; she watches Veer's lonely form yey she goes back to veer and saves him even and after reading this I was
    bends down to feel the pulse on his blue wrist and neck, expecting to find nothing. "My God! Rajkumar Veer ...you are alive...a fighter, aren't you... wounded ...cold...wet... and yet clinging to life..." that is so sweet and me knew that veer is alive and that nothing will happen to him. he is a figther 👏👏👏
    how she tends veer and pulls the metal out of his abdomen. I must say she is a strong person to do that. 👏
    her trying to hide veer's identity to protect him 👏,
    Folding her hands; she takes the man by surprise, as she begins pleading him with a sly mask of innocence in her eyes "Please help me sir...I am all alone in this dangerous dark rainy night...my old father is injured...I need to take him to a doctor...or he will die..." This girl can act well i tell you, one minute she is ready to fight and the other minute she becomes an angel 😆😆👏
  • As they jointly support the unconscious Veer, the dupable man remains distracted by Shera's grateful smiles and witty conversations, for most of their journey through the barren rainy lanes.

    Even this guy is besotted with shera. Kya kaamal ki ladki hai 😆😆

  • how shera herself does not understand why she is saving veer and if agni finds out, her tribe will suffer 😭

  • "I know why I am doing this Rajkumar Veer...you impressed me by being the first man to respect my feelings and call me by my actual name...Ananya..."

  • I love this dialogue, as it shows that shera is impressed with veer even though she has no feelings for him yet. 👏👏👏

  • Shera wastes no time in casually taking out her knife to threaten the man with a calm smile. Rudely passing Veer back to the girl, the man immediately scampers away, fearing for his life.
  • I love her transformation from an angel to a fighter/protector. 😳👏

  • the dialogue "I agree I am strong, but do you realize you are not very light…I wish you would co-operate just a bit more and help me out!"
  • Awww she is trying to carry veer, looool and her answer had me in fits. 🤣🤣🤣 If only veer would co-operate then you would have not needed to carry him at all. I am sure veer will return the favour one and carry you. 😳😳

  • "Rajkumar Veer, you are not co-operating with me…so, I cannot take you all the way to the doctor's…" I am not surprised that she is tired, trying to carry veer 🤣🤣🤣
  • I love the way she is taking to him, when he is unconscious and cannot even hear her. 😍😍😍
  • How she is removing his jewels to protect them and I found this part romantic 😍😍😍"She begins to meticulously remove his royal jewels and places them on the cloth, one by one. As she tries to unfasten his chains, the feel of his icy bare neck on her chilly fingers only makes her realize how cold the prince's body seemed to be getting with every passing moment." She is still helping him even though she has no feelings for him. She has saved him. 😊

  • "Look at what you have done to my favourite dress Rajkumar Veer...now after all this effort that I have gone through for you; you better not die, I tell you..." I totally agree with shera, after ruining her pink dress, veer better live and buy her a new one.😳 😳 Veer should understand how important dresses are to women especially pink ones 😆😆
  • Shera stifles her naughty giggles and then winks at the unconscious prince to flaunt her success. – show off, I like how she likes to flaunt how good she is in front of veer even though he is unconscious 😆

  • yey veer will be looked after by sakshi . I can imagine sakshi's shock at seeing her brother and she cannot even tell shera the truth 😭

I will be with more comments 😊😆

Edited by divareena - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Di I waited 4 the entire noon and u posted right after I went to tuition,I guess
WOW wat a story 👏 ....just the opposite of last part..very roomantic and filmy...I luved both Siya and Shera..how they acted smartly..u hav given a lot to Sia's character...which Sagars hav not 😡
I also luved Shera's sense of humour when she talked to Veer and winking scene was...THE BEST 👍🏼 ...Veer alive!! gr88.
Sia prays b4 opening reply 🤣 🤣 she is a bit like me in this regard 😈
I can say it was a youthful part 😉 none of the buzurgs 4 a change.
I am on tenterhooks to know whether Siya mom will agree..does she also have a brother who was killed by JV..like the 1 in serial????Y does she hate DV so much 😕
Thank god u did not continue with the letter MU and gave Siya brains enough to understand the situation...
Poor Daksha and her mithai😕
I hav a suggestion..y dont u find a boyfriend for Nanda 😆so she can stop being soo stern?😛She is such a luving and concerned frnd...just needs to be in luv..I luv her character 🤗
WHY IS SHERA HELPING VEER?IS SHE ALREADY IN LUV WITH HIM OR IS IT JUST BCOZ SHE IS SUPPOSED TO BE VEER'S HEROINE..WAT R HER FEELINGS 4 VEER..PLZZ XPLAIN DI 😳
Sam has bcum a weekend treat 4 me,I wait soo eagerly 4 it all the week.Do post next part quickly plzz. 😃
Edited by rock 2 d2v - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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@ nimu

🤗🤗🤗 thank you so much for loving sammi... love to you too...

hmmm but i see you have some teeny weeny doubts with this part so me shall clear them right away.. 😳 shera has no feelings for veer...(yet!) what happened was that she obviously needed to take the children to safety away.. besides, she thought veer was dead... however, when she sees the light of a flickering candle fighting to survive the winds it reminds her of veer... where veer is just like the fire struggling... and she thinks she must go back and check... even she doesnt understand why she is helping him... she is impressed by him but doesnt have any feelings for him as yet...

she really pleads that man to help her...she said veer is her old father😆😆..and when that man deny to help her out..she really falls at his feet..👏..and she cried...I never expected this from shera😳..woh yahaan sirf acting kar rahi hai.. apnaa kaam karvaane ke liye kuch bhi karegi.. 😆

she arrives at conclusion that veer is the firs person who respect her feeling n call her by her original name..Ananya ....is that the only reason shera?? ab ke liye that is the only reason...😳

that man finally find out abt veer's identity..but how come shera let that happen??😆 he sees Veer's shoes na... he sees the golden shoes...which was covered with mud.. but he sees a spot of gold in it.. and realises this cant be a poor man..

finally when that parcel hits and cracks a clay pot of water...her naughty giggles...too shaitaan😆 yes she is shaitaan.. 😆

finally mom, sis n veer ko mila hi diya..waiting to see their expressions and reaction!!👏👏...Gud Turn Shrads... 😳 thank you jee

Palace of Nipudh-The Prayer room:

I like the way she was sitting in front of the idol of lord Ganesha and asking him for positive reply of Dharam...n she had keep fast for his victory👏 n was prying for dharam,veer, their family n also for aryanagar😳... awww yes bless..😳

she had scroll in her hands but instead of reading, she was prying to the god!!😆😆.. Siya was praying since morning!! oh god this girl..finally sia open n started reading...haaaashhhh...i also got relief...😆 and what they found...sloppy script..😆... loooool yes since morning.. 😆 socho un ladkiyon ki haalat.. wait karte karte thak gayee.. 😆

they all were listening to the message read by sia and commenting on it..naughty girls..dont they know kisi ke love letters nahi sunte!!😆😉 *giggle* typical girls

and like the way sia was defending dharam...then she read his positive reflecting words for her message..wow!! that was sooo good.... hee hee😳

and finally the time arrives..... girls found out about veer's signature!!! Siya is so smart and intelligent..she didnt believe those signature and tell her friends also not to believe it..i like she has so much faith in dhram and is sure that there must be some misunderstandig. she handled and re think the whole situation so perfectly...Shrads this siya's character is tooo good..👏👏... thank you hun...😳

I dont like the way Harsh ask her about message and the way he talked to her even threatened her...😡😡😡 yes he is definitely not anywhere like dharam... 😕

siya's mother😕 ask her for forgiveness of that arrogant harsh😡 n she really did it😭... he directly asked her to break the relation with those princes..in front of her parents...they have not got engaged yet n he is talking to her like this??... siya's parents...why dont u understand him?? nimu you must remember this is 14th-15th century... men did have a greater say... what siya did was quite a bold thing for a princess... plus she played with the politics of two other kingdoms not concerning her😕(though obviously we support her)... so even her parents cant say anything... as she is to blame 😕

"Pitaji…I don't want to forget about him...if I marry anyone, it would only be Rajkumar Dharam!"....Too good...Siya🤗...Shrads this scene is one of the best scene of this part😊 awww thank you 😳

And her mother tried to emotionally blackmail to her..that is sooo😡her mother keep saying what hv u done?? can't she see her daughter's love?? and say that siya is confused😕 her mother is basically very upset that her dreams of getting siya married to her friend's son are going down the drain.. after everything has been planned and discussed between two families... izzat ka sawaal hai.... and how will she face her friend now.. besides she doesnt have any special attachment to aryanagar... and she is just holding on to her ego... 😊

Oh Shrads... each and every words of this story was mindblowing...too gud...fantastic...🤗🤗🤗 big hug for u ....thank you for the loveeeeely comments.. 🤗

@ shona

thank you pumpkin for liking the parts... hope your exams are going well ... i am sure you would do too well.. but i still want to wish you best of luck

@ dershna

it is so sweet of you to comment... 🤗i will wait for you to finish your exams and then read through it if you find it gripping enough.. all the best for your GCSEs....

@ kiran

Uuuuummmmmmm strange but I am starting to like shera, aaj sun west se nikla kya😆, but I really I am starting to understand and sympathies with her situation, kaash hamari serial ke shera bhi hume aise touch kar pati😕

that was the best news in a long time for me.. 😆

Omg this is such s splendid dia, lashy u hv outdone ur self

"My God! Rajkumar Veer ...you are alive...a fighter, aren't you... wounded ...cold...wet... and yet clinging to life..." How nicely shera has understood veer, completely effortless, as if she was meant to be his soulmate😊

yayyyyyyyyyyyyyy looks like this was everyone's favourite dialogue this time.. 😳 yes.. she has understood him well... par hai to woh fighter hi..

But I don't think veer is going to be happy with her for intro him as her "old father"😆😆 hee hee kyaa karti... us zamaane main koi boy-friends ke saath raath ki waqt pe nahin ghoomta... she cant say husband (yet!)...brother tho definitely nahin seeing their relation-to-be... so father was next option.. besides sympathy factor you see.. when you a see young girl asking help for her father.. max sympathy level obtained 😆

Haila this girl to is goner already "I know why I am doing this Rajkumar Veer...you impressed me by being the first man to respect my feelings and call me by my actual name...Ananya..." she is actually genuinely impressed.. and do you remember kiran long back during their cliff scene when she introduces herself with three names.. you said i was politician 😆 par maine kahaa na her having more than one name would have its implications and you asked me what implications.. these were the implications.. 😳 veer respecting her and calling her by her name saved his life.. 😳

-------------she even has tongue in cheek humor……………😆😆 Veer ki ladki jo hai..

Well I just loved what u did with Daksha: 😆 you meanie.. 😆

Ohhhhhhhhh now I want to see what sia is planning as revenge on rajkumar dharam, I just love rajkumaries planning revenge on poor rajkumars😳😳 again you meanie 😆

But how nicely sia has also understood dharam and the love between dv, another confirmed soul mate 😊 yes.... 😳 but also that those were the very words dharam told her personally.... obviously it would be silly for veer to tell her the same words 😆 and seeing how many MUs she already had with them without thinking properly, she also learnt her lesson 😕

Poor sia feel sorry for her predicament and yet she bares it all out so bravely just goes to show how mature she has become in a few days i guess she just couldnt take it... seeing her scroll being destroyed something clicked...😕 she must be shocked by the way she behaved once she returns to normal... 😆

I…I am not trying to say that Rajkumar Harsh is an evil person...but it only goes to show what a gem Rajkumar Dharam is…" oh god lashy make this sentence a sticky in bold capital and in red so if anyone from sagars camp comes here they see this the first and realize they don't have to make dharam look like a completely –ve and weak chara to make veer look like a hero👏👏 yayyyyyyyyyyyyy thank you to you hun.. 😛

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