Samyukta Pt10-Dharam..Siya..A war of egos

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OSR SAMYUKTA - Part 10 - Dharam...Siya....A war of egos!!!

Recap – In a bid to make life difficult for Dharam and Veer; Siya decides to meddle with their plans when she overhears them discussing parts of their plan for the day. She bribes a guard outside the prayer room and takes his help to carry her next plan. Veer goes to the blacksmiths to pay for the weapons. Dharam and Bhalla are supposed to meet him there with the cart, but they don't turn up as planned. While waiting there, Veer makes a fool of himself and meets his match with a beautiful girl there.

Palace of Aryanagar – Maharani Swathi's chamber

Two maids gush into the bustling room with large golden plates stacked with silk attires in various designs, patterns and motifs. They hand their plates to a group of ladies occupied with sorting colossal piles of clothes; one after another. At another corner of the monumental room, Sunanda metes instructions to a batch of protges who systematically arrange numerous religious objects on sizable silver trays. Two bashful girls interrupt the busy lady's assignments, to deliver baskets carrying an assortment of beautiful flowers. Sunanda sighs and carries the baskets towards a quiet corner in the room, where the queens are busy in discussions with the minister.

She waits patiently for the minister to receive his instructions and exit the room, before addressing the queen "Maharani...the flowers have arrived...would you like to choose..."

The cheerful queen rolls her scroll and looks up at Sunanda "Sunanda... you may keep the basket here...I will let you know once I go through these instructions from the royal priest..."

Sunanda complies with her orders and returns to her chores.

Swathi reflects at all the fuss in her room and her eyes widen in excitement "If we are so joyous about our sons having completed their education successfully, can you imagine how elated we would be when they get engaged... married...have children..."

Nivritti takes a rose from the basket and smiles in accordance with the enthusiasm in her sister-in-law's eyes "I am waiting for that day too... I miss their participation in these festivities... I am sure they must be enjoying themselves…far away from any burdens… eating delicious Niphaudi food…waking up leisurely… enjoying all the comforts of the palace" she pauses "all this pleasure…only till they take on their royal responsibilities..."

Niphaud - Temple of Lord Ganapathy – Flower Market

Amidst scores of devotees from all corners of the kingdom, the inundated royals search for a familiar face in the expansive flower market, adjacent to the famous temple of Lord Ganapathy. They continually shift on their feet in order to accommodate mobs of inconsiderate people, looking to purchase flowers and other religious paraphernalia. Bhalla stares angrily at the assembly of fervent devotees behind him, as they unintentionally knock the turban off his head for the eighth time. Reduced to the sorry plight of waiting the entire morning at the crowded flower market as a result of Siya's successful vindictive scheme, the forlorn Dharam is unable to comprehend why their well-charted plans seemed haywire. Dharam asks Bhalla doubtfully "Are you sure the messenger that Veer sent, asked us to wait at flower market of the Lord Ganapathy temple?"

The exhausted Bhalla nods his head "As usual….you don't trust me…"

Dharam stretches his painful legs "Bhalla, I am scared to trust you… I am scared not to trust you… no sign of Veer for so long …I am worried…I hope he is all right!"

The gullible Bhalla reflects on his conversation with the disguised prayer chamber guard sent by Siya, who managed to fool him and meddle with their plans. He then assures Dharam "He came to our room a short while after Veer left for the bazaar. He was a commoner from the bazaar, with a message from Veer that we should not go to the bazaar and instead wait at this flower market for him. If Veer didn't send him, how would he know of our plans?"

An unwitting traveler tramples on an enraged Dharam, causing him to grimace in pain. He pauses to rub his feet, as he mutters to Bhalla "How can Veer bring the bundle here by himself? We were supposed to meet him with the cart there. The man with the map will also be waiting for us...oh Lord! Why did the messenger have to come when I was away for my bath…I would have at least asked him few more questions..."

When his turban is again knocked for the ninth time, Bhalla gives up his fight for his headgear and decides to sit down next to the flower vendors and their deafening pitches. No sooner; a keen devotee standing close by, mistakes him for a floral vendor and points to a basket next to him "How much is that garland of chrysanthemums?"

The fatigued Bhalla replies casually "Five copper coins"

The lady's eyes widen in shock and she walks to the next vendor, appalled.

The entire scenario manages to bring a smile to Dharam's tired face "If you are going to sell flowers, you might as well quote prices accordingly…not prices for weapons…"

Bhalla responds sarcastically "Oh! Definitely…I've never had to sell flowers you see…"

Suddenly, a partially clad yogi dances all over the crowded paths, spraying gulal on ardent onlookers who consider his showers as blessings. The gulal that falls on Dharam's face starts stinging his eyes. Bhalla grabs a damp cloth from a lady sitting next to him and helps him wipe his face. Finally, the defeated Dharam decides to leave the market.

Partially blinded; Dharam pauses his steps as he hears the sounds of the royal band and announcements, indicating the arrival of a member of the royal family. Not minding the furious lady who grabs back her cloth, Dharam stares at the distant blur of the pompous and extravagant procession of Niphaudi soldiers followed by a swinging palanquin. In a short while, troops of soldiers barrage the market and start organizing the crowds of obstinate devotees and lazy gossip-mongers to clear the paths for the princess' visit.

At a short distance from the market, the delicate girl steps out of her palanquin and adjusts her striking orange silk attire in its entirety with dangling pearls and tassels. Joyous at the success of her revenge, she closes her lovely eyes and takes a deep breath of the floral aroma of the market; not noticing her weary friends approaching her.

Daksha mutters resentfully "Siya…why can't we use through the main entrance? I have spent enough time in this crowd here… today…"

Siya pinches Daksha's cheeks "Daksha… how can I enjoy the look on their faces if I use the main entrance… by the way, did you overhear anything…anything important…anything about me?"

The ever-dutiful Nanda replies "No Siya…they have only been talking about bazaars, bundles…carts… nothing spectacular… they seem genuinely interested in the Niphaud bazaar!" Not knowing what to make of Nanda's information, Siya frowns briefly.

She then starts walking towards the market, followed by her retinue. As she enters the crowd's view, she holds her head high to ensure Rajkumar Dharam noticed the respect and adulation that her subjects had for the princess of Niphaud. With haughty steps, she beams ecstatically at the mesmerized subjects, firmly held in check by the soldiers. Not wanting to be recognized in his disorderly disguise, the increasingly conscious Dharam hides his face as the procession of the ravishingly beautiful princess steadily approaches him. After a few bated breaths; Dharam feels relieved, as they walk past him.

Siya abruptly stops in her tracks, approaches the eager vendor standing next to Dharam and purchases a beautiful garland from her. Suddenly, she acts as though she notices Dharam's comically stained face and calls out to her friends. They begin snickering at him loudly and the distressed prince bears the ridicule silently. Surveying Siya's expressions, he slowly realizes that it was the princess who had deliberately interfered with their strategies and caused all their ordeals. He begins to gauge her ignorance and arrogance and in an attempt to refuse to give in to her insult, his eyes begin to gleam with superiority. Amidst the mockery, Siya notices how the pain on his face metamorphosed gradually into chivalry. Siya's laughter slowly dies down, while a soft smile develops on his lips. The amazed observers watch the electrifying war of glances between both of them.

Provoked, Bhalla defends Dharam naively "Do you even know who this is? We are …"

Dharam stops him, all the while smiling at Siya with imposing majesty "She knows Bhalla… she knows who we are… however… since she is the princess of this kingdom… we will respect her in front of her subjects…whatever she does to us…"

Siya's smile completely disappears and she feels muted as a hot flush engulfs her face. The dazed prince suddenly catches sight of an old lady who slips on the wet floor in the packed crowd, a short distance from him. In a bid to follow their duty towards their princess, two soldiers holding back the crowds unwittingly trample on her hands.

Siya watches aghast, as Dharam frantically swims through the crowd and immediately pushes the two soldiers aside. The grateful old lady gets back on her feet and smiles at Dharam. Unaware of his status or of his kind deed; the infuriated soldiers restrain Dharam boorishly and start thrashing him with their baton. Oblivious of her surroundings, the horrified Siya dashes towards them and grasps their baton ordering them to stop. Angered, she points to the old lady "He was only trying to help her…Do you even know who he is…he…" she pauses as she realizes her hand was fastened to Dharam's arm and immediately retracts herself.

With an ironic smile, he stands up; brushes himself and willingly walks away from her captivating persona, for the first time.

Palace of Niphaud – Guest bedroom

Veer stares at the heavy bundle on the floor and paces around his bed furiously, convinced that his partners were having a nice time with Rajkumari Siya and her giggling entourage. Following faint groans from the corridor, he watches an exhausted Dharam and Bhalla slowly drag themselves into the room. Veer remains speechless for a while as all the built up anger in him slowly transforms into amazement, amusement and then finally; he bursts out in fits of laughter.

Bhalla mumbles sorrowfully "Don't laugh at us Veer…I am generally very calm … but for the first time… I think Rajkumari Siya's fate…I mean her end is in my hands now"

Veer stops laughing at their distraught profiles when he gradually understands that the irresponsible acts of the haughty princess and her friends had ruined all their organized plans.

The aggravated Veer decides to confront Siya and dashes towards the entrance, but Dharam physically stops him "No Veer! No! We cannot afford to be reckless. We have to finish what we came for and proceed home. We do not want to be embroiled in petty fights with unmindful girls"

Veer looks at Dharam in disbelief and playfully examines his face "Dharam… after all this she has done to you! Don't get angry with me… I am just advising you…but if…if you are so lenient with her now… things will become very difficult for you in future…"

A pained voice echoes through the room "What do you mean Rajkumar Veer?"

The three boys turn around to see the princess standing there flocked by her friends. Fed up, Bhalla digs his face in his hand, while Veer stares at Siya baffled. She sternly signals the bodyguards, who bow their head and leave the room helplessly.

She continues "This is my palace! I come and go as I please…your bodyguards cannot stop me time and again…" She turns to Veer "What do you mean don't be so lenient with her in future? Rajkumar Dharam stop weaving any dreams… we have no future…"

Veer rolls his eyes "Rajkumari Siya, why are you meddling in our personal affairs?"

Siya persists in spite of her friends trying to calm her "I would not have done all this, had it not been for Rajkumar Dharmavardhan… it is entirely your brother's fault…"

Veer and Bhalla look at the bewildered Dharam for an explanation.

Prodded by Siya, Nanda stammers; adding to the confusion "Rajkumar …y…you have come all the way here to meet Siya and you don't even meet her, greet her or gift her…"

Astonished, Veer interrupts the humorous situation "Dharam…you came all the way here to meet her? And I thought you had come here with us to tour Niphaud… "

Dharam finds it impossible to prove his innocence as everyone in the room continues their accusations. Daksha speaks supportingly "Rajkumar Dharam…. Siya made such a lovely meal…and you said such things that would break her heart…" she flashes a proud smile at Veer "At…least Rajkumar V…Veer enjoyed the meal…unlike you…"

Veer desperately tries to hide his laughter at all the undue praise he was receiving at the expense of his brother's unfortunate situation.

Dharam becomes exasperated and pleads with Siya's friends "When did I say things that broke her heart? I…I … never even asked her to make the meal in the first place…"

Nanda looks hurt "Rajkumar! I heard your comments! Additionally…she wanted to send you a message last night and your bodyguards didn't even allow us in…"

Veer fuels the volatile situation "What! Why didn't you allow her in Dharam?"

Dharam scowls at him "Veer! Why wouldn't I…I…. allow Rajkumari S…Siya in…"

Siya holds her hand up to silence the room "Rajkumar Dharam…You wait for the right opportunity to give me a personal message… you ask me to meet you at odd places and you don't even turn up…I have never had to wait like that … for anyone… ever… I waited the entire evening as per your instructions…" she walks towards a small table and places a lovely studded golden idol of Lord Ganesh sleeping on a small Niphaudi cushion "I had this specially made for you…you can have it now… I don't need it…"

Veer persists with his performance "Dharam what is all this going on? Unfortunately, this time I have to take Rajkumari Siya's side …why did you make her wait like this…"

Dharam removes his turban, throws his hands up in frustration and asks Siya "W…wait …. what message…which message…when did I give you this message... "

Siya looks confused and turns to the silent Bhalla "Balaram ji... didn't he give me the message? Don't you remember our conversation yesterday? Didn't you tell him?"

Bhalla remembers his confrontation with them in the hallway "Oh yes… Dharam… you asked her to come to the blacksmiths too...then why didn't you even wait to meet her?"

Veer sighs heavily "Oh Lord! So many things happened that I wasn't even aware of…" he slaps his forehead dramatically "You told Bhalla but didn't bother to tell me…"

Dharam gives up and sits on the bed "Fine… anyone else…" he shouts out to the bodyguards "Do you have any complaints too? Anything else I did… or didn't do?"

Veer teases Dharam mischievously "No sooner than your mother started talking about marriage, you had everything planned… you are very clever Dharam…"

The cornered Dharam replies indignantly "Veer! …keep quiet now or I will hit you…."

The entire commotion comes to an immediate standstill, as the queen enters the room; alerted by the turmoil and bawls. She notices the stained and tired faces of the boys and enquires kindly "What happened Rajkumar? Why are you dressed like this?"

Dharam tries halting Bhalla, but he proceeds to blurt out his complaints against the princess "Rajkumari Siya...she misdirected us...to...wait at the temple...so... all this ... happened...we had no intention of making her wait...or...to make fun of her food..."

Dharam tries changing the conversation but the unmindful queen questions the daunted princess "Siya, what are you doing here in the guest bedroom now? What is all this?"

Looking at her horrified face, the queen realizes that her daughter had been up to no good. She tries to restrain her anger while addressing her daughter in front of the princes, but her disappointment ends up pouring out as ceaseless frustrations. Veer looks at Dharam's worried face, as the proud girl stands in agony; braving her tears.

When able to take no more of her mother's reprimands, Siya blares at her mother "This happened...because of you...you...because you hide everything from me..."

Infuriated by her daughter's disrespect, the queen is about to slap the quivering girl; but eventually stops herself. She then firmly grabs Siya's wrist and storms out of the room.

After they exit the room, Bhalla and Veer stare at each other silently. Dharam walks to the small statue of Lord Ganesh "Something is wrong Veer... Rajkumari Siya has had some big misunderstanding… I feel sorry for how hurt she must be feeling now..."

Veer puts his hand on Dharam's shoulder "I never realized situations would sour so badly" he counsels him wisely "Let's make the preparations to start for Gadhwar … we have to travel to and fro by cart, not horses…we only have a night and we don't even have a map…once back; we will try to sort out this misunderstanding, if time permits..."

Dharam nods lightly in approval

Palace of Niphaud – Outside the guest bedroom window

A guard becomes alerted as he thinks he hears a low noise from somewhere around him. He beckons his friend and they use their lanterns to scan through the leaves and the dark shadows of the tall foliage in an attempt to search for anything out of the ordinary. On finding nothing, they smirk at each other comfortingly and proceed to their stations. Veer breathes a sighs of relief and shushes Bhalla with a finger on his lips.

After making a final search to ensure the soldiers were nowhere in sight, he gradually starts lowering their packed disguises and travel accessories from their bedroom window, as covertly as possible. Dharam ties the knot around the bundle of weapons tightly and then shoves the heavy bundle towards Veer. Both of them use all their might to suspend the weight and slowly release the ropes from the window. When the bundle is just a few feet above the ground, the rope slips from both their hands and the bundle drops on the soft base echoing a muffled clank.

Instantaneously, the light of a lantern is spotted at distance followed by a guard's voice "Who is it?"

Veer covers his face and sighs deeply while Dharam grits his teeth in frustration.

See you till next Saturday 😳

Part 1 & 2 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/dharam-veer/853004/samyukta-1-and-2-dharam-and-veer-story-so-far

Part 3 - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/dharam-veer/859041/samyukta-of-d-and-v-it-sinks-in-part-3

Part 4 - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/dharam-veer/864874/samyukta-part-4-realizing-their-fears

Part 5 - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/dharam-veer/871744/samyukta-part-5-to-find-out-the-truth

Part 6 -https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/dharam-veer/877903/samyukta-part-6-the-feast

Part 7 - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/dharam-veer/884104/samyukta-pt-7-dharam-siya-first-glances

Part 8 - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/dharam-veer/890384/samyukta-part-8-siya-feels-cheated

Part 9 - https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=896808

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Shraddha,This was an exceptionally humorous and witty part..👏 I felt that I was standing in the guest bedroom chuckling at the confusion and the hapless situation of Dharam😆.. n the enjoyment of Veer n Bhalla… n the grand description of preparations of queen swathi and the market😛…aww n tht ganesh idol gift was soo sweet and innocent😳 .. n I loved the dialogue of dharam, "since she is the princess of this kingdom… we will respect her in front of her subjects…whatever she does to us"😳 aww I have fallen in love with the Dharam of your story....

I am rambling along I know but I am sooo sooo happy with this part that I am unable to phrase my feelings better… I wish you were here in front of me so that I can kiss your hand that wrote(typed) this part … aww overdose of DV…

But a teeny weeny disappointment, no sign of Shera.. u know how eagerly me n Kiran are waiting for Veer Shera story to begin but you more than made up for Sheras absence by the hilarious part… n I know you will make up for this waiting too !! 😛

Edited by bhuvana3 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Lovely lovely awesome awesome, I cant stop laughing, oh god lashy absolutely brilliant👏👏👏

I just loved bhala selling flowers at weapons prices, dharam realizing it was all sias fault and yet humoring her, dharam although he is in pains runs to help the old lady,,,,,,,wowo how sweet of him😛

She knows Bhalla… she knows who we are… however… since she is the princess of this kingdom… we will respect her in front of her subjects…whatever she does to us…"

and siya coming to his defense😛

But the scene of this epi is when sia comes to confront them and daksha praising veer unnecessarily and veer adding fuel to the fire was fantastic fantastic👏👏

Veer fuels the volatile situation "What! Why didn't you allow her in Dharam?"

Dharam scowls at him "Veer! Why wouldn't I…I…. allow Rajkumari S…Siya in…" 🤣🤣

Veer persists with his performance "Dharam what is all this going on? Unfortunately, this time I have to take Rajkumari Siya's side …why did you make her wait like this…"🤣🤣

Veer sighs heavily "Oh Lord! So many things happened that I wasn't even aware of…" he slaps his forehead dramatically "You told Bhalla but didn't bother to tell me…" 🤣

Veer teases Dharam mischievously "No sooner than your mother started talking about marriage, you had everything planned… you are very clever Dharam…" 🤣

oh god my stomach is painig, awesome😛

Edited by crazy_kiran - 17 years ago
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Awwwwwwwwwwweeeeeeeee 😛 😛

Thnkuuu Lashyy di!!.. 😃

Noww..me goin out for Maths coachin....will b bakk!!...N thn will sit fresh and read it all!!.... 😍 😍

Aww!!...if i staayy a moment longer..i'll b late 2 my proff!!... 🤣
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Dharam scowls at him "Veer! Why wouldn't I…I…. allow Rajkumari S…Siya in…"

Veer persists with his performance "Dharam what is all this going on? Unfortunately, this time I have to take Rajkumari Siya's side …why did you make her wait like this…"

Bhalla remembers his confrontation with them in the hallway "Oh yes… Dharam… you asked her to come to the blacksmiths too...then why didn't you even wait to meet her?"

Veer sighs heavily "Oh Lord! So many things happened that I wasn't even aware of…" he slaps his forehead dramatically "You told Bhalla but didn't bother to tell me…"

Dharam gives up and sits on the bed "Fine… anyone else…" he shouts out to the bodyguards "Do you have any complaints too? Anything else I did… or didn't do?"

Veer teases Dharam mischievously "No sooner than your mother started talking about marriage, you had everything planned… you are very clever Dharam…"

The cornered Dharam replies indignantly "Veer! …keep quiet now or I will hit you…."
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Oh my God Splendid Di i'm Rolling on Flour🤣Awesome Part👏😳
How did u get such dialoughs di Wow!Fantastic Dialoughs👏😳
Me waiting for next eagerly😛

Edited by Innocent Ishita - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Lashy,👏

Another amazing, beautifully written part with so much humor and romance.🤗🤗 I was in fits of laughter when I read what ordeal bechara dharma has gone through with everyone ganging up on him.🤣 I love this siya 👏

What I loved :

Sunanda's character, which is so much nicer than sagars version. 👏

The way nivritti and swathi are looking forward to their songs getting married and have children. I like the way their relationship has been described.😳

Nivritti missing them and thinking that both dharma and veer are having a good time. Loool little do they know the chaos that has been caused in the palace of Niphaud 🤣 🤣😆

Devotees knocking the turban of bhalla's head loooool bechare is missing his sleep and food 🤣🤣🤣

Dharam trying to figure out why his plans are going haywire and not realizing that it is siya's scheme. He must be scratching his head thinking that ever since I have come here nothing is going right. 🤣 🤣 🤣

Him asking bhalla about veer asking them to meet at the flower market, not trusting bhalla at all. Even bhalla himself realizes this. 🤣

Aww Dharam's legs are paining him and him admitting to Bhalla that "I am scared to trust you… I am scared not to trust you" like has no choice or other option 🤣 🤣 🤣

Bhola bhalla not realizing siya's chal about sending them to the flower market

Looool someone tramples on dharam's feet and he is still confused as to why they are meeting at the flower market and then wishing that he was 😆😆

Bhalla's turban being knocked again and him sitting down next to the flower vendors and being mistaken for a flower vendor. Kya haalat ho gayi hai bhalla ki 😆😆

Bhalla quoting a high figure and losing a customer loool It was so sweet to see dharma smiling at that and saying that woman is asking for flowers not weapons 😍😆

Bhalla's sarcastic response to dharma "Oh! Definitely…I've never had to sell flowers you see…" I guess there is a first time for everything 🤣🤣

Gulal falling in dharam's eyes and then leaving the market and seeing a blur of niphaudi soldiers. awwww kitna perashan hai dharam

Sia stepping out in her orange silk attire with pearls (me like pearls) and gloating at the revenge she has taken 😆😆

Daksha moaning about why can siya not use the main entrance and siya's response about how she wants to enjoys seeing the looks on their faces. 🤣😎

Siya entering the crowd with a royal walk just to make sure dharma notices the respect she gets. Awwwww dharma does not want to be seen in his disorderly disguise and trying to hide his face. So sweet 😳

Siya on purpose stopping next to dharma to purchase a garland 😎 and then her friends laughing at him but he is bearing it all. 😭 I feel so bad for dharma here, when he has not even done anything. 😭 what will happen to him after marriage 😆🤣🤣

Him finally realizing that siya has messed with their plans and caused all the problems and him still being gallant at the same time. Pyar main kya kya sahen karna padta hai 👏😍😍

So romantic when siya sees pain on his face and the slow smile dharma does. 100 watts of electricity between both of them to light lots of lamps 😆😆

Bhalla defending dharma – so brave of him and dharma being so honourable by saying that we must respect her as she is a princess regardless of what she has done. 😍 😍 😍😍

The way dharma saves the lady and how dare the soldiers hit him with a baton. 😡 Sia coming to save her prince and defending him like a rocket. 😆Then she realizes who she is defending and how her had was on dharam's arm. I think dharma did not mind getting hit by the baton if this is the response he gets from siya 😆😆

Veer angry at dharma and the minute he sees their exhausted faces bursts into hysterics. Me love the way his face is transformed from anger to laughter 🤣🤣🤣

Bhalla saying that siya's end is in his hands. He sounds so fed up and angry when he says this🤣🤣

Veer wanting to confront his bhabi and when dharma does not want to get involved he says "I am just advising you…but if…if you are so lenient with her now… things will become very difficult for you in future…" something tells me that veer will be exactly the same as dharma once he meets the veiled lady 🤣🤣

Bhalla groaning in despair the minute he sees siya and her sena.😆 Siya confronting veer and telling dharma that they have no future.

Devar and bhabi's confrontation and all the blame comes on poor dharma. 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣Veer asking dharma if he came to niphaud to see siya. I feel for dharma as he is getting accused from every direction without even getting a chance to speak or defend himself. I bet winning a fight against a opponent is much easier than this. I can so imagine this scene where dharma is feeling dizzy with everyone ganging up on him.🤣🤣😍

Daksha complimenting veer and him laughing at the praise he is getting at dharam's expense 🤣🤣

Siya telling dharma that she has never had to wait for anyone like that. Awww So sweet nanda defending siya and veer intent on stirring more trouble by taking sia's side 😊

Dharma totally defeated, removes his turban, throws his hands up in frustration and then bhalla telling Dharam… "you asked her to come to the blacksmiths too...then why didn't you even wait to meet her?" and the best is when Veer slaps his forehead dramatically "You told Bhalla but didn't bother to tell me…" 🤣

When dharma so fed up even asks the guards if they have any complaints against him as well and veer teasing dharma about marriage🤣

Aww dharma trying to stop bhalla telling the queen everything, he does not want to hurt sia. So sad when the queen is about to slap siya and then takes her out of the room. 😭😭

Dharam feeling bad for siya because of a big misunderstanding and veer reassuring him that if they have time than they will sort everything out 😊

The bundles of weapons dropping and veer groaning thinking nothing is going right here when they hear a guards voice.

Me looking forward to what will happen next week. The suspence is killing me. 😆👏

Edited by divareena - 17 years ago
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omg chech!!!!! 😲 how cud u leave it at that?????? 😲 but seriously dint i tell u that u always come up with something better everytime??? 😃 this was hilarious... 😆 😆 😆 u'r the best dialogue writer ever... u'r sooo witty chech... 😳

the way u describe every detail so precisely is so cool.. especially in the beginning while describing the maids bustling around, sunanda giving instructions to the younger maids.. and of course maharani swathi and nivriti... this is the kind of scene i would like to see in the show.. 😊

again ur description of the flower market is superb... and on top of that u've provided with a pic... i could picturise the whole scene in my head... 😊

awww!!!!! my poor bhalla... his turban kept getting knocked off... 😆 😆 😆

sia's entry was awesome.. and dharam's such a cool dude.... 😎 i loved the silent war between them...
thank u for potraying dharam's character so beautifully.. 😊 his dialogues are so subtle yet so witty... i've told u this before but u've made me completely fall in love with this dharam... he's cho chweet.. 😳 and of course sia running to save dharam from her soldiers was so awwwwww.... 😳 😳 😳

but the best part undoubtably were the events in the guest bedroom... veer, bhalla, sia, nanda all after my poor dharam baby... i loved his frustration - Dharam gives up and sits on the bed "Fine… anyone else…" he shouts out to the bodyguards "Do you have any complaints too? Anything else I did… or didn't do?"
😆 poor thing...
veer is such a cutie pie.. troubling dharam so much.. 😆 the whole scene was superbly written.. sia's accusations and dharam's confusion... 😃 and to top it all daksha - Daksha speaks supportingly "Rajkumar Dharam…. Siya made such a lovely meal…and you said such things that would break her heart…" she flashes a proud smile at Veer "At…least Rajkumar V…Veer enjoyed the meal…unlike you…" 😆 😆 😆

how do come up with such brilliant stuff???? 😉 too cool chech.. 😊 seriously i cud go on and on but dont wanna bore u.. so will stop here.. 😛
this is for u...
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Posted: 17 years ago
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oh yaar!!😲 when did you come and go? and how did I miss this?😲 rushing to read at once 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
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omg me never thought you would like this part as much after reading your comments from the last part.... 😆

the market scene was very tough yaar.. kitnaa sochnaa padaaa kitni baar aage peechee jaati rahi...

but the guest room scenes were very easy.. this shows na how sometimes the lesser effort ones.. manage to strike more chords...

but sorry girls.. all dose of comedy subtled down for a while now.. as the story does get more serious..


and especially for bhuvi and kiran... forget about shera for now bhuvi 😛 woh dhamaakedhaar entries hi maaregi.. 😛
bhuvi, you only said na develop story slowly slowly slowly... well me not going as slowly.. but me following some of your advice.. 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
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😆 Lolz di Slowly Slwoly 😉
Edited by Innocent Ishita - 17 years ago

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