Samyukta part 9-Veer meets his match - Page 2

WOWWW lashy diiiii😃😃Amazinnn part..i enjoyed readinnn it alot which I always doo😛I wish u could post the next part today only 😆 But no probz I can waitt 😃 Waitin 4 it..

WOWO WOOW lashy absolutely woow what an update, u make the whole wait worthwhile 👏 👏 👏

These were the classic quotes of todays epi, I was literally clutching my stomach 🤣

Lost in his world of fantasy, Dharam smiles in his sleep "Did you realize that you have the most beautiful eyes I have ever come across?"
Veer yawns and nods his head "No"
Dharam stretches out his hand from his pillow and touches Veer's hair
As Dharam starts stroking his hair, Veer stares at Dharam oddly and starts moving back "Dharam…wake up…wake up…now…"🤣

Mystified, Veer whispers to Dharam "Dharam…did she just…w...wink at you?"🤣 🤣

Veer carries on mocking his brother "Listen to me - she is a dangerous influence on you! There is still time to escape... from her clutches..." 🤣 🤣 🤣

Veer "Praying? Everyone…even the Lord himself would have come down personally to stop this torture" he pauses "apart from Bhalla... of course... who is still sleeping..."🤣

all our plans are spoilt because you must be busy dreaming of Rajkumari Siya somewhere🤣 🤣 🤣



But I am going to kill this daksha

Oh! His fair complexion...imagine if he gets scorched in the sun...." indeed 😛 😆 😆


So veer meets his match and she takes a micky out of him infront of so many ppl………. 😛 😉

wah wah....a very good title if I might say so 😆 😆 😆

I was waiting for this entry and must say you brought it out very well....all the intensity, the proud gait ad the smugness 😆 😆 😆

The only thing which was weird was the dupatta in her teeth....my best friend gets soo bugged by that so I was reminded of her 😆

Siya is another great revelation...she's much more sensible and intelligent in this version than in the original...she actually suspects the two princes now and is actually thinking of a plan....

Dharam's staring is so funny and yet cute 😳 😳 😳 he's nicely speechless and also blind as a bat to her musical talents 😆

Bhalla is great....he's a snoring sleeper🤣

Coming back to Veer Shera...I liked shera's entry far better than in the original....and I can see the potential new chemistry between the two 😉

So keep it up and update soon next saturday! 😃
And take a bow 😉

hey is Bhalla really an imaginary character? 😆

@abhy

awww thank you so much... i am so glad... you liked this part...i was actually in doubt when i did post it if readers would enjoy it... i am so elated to read your replies week after week abhy.. whenever i am low or sad.. i am going to store all your praises and complements and go through them .. the best upliftment one could ever ask for.. 😳

hee hee looks like Bhalla is everyone's favourite dude.. 😎 phew i am glad that you liked shera's entry..phew...

and as for your next question... no Bhalla is not based on any one person i have met in life... or know 😆

yes and keep wondering what happened to Dharam and Bhalla 😛 dekhthe reh jaaoge.. 😆

@ minzzy

yes your ladoo couldnt sleep 😆 kyaa karein saare jagah sab usse pareshaan hi karte rehte hain... 😆

i am glad you liked the eyes-hair waala scene... 😆 and yes i do think rajat and vikrant would do that scene very well..

and the rest of the dialogues too thank you hun.. thank you so much.. i am always reminded of you when i write such dialogues... ab minzzzy kyaa sochegi ...😛

oh and dont worry about Siya's dad my dad is no too different.. he never used to remember even our classes or sections 😆 and used to ask my mom... everytime..

and yes poor Veer... in order to while away time kuch bhi kartaa rahaa aur khud ullo banke aayaa.. phew am i glad you liked this shera.. this was my biggest worry.. 😕 if readers would like her.. as this is the kind of shera i was hoping to see in the serial..

so btw did you sleep well then 😛

@ neeri

omg i get a bit nervous when someone says this was my favourite or that was my favourite.. because that corners me to always strive to produce something as good if not better... phew..

i am glad i could write it such that you could picturise all the scenes in your head...

but the following was the complement of the day 😳 - thank you so much neeri

did i mention i've fallen more in love with dharam thanks to u??? 'sign' i can just imagine vikrant in these scenes... he wud have been choooooo cute...

you like daksha? sadistically if we lock both daksha and bhalla in a room.. mazaa aayega to see how the manage.. 😆
and am i glad you liked the last scene.... that was the toughest for me to write in all the 9 parts.. because a lot of it depended on timing and getting the right words.. as everything was in that scene was only action and ishaaraa...

thank you so much neeri.. 😳

hi lashy par es shera go zyada over confident or boring mat bana na make her a bit lively too, to phir zyada maza ayega, haila lagta hai lots of ego clashes coming up I think, maza ayega 😊

awww lashy u dont have to get nervous... u'r a genius.. 👏 u always come up with something better everytime.. 😃
me totally loves daksha and bhalla... they are cho cho cho adorable... 😳 them locked up in a room...😆omg... now thats something i wud looove to see... 😉
poor poor bhalla... i cant imagine his condition if he ever gets into such a situation... 😆 😆 😆
i dint like ur last seen....
i loved it... 😛
but i cant somehow picture mugdha doing all that.. maybe i'm underestimating her abilities... 😕

Well done Lashy!!!!!!!!!!!!! 👏

Originally posted by: kirantarani2007

hi lashy par es shera go zyada over confident or boring mat bana na make her a bit lively too, to phir zyada maza ayega, haila lagta hai lots of ego clashes coming up I think, maza ayega 😊

not at alllllllllll she is no khadoos like the shera in DV... she just didnt have to speak here - silent entry.. 😆 poora chakoo se hi dikhaa diya.. ... cos the merchant was after all irritating all of them .. 😛

but she will be more bubbly.. (not as much as siya and co) but not stony like shera of DV.. 😛 kiran ... lets do a deal.. lets say everyone here would be able to see some shades of themselves in her.. and more than anyone definitely you ..😛

and aww neeri now there you go... you've made me even more nervous... 😆

oops... 😳 me keeping my lips sealed from now onwards.. 😆