The story Nandini created...Plz read it..

Hey guys……this is a nice story based on the meeting of Veer and his Ladylove……it goes like this…… 😳

(But plz notice it doesnt have anything to do with DV 😕)

MC is a princess and in her palace there is a minister who was once caught in a robbery and so he is ordered to leave the palace……but accidentally he meets a blacksmith Veer……and comes to know that his friend is a Prince and he gets an opportunity to befriend them……now what happens is……MC comes to know about this and she disguises herself as a Village girl and then the romance starts……In a house where MC is doing some work sitting ( dressed in a Ghagra Choli and Dupatta on her head covering her face so as to avoid revealing her identity ) and Dharam , Veer and that Minister goes to the same house to rest……Coincidentally!!!!!

Veer : Its so nice to relax here with the sweet smell of the flowers……

Dharam : And yes , Veer……we've got a nice and a trustworthy friend too!!!!!

Veer : Ya……thatz right!!!!!

MC : But you can't trust anyone blindly……without actually knowing who that person is!!!!

Veer : ……Excuse me ……but who are you to talk in between us????

MC : Wow……U seem to be asking this question to the owner itself!!!!!

Veer : Alright……I'm sorry……but plz……can u tell me ur name or show me ur face……

Without further replying……she gets up and heads forward but Veer is determined and he holds her hand……

Veer : I won't let you go without seeing ur face……( Actually her way of speaking and arguing made him her Deewaana……)

MC : Sorry……but we're not allowed to show our face to any stranger……( angrily )

Veer : But I wanna see ……( he demands….)

MC : Nooo……I CAN'T!!!!!!.....( Shouting )

Veer : OK……then at least lemme know ur name……

MC : But what are you going to do with my name……this happens to be our first and last meeting!!!!!

Veer : I dun care about that……Plzzzzz……lemme know ur name!!!!!

Dharam and Minister are enjoying the scene like an audience

MC : I said I can't……( she pushes him back and runs away ……and Veer is now in dilemma )

Dharam : Ahem……Ahem……and may I ask what was all that?????

Veer : I too dunno……why was I getting attracted towards her……but I'm sure we'll meet again and then I won't leave her……

At night……

Dharam and Veer are sleeping since it had started raining and they had to spend that night there itself……

The minister comes to murder Dharam with his sword and then……

MC : Stop!!!!!.......and she hurts him……

Both Dharam and Veer get up and are amazed!!!!!

MC : He was trying to kill both of you and I stopped him……shall I kill him????

Dharam Veer : No……leave him there itself……we'll take care of him……

MC : OK……my job is done now……I must leave……

Veer holds her hand and this time slightly tight……

MC : Leave me……I said!!!!

Veer : No……don't you remember what I said……I won't leave you without knowing ur name and seeing ur face……

And suddenly the dupatta falls down and he comes to face her……Veer is like completely mesmerized in her beauty……

Veer : ( Trying to propose her……but asks……)……how did you know about this man???

MC : Hez a minister in my palace……

Dharam : PALACE????!!!!!

MC : Yeah……Palace……I'm a Princess of so and so place and my name is -------

Veer : Wow……what a Beautiful name……I LOVE YOU , ------……I wanna marry you……I LOVE YOU , MY SWEETHEART!!!!!!

The continuation of it also i m posting after this post...

hope u like it...

It was writtened by Nandini.....sry nandu...i posted it without ur permission..but i thought that all can comment on it😳

This part was writtened by Nandini 😳

Plz do comment.....😳

Now our veer goes with dharma but his heart is lost over the mesmerizing beauty of MC (Rajkumari)
And he is lost it……. 😛 (as usual😆 )
Always in the thought's of MC
And MC too quite impressed by the charm and dare of a handsome hunk. 😛
At night both of them looking at the moon searching for glance .😳 (lol sagar's ur idea stolen by me) 😉 😆
Veer always in the thought's of Rajkumari (MC) makes Dharam to worry abt him… 😕
Then they both decide to go to her kingdom to have a glance of her 😳
Now our princess is quite sportive and likes the talwarbazi……. 😛
And in her kingdom such a talwarbazi competition is arranged
Veer and Dharam manage to go to attend this competition…. 😊
They are in the audience when this dreadly competition is going onnnnnnn…
The best talwarbaaz (ie. Surma ) of her kingdom defeat all the competitors that come in front of him ( the one like Alah and Udal in PRC)
And then MC declares
MC: Kya hua is rajjya mein koi bhi aaisa insaan nahi jo ise hara sake…
Aur hame lagta hai kisi bhi rajjya mein aisa koi nahi hoga jo ise hara sake…
To aaj yeh ailan karte hai hum ki job hi ise harayega use muh manga innam milega..

Listening to this veer gets up and when he is abt to say something dharma tries to stop him doing so
But veer rukne valon me se nahi tha (jawani ka ubalta hua khun as u all know lol 😳)

Veer : Kya kaha aapne.. phir se kahiye
MC : Humne kaha ki job hi ise harayega use muh manga innam milega..
Veer : soch lijiye vaada karne se pahele….. aapko apna vaada nibhana padega
MC : to kya samjha tumne hame…
Veer : to thik hai … aapna vadda yaad rakhana 😉
Then the fight (talwarbazzi) starts between the surma and veer
And as usual our hero is veer so he win's………😳
Then he asks I someone else is there to challenge him …
No one stands up
MC : bahut khub… bahut khub……
Humne aap jaisa naujawan jisme itni himmat ho nahi deka…
Veer : Ha. To ab mera inaam…….
MC : ha mango kya chahate ho aap inaam mein…

(imagine the song agar mein kahu mujhe tumse mohabbat hai from lakshya... 😆)Veer : soch ke boliye rajkumari ji 😛
MC : (angry) ha mango kya chahate ho aap….. 😡
Humpe bharosa nahi kya………😡
Veer : to thik hai .hum aap ka haath mangte hai… 😆
MC : ( gusse se lal ) kya tumhari itni himmat……..
Aaisa kaise keh sakte ho 😉

(song in background "Agar mein kahu mujhe tumse mahobaat hai" 😆)
Veer : maine aap se pahele hi poocha tha…aab aapko vada nibhana padega 😛

(song in background "Jo vaada kiya woh nibhana padega" 😆)

MC : Sipahiyon pakad lo ise……. 😡
Veer : thik hai par aapko apna vaada nibhana padega…
MC : zopdi mein reheke mahalon ke khwab dekhte ho… 🤪
Veer : mahalon ke nahi aapke… 😳

And then by that time the soilders come to grab him…
Them veer's jumps like hero's in the movie… and dharm comes to escape
Both of them fight with all the soilders and manage to escape……..
MC very angry with soilder's…… Itne log milke do aadmiyonko nahi pakad paye……
And then she rushes to her room…
Standing in front of mirror……she looks at herself…….
Uski itni jarrurat who aisa kah kaise sakta hai………
She throws a flower vase on the mirror….. mirror shattered into pieces…..
Angrily his face hallucinating in front of her all the time……

Somewhere away……….
Dharam scolding Veer for his deed…….
And veer completely lost in her thought's…..

Contd by myself Rashi 😳………………… 😆

Plz comment 😊

Rest story i'll post later.....
If U like it plz do reply... 😳
Nandini n me waiting for ur replies 😛

13 views no reply...... 😭

rashi... par that thread is here only in the DV section.. why dont you update that thread only .. 😳

kyunki now there are two threads with the same content 😆

ive commented twice.. actually nandini opened a thread with a link to that FF waala thread.. plus i also commented in the actual FF thread itself.. ab ye teesra bhi 😆

Originally posted by: lashy

rashi... par that thread is here only in the DV section.. why dont you update that thread only .. 😳

kyunki now there are two threads with the same content 😆

ive commented twice.. actually nandini opened a thread with a link to that FF waala thread.. plus i also commented in the actual FF thread itself.. ab ye teesra bhi 😆

That FF thread was created because the real thread had not been posted here...😊....anyways....thanx for replying the 3rd time!😆

Rashi...hope u don't mind me posting here...


Since she breaks her room mirror,her friend...a boyfriend .... comes to her room and asks her what the matter is... ....she says....
MC:Kuch Nahin....Basss....
Boyfriend:Kuch toh hai....varna tum muh phulaai kyun baithi ho....
MC:Maine kaha na kuch nahin hai....Samajh mein nahin aata kya???
BF:Theek hai....vaise main soch raha tha....kyun na hum dona....sirf hum dono mele mein chalein... ....bahut dinon se hum akele kahin mele mein nahin gaye aur mujhe tumse dher saari baatein bhi karni hain!!!!
MC:Toh yahin karo....ya garden mein....mele mein jaane ki kya zaroorat hai....mujhe kahin nahin jaana!!!
BF:Mela zyaada door bhi nahin hai....paas hi mein hai jahaan maine suna hai ki ek Blacksmith aur uska dost Prince aaye hue hain....kyun na dekh aaye??
MC:Blacksmith ....Naam Kya Hai Uska???
BF:Mujhe kya pata....tum chalogi tabhi toh pata lagega,na!!!
MC:Theek hai....Hum Chalenge....Aakhir hum bhi toh dekhenge ki ye dono hain kaun,kahaan se aaye hain aur hum unse mil chuke hain ya nahin....(she knows that itz Veer bt somewhere deep in her heart therez a feeling for him....that she isn't aware of ....and so she wants to see him.... 😳

Next... 😃

Both MC and BF are on their horses....still in his thoughts....(Background Song...Mela Dilon Ka Aata Hai....Rashi,do chk it!!!)
There in the mela...
Dharam : Kya tumhe lagta hai ki woh aayegi?
Veer : (Determined)Haan,woh zaroor aayegi,use aana hi padega!!!
Dharam : ....aur agar woh nahin aayi...toh..?
At that moment,MC arrives but she doesn't see DharamVeer...
Veer : (With raised eyebrows... )...Dekha???
Dharam : Haan bhai,dekh liya....use bhi aurrr tumhe bhi!!!!
Veer was staring,staring and staring at her....
Dharam : Ab sirf dekhte hi rahoge ya kuch karoge bhi??
Veer : Kya karoon....jab woh mere saamne aati hai....mera Dil Garden Garden Ho Jaata Hai!!!
BF : Yahaan aake kitna accha lag raha hai...hum dono akele.....
MC : Akele kahaan...itne saare log toh hain...
Veer : Arre yaar....woh Bandar kaun hai jo meri----ke peeche pada hai???
Dharam : Pata nahin...shaayad uska PREMI....(he says teasingly)..
Veer : Tum chup hi raho toh behtar hoga... ...aur waise bhi us Bandar ko aur bhi bandariyaan mil jaayengi is mele mein....
BF : Woh dekhiye....Choodiwala!!!
MC : Hume nahin chahiye...(Searching for Veer)
BF : Par....par kyun???Aapko toh choodiyaan pasand hain na??
MC : Haan...Magar hume nahin chahiye....
BF : Kya aap kisi ko dhoondh rahi hain???
MC : Ummm....Nahin....Nahin toh!!!Bhala main kisi ko kyun dhoondhne lagi???
Veer has an idea!!!He sends a man to divert their attention and he dresses up like a Choodiwala.... ....so that he can atleast touch her.... ...and hez successful!!!! 👏

Veer disguises himself as a Choodiwala and hez successful....

Contd:
Veer in the getup of choodiwala...

Le lo kanch ki choodiyan.... rang bi rangi choodiyan.....

MC : Searching for veer...

Veer : Aji sunti ho hum aapse pooch rahe hain. Aapke hathon mein yeh choodiyan bahut acchi lagengi..

MC : Hume nahi kharidni choodiyan....

Veer : Kyun kya hua...

BF : Le lo na.... yeh agar itna keh raha hai to le hi lo....
MC : Humne kaha na nahi lena matlab nahi lena...

Veer : Kyun beti (giggling) kya hua aap kisiko dhund rahi ho kya?

MC : Kyun.... aisa kyun poocha aapne ... aur ha hum kyun aapko bataye.. aapko isse kya matlab hum kisiko dhunde ya na dhunde....

Veer : Nahi maine socha aapke saath yeh Bandar toh hai hi to aap kise dhoond rahi ho....

BF : Kya tumne hame Bandar kaha....Rajjya ke hone wale raja ko Bandar kaha.... tumhari yeh jurrat....

Veer : Kya MAINE Bandar kaha.... Nahi ji aapne shayad galat suna... (giggling). Maine kaha aapke sath itna bahaddur hote hue aap kisi aur ko kyun dhoond rahi ho.

(MC too giggling )

To kaunsi rang ki choodiyan doon aapko....mujhe lagta hai aap pe yeh rang bahut acha lagega....

MC : Ha de do... Yehi de do...( thinking that oh God yeh Buddha mera picha nahi chodega lagta hai..... mein ab use kaha dhundoo)

Veer :Yeh lo beti main hi tumhe pehna deta hu....

MC : Ha le lo pehana do.... (looking here there)

Veer holds her hand...

Veer : Kitne mulayam haath hain aapke....kitne sunder....(Thinks...Mann karta hai ki kissie kar loon... )

MC blushing all the way....she looking at him and he looking at both the hands as well as her beauty...

BF : AE!!!Tum Choodiwale ho....apni hadh mein raho,Samjhe...Varna....(he pulls out his sword)...

Veer : Haan,Varna? Varna kya kar loge?

There....Dharam is watching everything....

BF : Kya tumne nahin dekha mere haath mein kya hai?

MC tries to stop him but she is unable to do anything...

Veer : Aise kitne hi talwaar maine dekhe hain....Waise yeh toh bahut hi chota hai,Beta!!!

BF : Lekin kaafi asardaar hai!!!!Ab zyaada behes ki...toh yeh tere khoon se rang jaayega!!!

Veer : Woh toh waqt hi bataayega!!Ek chota sa talwaar hone par ghamand mat kar....agar maine apni talwaar nikali toh tumhe saari duniya Laal dikhaayi degi,Samjhe!!!!

BF : Dekho!Mere paas tumse behes karne ka zara bhi waqt nahin hai,Buddhe....Ab tak main chup raha...par ab nahin rahoonga....main....

MC : BAS!!!Ab tum apna muh mat kholna!!!Kisi buzurg se kaise baat karte hain...kya tumhe nahin pata???Hume maaf kar dijiye(says to Veer).....inki taraf se hum maafi maangte hain....woh....

Veer : Nahin!Aapko maafi maangne ki koi zaroorat nahin hai... ....jise maangni chahiye....usko toh maangna hi padega,aaj nahin toh kabhi aur!!!

BF : Tujhe toh main dekh loonga,Buddhe!!!Chaliya Rajkumari ji..Abey oye....Haath chod,bey!!!!

He leaves her at once....while they on their way,she spots Dharam peeping!!!

MC : Hmmmm.....Hum abhi aate hain....(to BF)

BF : Par....

She follows Dharam....he is unaware of her following him....he goes to Veer to talk to him...

Veer : Agar aaj woh beech mein nahin aati toh main us Bandar ko....

Dharam : Rehne do,Veer.....use toh saza milegi hi...tum jo ho!!!!

Veer : Hmmmm...Mere talwaar se ab toh woh bach nahin sakta....

Dharam : (Making a face)....Waise ab toh tum khush hoge hi!!!

The lovely background song Pa Ma Ga...in the form of 'Ooooooo'.....is played...

Veer : Haan...bas ek bar woh mujhse aake kahe ki woh bhi mujhse pyaar karti hai....toh main....

Dharam : Ahem Ahem....and he starts laughing!!!

She hears everything...at this time shez both happy as well as angry!!!Shez not a girl who bears everything and so MC goes to the room behind that Choodi shop where they were chatting.... 😭