Samyukta Part 4 - Realizing their fears - Page 2

ahhhhh u r so regular Lashy😛 keep it up.

Again a rocking part👍🏼........ I feel like reading a novel ...... of an experienced author.😊

lashy 👏 🤗🤗🤗

This is outstanding, and superb (me so running out of words and will be looking at a Thesaurus for more words) 👏

The parts I really liked are :

• The scene dharma and veer are playing pranks on each other and the king walks in and how they sport foolish smiles so cute scene likha hai 😆😆😆

• The scene when the kings says that they both will not travel along and how their smiles disappear. Loooooool . 😆😆Also how dharma is trying to say that they were not attacked but they fought to protect the child.

• I loved this part when the king looks at his daughter and loves the painting she has done and how the queens does not think so. 🤣 🤣🤣🤣Also when Sia turns round and says that the tutor is not good. Me only want to see this sia in the serial

• When the queens saying why she named her sia so she would retain the qualities of goddess sita so sweet

• The father and daughter scene is so beautifully written and how he is reassuring sia that no one is perfect. I especially liked it when sia says that I will do the cooking tomorrow and her father is like whaat no no. Bechara dharma uski kya halat hogi siya se shaadi ke baat 🤣

• The scene where veer charges at agni – I felt the anger of veer and how dharma ,bhalla and other soldiers using all their strength could not to get veer off agni until dharma says that I don't want to lose you. The minute he says that veer lets go of agni. This show how much strong bond there is between brothers 👏

• Veer trying to search for a reason for his actions

• The friendship between dharma, bhalla and veer.

Me looking forward to the next part to see what happens when sia tries to cook and to read about Dhruv kumar 😊

YOU DID IT AGAIN!! 👏 👏 👏
Its awesome Lashy! Keep it up..You've described each bit really well! Looking forward to your next part 😃

Originally posted by: kirantarani2007

thanks for the explanation........oh now i feel very sad for sonu😕

yes kiran.... thats precisely the point.. for a couple of boys who have grown in royalty and used to being spoilt and not facing responsibility yet.. only been in games and sports.. its only when something so hard hits them ...does their bubble burst... do they realise that something is wrong in the system and the structure... hence... the readers end up having to feel atleast a bit of the same "Not nice" feelings Dharam and veer currently feel..

i am sorry if it was not very clear... but i didnt want to explain everything and spell it out.. as i wanted it to be thrilling and allow the readers to speculate what was happening.. 😳

amazing!! fantasctic!! i'm left speechless!! great detail!! 😊 😊

hey di check this out:

Originally posted by: lashy

and this is the link:
Samyukta part 1

Originally posted by: *Jr.Nancy_drew*

hey di check this out:

haan baba... thats what i said i find it odd that neither of the two parties have any friends.. dharam and veer have only each other and agni and jai have only each other.. in the they above to ppiyu i meant dharam and veer.... and then i went on to add that even in this scenario dharam and veer have each other... agni has no one but his dad..

the para bottom is taken from the first part.. it talks about dharam and veer in the gurukul.. the brothers are fiercely defensive of the other... they strike friendship with a fellow aryvavrat noble's son. balaram i.e. bhalla - it talks about dharam and veer striking friendship 😳

Dharam and Veer remain inseparable and supplement each other's weaknesses when and wherever necessary. The brothers grow up to become incredibly protective and fiercely defensive of the other, much to the dismay of Agni. They strike friendship with a fellow aryvrat noble's son Balaram i.e. Bhalla.

^ ahh ok miss! got it!!
I thought Bhalla was meant for Agni my misunderstanding
*does some pushups*
😛

Originally posted by: *Jr.Nancy_drew*

^ ahh ok miss! got it!!
I thought Bhalla was meant for Agni my misunderstanding
*does some pushups*
😛

awww you sweet little pumpkin 😆 here this is for you --> ⭐️