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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: lashy

loved the letter and the part that vishwa is falling ill.. as in that there will be some cute caring for scenes.. 😳 even i feel that like bhuvana...you should not rush through it and show it slowly...maybe you can do a vishwaasII 😳



yh i liked the letter thing from veer-one wudnt expect him to write his feelings down 😳

yh definately i will not rush it...i will make every part longer...so theres more contents in each part because if i take the break n continue it'll be akward coz break will be for 2-3 months n after that i dont think anyone will kepp up with teh story...i dont know...i'll look into it
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: ektay11

👏
awesome shona
at last u updated 😳



thank u ekta
yh finally i managed to update 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: Girl_2007

lovely part shona! 👏 👏



thank u archana

Originally posted by: meghaparthi

Shona i will wait... 😳



u waited patiently 😆
Edited by **Shona** - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: vinisha_Rajat

heyy shona..am glad u back wid ur update...!! yh me back
the part was really gud...!!! thank u
luvd da way u used those pics..!!! ...the mandir one is relli gud..!!! yep me too feel the pix are gd...thanks for the pix
the letter was sweet specially da last part...VEER apni hi tarif kar raha hai..!!! obviously itna honhar rajkumar hai...apni thodi se tarif toh karni he padh ti hai 😆
am happy that aryavardhan wasnt thinking for vishwa n dharam...or it wud b like ekta's serial nahinnn!!that can never happen in Vishva...otherwise it will turn into Kvisvaas 😆
and u said dat v r addicted to vishwas..then yupps..atleast i am.. ...and dats all becoz of u...!! awww thank u...actually im addicted to writing it...i spend most of my science lessons planning next part of Visvaas
btw am looking forward for next part...VEER takinf care of vishwa ...and dharam n sia...in sum other village.. yh next part shud be good hopefully


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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: crazy_lil_gurl

Woww loved the part 😳 Sweet scenes..can't wait 4 ur next update 👏👏



thank u sarah
next update shud come up soon!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
Hey Shona Thanx 4 pics. 👍🏼
Lovely as usual 👏
Plz update soon.
1 quetion-Is Sandhiya a negative character? 😡
Aur kitni ladkiyaan Veer ko line maarengi? 😉
Mera Dharam kuch kam thode hi hai par uske liye bhi to kisi ko bacha kar rakho ⭐️
Mere Dharam ki popularity kam kyun hi rahi hai? 😭 (On a second thought,not to worry,"MAIN HOON NA" )😈
PLZ update soon.😊


Edited by rock 2 d2v - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
ok guys before moving on i would liek tyo Credit lashy A.K.A Shraddha di for letting me use some of teh scenes she suggested earlier on the forum...thank u di 🤗

ok heres the next bit:

Vishva: kya baat hai Ambika maa

AM: ab ko bahat teez bukar hai...apko jaldhi ilaj ki zaroorat hai

She goes to fetch some medicine but cant find the right one

on the otherhand Veer comes up to her

Veer: kya baat hai? sab teekh toh hai?

AM: nahin Rajkumari Vishva ki tabyat kharab hai aur humare paas sahi dawai bhi nahin hai...

Veer: par ab kya hoga?

AM: pas ke gaw mein ke bade vaidji ke paas hai...par tufan ane wala hai

Veer: koi baat nahin mein jaunga

Dharam: nahin Veer

Dharam enters

He pulls veer to the side

Dharam: hum jayenge...Vishva ko is waqt tumhari zarorat hai...aur waise bhi tumhe apne Dharam par bharosa nahin hai

Veer: apni jaan se bhi ziyada

both hug


Dharam is all set to take leave when Sia confronts him

Dharam: Si..

Sia: shhh...Vishva ki tara mujhe lada nahin ata par shayad mein tumhari kuch madat kar sako..

Dharam: sia tufan ah sakta hai

Sia: accha he hai...saath samana karenge...ab jaldi chalo

Both take everyones leave

AM is making a medicine from some herbs to see if that will bring down Vishva's fever

on the otherhand Veer is standing over Vishva scolding her

Veer: mana kiya tha na meine...thanda doodh mat piyo...gala kharab ho jayega...kudh ka khabhi kyal nahin rakti...apni bareh mein nahin par mere bare mein toh socho...aur mujhe pura yakeen hai tum thande pani se he nahti hogi

Vishva is amazed to see Veer acting like a mummy..she makes a mental note to make sure she tell Niviriti all this

Dharam and Sia were walking towards the village...it seemed so far away at the rate Sia was walking at...she was tired while Dharam tried not to laugh at her state

Sia: tum aur Veer kaise itna chal lete hao....

Dharam: hum chalte hai par Veer hava mein udhta hai...

its nearly nightfall

Ambika Maa gives Veer the food and medicine to give to Vishva...She was busying with other matters

Seeing Veer so close to Vishva Sandhiya gets jealous and decides to do something



Sandy: ah kya mein undar ah sakti hoon?

Agni: ji aye

Sandy had gone to Agni for help...she explained the whole thing to him...He looked furious...The two decide to join hands and create distances between Veer and Vishva

The two are walking out of there to see Vishva wen

Guruji: agni...humme apse kuch baat karni hai...undar aye

Agni enters

Agni: ji huruji

Guru: lagatar app pariksha mein DV se peeche ah rahe hai...ap toh subha ki doodh bhi nahin puri kar sakte is liye meine aur rajya sabha ne apko phirse Aryanagar bhej ne ka phasla kiya hai...ap ko kal subha he nikal na hoga...ye rajmantri ji ka phasala hai


Agni: par guruji

Guru: ap sari baatein Rajya sabha se kijiye...an ap ja sakte hai...shubh ratri

Agni storms off leaving Sandy confused

Agni is throwing things left right and center thinking taht he had failed his father and himself and that now Veer will look better in Vishva's eyes

Sandy comes in

Sandy: ye ap kya kar rahe hai

Agni is so angry he grabs her neck

Agni: chali jao yahan se..isse pehle ke mein tumhe mar dalun chaliye jao



Sandy runs away from there

on the otherhand Veer is giving Vishva a plate of food...he helps her out of bed and makes sure the milk is hot and that all the food is good...



Vishva: ab itna kar diya hai toh kila bhi tum doh

Veer: behas mat karo aur kah lo

Vishva: tum nahin khao ge

Veer takes a piece of chappati and dips it into the dal and takes it to vishva's mouth who opens it and he put in the food

he feeds her a few more bites before she also begins to feed him...the two smile at each other

once tehy finish eating and Vishva drinks her medicine Veer tells her to go to sleep...He is about to leave when he takes hol of his hand

Vishva: itni jaldi mat jao...mujhe choodh ke

Veer agrees and tucks her in bed before sitting down near her

they begin to talk and recall past moments

Vishva: tum takh gaye ho veer...jao soh jao

Veer: tum bhi toh kahan soyi

Vishva: needh nahin ah rahi

Veer: janti ho bachpan mein jab mujhe needh nahin ati thi tab maa mujhe lori ga kar sula deti thi

Vishva: hmm kash koi muje bhi lori ga kar sula deta...

She looks at Veer

After a while Veer takes the hint n decides to sing for her

he sings ....after a while of being lost in his melodious voice Vishva faals asleep with her head in his lap

Veer didnt want to wake her up so stays sitting


on the otehrhand Dharam and Sia are walking still when they reach the outskirts of teh village...it starts to rain...they ignore it for a while but then it gets heavier....Dharam turns to look at Sia...onli to find her a lil behind...not following him...instead dancing in the rain....she looks ravishing thought Dharam who was completely smitten by her beauty

She sees him looking so gestures him to join her....he goes over to her

She sneezes...Dharam doesnt want her to fall ill so rushes her to a nearby cottage

they knock...an elderly lady opens the door

She lets them in...she offers tehm water and food and asks them to sit down

Lady: tum dono ko dekh kar mujhe mera beta aur bahu yaad agaye...tumhari shaadi kab hui

Dharam: a ji humari

Sia quickly beats him to the reply



Sia: kuch dino pehle he hui...

Dharam looks at her and blushes


They spend the night at teh lady's house who sends them to the vaidji's house the next morning...they take the medicine and leave

Precap: agni back in aryanagar
JV: ab sighasen ke liye humme un dono ko marna hoga

Agni: par subse pehle uss Veer ka kaam tamam karna hai

teh duo laugh while on the other hand Samar questions Vishva about Veer


enjoy

Shona

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: rock 2 d2v

Hey Shona Thanx 4 pics. 👍🏼Lovely as usual 👏 Plz update soon. 1 quetion-Is Sandhiya a negative character? 😡 Aur kitni ladkiyaan Veer ko line maarengi? 😉 Mera Dharam kuch kam thode hi hai par uske liye bhi to kisi ko bacha kar rakho ⭐️ Mere Dharam ki popularity kam kyun hi rahi hai? 😭 (On a second thought,not to worry,"MAIN HOON NA" )😈 PLZ update soon.😊



thank u spandita

sandhiya isnt negative or evil but she's beginning to like veer a bit too much n wants to break up vishva n veer's relationship

no more girls for Veer now

maybe...cud be a new entry for Dharam...not sure...

well tum ho na!-i'll save Dharam for u 😳 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
Thanks for the update...Veer was so caring 😳 in this part I really love the way u put things shona in your fanfic mazaa aa gaya pad kar...Agla part jaldhi bhejna & aur pata nahi vishwa kya kahegi samar se jab woh usse veer ke baare mein poochega 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
that was another romantic part thanx a bunch shona ji.


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