Passionate confession~ Veera...

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey all me bac wid another kinda confession..hope u like this…

This happened when they got out safe n sound from zara khan's kaid…

Umm..abb humein lagta hai ki shera ko chalna chahiye…

"Shera jaa rahi hai veer.."

"Haan..tum ..tum jao.." said veer..who wasn't at all paying heed to what shera was saying coz he was so busy taking care of dharam..

"Thik hai toh phir hum chaltein hai.." said a teary eyed Shera whose voice was now choked wid emotions n threatening tears…

she remembered what veer had said..

"agar kisi ne dharma ko haath lagane ki koshish bhi ki toh mein uski jaan le lunga"..n all the times when veer had said wid expressions n wid voice that he loved Dharam more than his life.." She kept on staring at both of them..seeing the beauty of their relation..

then Dharam said..

"Veer kam se kam abb toh inhe dhanyavaad keh do..agar yeh humara madad na karti toh shayad hum kabhi bahar na aa pate…"

B4 veer cud reply shera said.."Koi baat nahi Rajkumar Dharam..woh veer abhi aapki dekhbhaal mein lagen hai..aur phir yeh toh mera farz tha..soh koi baat nahi.."

Veer was listening to her every wrd carefully…he didn't know that he has sounded so cold..

"..thik hai abb hum chaltein hai.."…n saying so she turned to get a last glimse of Veer..trying to control the the tears fallin down her big black almond shaped beautiful eyes..

Veer luked in her direction n saw tears glistening in her eyes in his Shera's eyes..his Shera..she had always been the bold beauty for him..the strong, determined gal who never lost control on her emotions..the most courageous gal..who not only fought for herself buh for him..the strongest coz she not only supported him buh also was his inspiration to keep going…He had never seen tears in her large, big beautiful expressive eyes…n he didn't like seeing tears in her eyes..he cudn't stand them..

Seeing veer glancing at her.,, she immediately changed her expressions..she put on a fake lil smile on her face n said.." Hum kehna nahi cahte…par..khair…Alvida Rajkumar Dharam..apna khayal rakhiyega..aur hum bhagwan se dua karenge ki app jald hi thik ho jayen…..(then wid a pause…) aur haan jab app Aryanagar ke maharaj ban jayen toh Shera ko bhul mutt jayega..Jab bhi zarurat pade humein yaad..mera matlab hai bulva lijiye ga..hum aa..matlab pahuch jaenge.."

All this while she dare not luk in Veer's eyes..coz she knew her tears wudn't stop at that very moment..She didn't want him to hav the faintest idea that she needed him..coz she knew he had many more duties to do…So she didn't even glance at him once coz she knew his piecing gaze was on her..n he was trying to get her eyes…She had meant to direct the last statement for veer..buh said it indirectly…

Saying so she walked turned away..n walked as fast as she cud…away from there..away from veer…

Veer felt a prt of himself goin away..he felt an unbearable pain seeing her go away widout acknowledging him even for once..he felt torn apart coz he never expected that she'd wlk out like this..after all she had done for him n given him..

It was true that he was way beyond happy that Dharam had cum bac..safe n sound..buh he didn't know why he felt torn when he watched her go..why he felt daggers piercing his heart when he saw the tears in her eyes…Why he was cursing himself for not stopping her…He had so many questions in his mind…So many that he found it hard n unbearable.For the first time in his life…..he had sumone oder than Dharam who knew him better than himself…sumone oder that Dharam who had succeded to get a place..soft corner in his heart..She was his strength..she was his power..she was his inspiration..she was his guide in his rough time, she had been his..only his…all this time while she had rescued him..she had taken so much care for him..she had practically stayed awake nights for taking care of him..she had taken care of him not coz it was her duty as a by-passer or as a friend..he had sensed that it was sumfin more..not jus friendship..unknowingly she had done the things which only a lover does..unknowingly she made a rilli special place in his heart..she did not need to make an effort..n she hadn't..evrytin happened in such a way that they didn't even get a hint of what was happening to both of them..they didn't hav a faintest idea that they'll get soooo close to each-oder...all the time she had been wid him..he had felt special..vry special..n he didn't realize it..she was his morale support all the time..She had been the only gal in his life who had succeded in winning over him..only one who cud control him, support him, care for him soooo deeply..the only one who cud sacrifice herself only n only for him..not for sum selfish reason buh due to the fact that she respected him..adored him..Loved him….

He felt a prt of him die as he saw her leave….

He had a sudden urge to stop her…n jus when he was so confused of his responsibilities..his duties…n all…then Dharam said" "Bohot Pyaar karte ho na usse…"

"Nahi..nahi toh.."

"Humse jooth math bolo veer..hum jante hai…jao usse roko…"

"Par.."

"Aur haan humara aur sab ki chinta maat karo..Jao veer..Jao..Kahin der ho gayi toh zindagi bhar akele reh jaoge…"

"Mein baad…"

"Aur haan baad ki toh socho hi mat…kabhi vapas na mili toh..zindagi bhar dukh mein gujar doge…jao isse pehle ki who humesha ke liye na chale jaye….."

"Thik hai..par tum apna dhyan rakhna…aur…"

"JAOOOOOO….Veer…hum sab samajh gaye..jaooooo"

N wid that..Veer finally dashed thru the forest to reach to his love for life..his soul..his jaan…

Whereas the oder way round there was SHERA..walkin blindly thru the forest..unknown to where she was headin..she kept on walkin…..So many thoughts kept on entering her mind..tears continuously flowing down her rosy cheeks..

I'll cont it later….

Hope u all like it.....

Love ya all……t.ccccccccccc

-Ur's Ever Madhu😳

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Posted: 16 years ago
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will edit this later..had typed it long time bac buh didn't get time to post it..n now that the story doesn't hav a confession in reel DV..so I thought why not give it a try..will update sn..plzzz giv u'r views..they mean a lot.....

U all r welcum wiv u'r suggestions n views.....
Love ya alllllll........t.cccccccccccc
-Ur's Ever Madhu😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
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😉WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO lovely confession missy loved it ......................
so cute ...............sooooooooo ............romantic 😊😊



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Posted: 16 years ago
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wow what a confession good work keep it up! 👍🏼
Edited by khawahishh - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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aw lovely dear.......
muah madhu....🤗
enjoyed it...😍
i hope kaash aisa kuch dikhate....😔
ab toh we can't hope they will show so much in 4 days....
but plz plzzz u do continue....
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Posted: 16 years ago
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It's lovely yaar.Very well written part.
Plz continue soon.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: ektay11

wow

its lovely yaar
plz cont

Hey thanxie dear..
will cont asap....
Love ya.....t.ccccccccc
-Ur's Ever Madhu😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: junglli billi

😉WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO lovely confession missy loved it ......................
so cute ...............sooooooooo ............romantic 😊😊

thanx my sweetu niti di...U r jus jolly gd ji..
thanxie.....
will update later....
Love ya my sweetu.pyaari sissy..sowie I didn't read all the PM's now kyunki bohot jyada hai n replying wud take time..so plzzzzzzz bear wiv me.....
Love ya sweet-pea.....t.cccccccc
-Ur's Ever Madhu😳



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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: khawahishh

wow what a confession good work keep it up! 👍🏼

thanxie sweety.....
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: Rash2cool

aw lovely dear.......

muah madhu....🤗
enjoyed it...😍
i hope kaash aisa kuch dikhate....😔
ab toh we can't hope they will show so much in 4 days....
but plz plzzz u do continue....

awiiieee thanxie rashi di..thank u soooo much...
even I wished that they atleast showed hoe Veera confessed..par..urrrghhhhhhh...they didn't...
I'll cont asap....
Love ya shona.....t.cccccccc
-Ur's Ever Madhu😳
Edited by cute_madhu - 16 years ago

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