15th October Written Update

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Here it is!

RECAP:
Veer has entered CrazyZaras Lair and is searching for Dharam
Dharam is unconscious
Nivriti and Maharaj are in Jail
Jai Mama is being annoying
Shera is getting worried for Veer
Veer is stuck in a Room with BadGuys

AND NOW:

Dharam is stil lying on his Jail floor remembering all the times Veer saved him and Veer is doing the same thing๐Ÿ˜ญ Veer decides hes had enough of sleeping with the BadGuys (some of them are snoring) so he goes and breas the bars of the window and climbs out that way๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Veer is wandering around and finds Dharams Jail Cell!
He runs to Dharam looking shocked and worried and sits outside the Cell and calls Dharam and cries๐Ÿ˜ญ
Dharam opens his eyes and smiles๐Ÿ˜ƒ and says Veer!
FINALLY!!!!!๐Ÿ‘

Over to Shera๐Ÿ˜† who is getting worried about Veer and wants to go investigate but realises she promised him that she would stay outside and that annoys her so she kicks a stone and the BadGuys hear her and come after her๐Ÿ˜ฒ They surround her with swords and the FatBadGuy starts talking๐Ÿคข
FatBadGuy: What you thought we were blind? We know youve been following us for days now and we also know that your saathi๐Ÿ˜‰ has gone inside to get his brother but we havent done anything to him yet because we play with our Shikhar ๐Ÿคข
Shera: Try and touch him! Shera will break your hands!๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ˜‰
FatBadGuy: Really? Dont worry we'll give you this chance too๐Ÿ˜• Lets go!
Shera: Dont even dare to touch Shera!๐Ÿ‘ Shera doesnt play with her Shikhar! She kills them straight away!
FatBadGuy: You will fight with us? (Why do you think shes holding a sword? Idiot)
Shera: Yes! I will fight you! One Hindustani girl is enough to fight you!
So Shera gets a sword and starts fighting them ๐Ÿ‘ but she eventually gets bashed on the head๐Ÿ˜ก and they drag her away with them๐Ÿคข Disappointing end to a brilliant starting Fight

Bck to DharamVeer๐Ÿ˜ƒ Dharam has managed to pull himself to a standing position and holds his arms out to Veer who runs forward and they both hug through the Jail bars๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ DharamVeer music is playing and its so Moving!๐Ÿ˜ญ I need tissues!
Veer pulls away but they hold onto each other๐Ÿ˜ญ
Dharam: I knew you would come๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Veer: How could I not come? I am your Shadow after all๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ƒ Are you hurting a lot?๐Ÿ˜ญ
Dharam: No Absolutely not! You have come now Veer In front of this Happiness I feel no pain at all
Veer: I can see Dharam and the people who have done this to you I will not let them go!๐Ÿ‘ I wont let anything hurt you Dharam
Dharam: I know thats why even coming so near to Death I was still waiting for you. Veer I thought that when we would meet I would ask for Forgiveness but now that you are here I have no idea where to start. Forgive me Veer I made a big mistake I hurt you Veer๐Ÿ˜ญ
Veer: I hurt you too Dharam I doubted you๐Ÿ˜ญ
Dharam: Its all because of Jai chacha! (AH! Hes chacha now. Not TAOJI!๐Ÿ˜†)
Veer: By trying to seperate DharamVeer they made a big mistake Now together we will show them๐Ÿ‘
Dharam: How do we get out of here? CrazyZaras men are nuts.
Veer: You know Dharam that when DharamVeer decide on something they complete it๐Ÿ‘
And then DharamVeer do that handholding thing๐Ÿ‘ YAY!

Veer then tries to open the Jail but cant because of the lock๐Ÿ˜ก He gets a stone to break it but then someone comes so Dharam tells Veer to hide and wait for the right Moment and Veer hides but tells Dharam he wont leave him tonight๐Ÿ˜ƒ Dharam sits down and pretends to be unconscious and a BadGuy comes wandering in with a sword and Veer kills him like that! And then Veer comes to sit with Dharam and tells him He wont leave him and they both sit together. TOGETHER. AT LAST. I feel faint with relief and Joy๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

While this was happening Shera is being dragged to a Jail and threatening the BadGuys while shes at it๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ‘
Shera: You cant keep Shera locked up for long! Understand?!
FatBadGuy laughs and shoves Shera into the Jail๐Ÿ˜ก
Shera: Let Shera out and she'll show you!
FatBadGuy laughs again๐Ÿคข and makes fun of her the Freak. He tells her that tomorrow morning they'll play with her too (That sounds a bit dodgy... Ganda Insaan!๐Ÿ˜ก) and laughs again
Shera has had enough of his stupid laugh and grabs his arm
Shera: Mera Veer kahan hain?๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ˜‰
FatBadGuy tells her hes here too and they are keeping an eye on him๐Ÿคข
Shera: OSSE HAATH BHI MAAT LAGANA SAMJHE??!!!๐Ÿ‘
FatBadGuy mocks Shera. Idiot.
Shera yells at him and demands to be let out but they laugh and leave and then Shera looks worried and says Veer!

Veer however is not thinking of Shera at all๐Ÿ˜† hes with Dharam and Roothe kay yaar is playing in the background as they just sit and watch each other๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Veer: Go to sleep Dharam
Dharam: Im scared that if I close my eyes for a Moment then you will disappear
Veer: I wont leave you Dharam go to sleep๐Ÿ˜ƒ
DharamVeer smile at each other while that song plays and then Veer comes to Dharam and starts cleaning his wounds and theres flashbacks of all the Good Times๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
*sighs happily*

Precap:
DharamVeer are fighting each other BadGuys are laughing๐Ÿ˜ก Shera is held hostage๐Ÿคข

COME ON SHERA!!!!!๐Ÿ‘ GO GIRL!!!!

Aisha xxx๐Ÿ˜‰


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Posted: 16 years ago
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Thanks ayesha for lovely update dear....๐Ÿค—
but veer's body double was used while the last scene๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜ญ
Edited by Rash2cool - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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thanx a lot 4 the besutiful update ...........

thanx a lot ........

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Posted: 16 years ago
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thanx a lot 4 the besutiful update ...........

thanx a lot ........

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Thanks for exciting written update as u usually do๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Posted: 16 years ago
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arre va aisha!!!!
aaj kal shera ke dialogues par kuch jyada he stress kar rahi hain?๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜†
kyun, kya baat hai jee???๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜‰
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: anushababli

arre va aisha!!!!

aaj kal shera ke dialogues par kuch jyada he stress kar rahi hain?๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜†
kyun, kya baat hai jee???๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜‰

๐Ÿ˜† Oh come on yaar! Are you telling me that when you heard Sheras dialogue you didnt jump around in excitement???
Kya dialogue tha yaar! Vah vah!
Osse toh Oscar milnah chaihye!
Shera sounds so POSSESSIVE and its so OBVIOUS that shes in Love with Veer when she talks like that!
Threatening violence if they even dare to hurt her Man!๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ‘
Vah Vah! Kya baat hain!๐Ÿ‘
Aisha xxx๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜‰
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Posted: 16 years ago
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thanks Aisha dearest ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿค—.. brilliant update ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ โญ๏ธโญ๏ธโญ๏ธ...

Shera's dialogues r great.. & u'r way of writting them is even much greater ๐Ÿ˜ƒ...

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