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Vinisha

@-Vinisha-

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Posted: 17 years ago

#591

@ annie...apart Frm writing vn creating new plots v even got t noe hw to chorify...😆

Originally posted by: annie20

@vinisha...ummm...veer grabs maid's hand...imagine if veer had done this in reality...haha...😆

WoO 😲 If Yew Wud Hav Told Dat To Me Be4 Den I Wud Nt Hav Wriiten Dat Eva...😲 [ 😆😆😆 ] I Dun Wanna Imagine Dat Even.. [ 😆😆😆 ]

@ aandhanika...🤣 It Seems Yew had controlled ur feelings since days..writing nly one lines...'' ab tumhe persmission mil gayi,toh tumhare andar ki writer jaag uthi..'' 🤣
Yeah I Will open a new thread f writing bt wid a different idea...😳

Story Contd - Sapna - Par mai toh dukhi hu na...😭 ...Koi mere baare mein b toh socho...😭..
Siya n Shera started f thinking sum way...😊
On d other hand Dharam n VEER making fun f Agni Saddy face...😆😆😆...Coz He Wznt Getting Married...!

RT_vinisha....!🤗
living for...😳😳😳
❤️RAJAT❤️forever😍😍😍

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poulami

@priyanka1806

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Posted: 17 years ago

#592

@vinie....hahahaha...this one liner topic has taught us to chorify lyk dakoo queen shera...😆btw yah aandhanika has started to express her feelings in full form

@aandhanika....Way to go dear....👍🏼

So finally Dharam and Veer brought Agni to Sapna....

And Sia-shera also thought the same....so they also brought her to agni

So Agni aur Sapne mile....chup chup ke....on their fist date...😉

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Vinisha

@-Vinisha-

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 17 years ago

#593

@ annie....True See nao she'll cum n again a Biiiigggg post...😆

Agni didnt knew anything Bout Romance So dV Standing behind d wall...n Telling Him Wat To Say..! 😆
Sapna - Agni mai b chahti hu ki hamari shaadi ho...😭....par mujhe nai lagta aisa kabhi hoga..
VEER - Yew stupid wipe Off her tears...😆😆😆
Dharam - Hug Her 😳
Agni wiped of her tears n hugged her....Sapna felt Comfortable n relaxed...!
Agni - '' Mai ja raha hu maharaj se baat karne''

RT_vinisha....!🤗
living for...😳😳😳
❤️RAJAT❤️forever😍😍😍

Edited by vinisha_RAJAT - 17 years ago

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poulami

@priyanka1806

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Posted: 17 years ago

#594

@vinie...yah she will make a grand entry now....😃..u posting in arial instead of comic sans...at first toh i cudnt recognise....😆

Veer...yeh agni bhi naa....ekdum unromantic hain...achha khasa mausam tha...achhi khasi date chal rahi thi....ab use maharaj se milne ki yaad aa gaya🤓😆

Dharam..coming infront....Agni...wapas jao..jao wapas...pehle apni life set tohkar lo...😆maharaj se rishta pakka karne ki baat hum kar lenge😆

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Vinisha

@-Vinisha-

Dazzler

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Posted: 17 years ago

#595

@ annie...Lolz wz thinking faw Sum change...😆...I Thot lemme try arial..Bt Itz Nt luking Gud So I'll b Back To Comic Sans...😆

Agni Cums Back To Sapna...n Sits with her on d grassland...😳
While dV goes To maharaj Aryavardhan & Maharaj Natraj [ Sia n Ananya's Dad ] Wz Olready Der...😃
When Maharaj Natraj came to Noe Dat Dey Tolking Bout Sapna Den He Told Him Dat He Noes Sapna's Dad n Called Him...Lolz I mean Sent a Sandesh To Call Him...n Da Next Day Sapna's Dad Wz Der...! 😉

Vinisha_RAJAT 🤗
living for...😳😳😳
❤️RAJAT ❤️forever😍😍😍

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poulami

@priyanka1806

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Posted: 17 years ago

#596

Originally posted by: vinisha_RAJAT
@ annie...Lolz wz thinking faw Sum change...😆...I Thot lemme try arial..Bt Itz Nt luking Gud So I'll b Back To Comic Sans...😆

Agni Cums Back To Sapna...n Sits with her on d grassland...😳
While dV goes To maharaj Aryavardhan & Maharaj Natraj [ Sia n Ananya's Dad ] Wz Olready Der...😃
When Maharaj Natraj came to Noe Dat Dey Tolking Bout Sapna Den He Told Him Dat He Noes Sapna's Dad n Called Him...Lolz I mean Sent a Sandesh To Call Him...n Da Next Day Sapna's Dad Wz Der...! 😉

Vinisha_RAJAT 🤗
living for...😳😳😳
❤️RAJAT ❤️forever😍😍😍

@ vinie.....Lolz.....back to comic sans...wow thats ur unique isstyllee😆😆😆.jaise aandhanika has na..arial+bold+italic...i have arial+bold...😳😳😃....plus sometimes colours...😆...

maharaj natraj to sapna's dad...{letz giv him a name...umm...maharaj dhanraj😃}heellllooo my friend....aap kaise hain...mujhe apko ek khush khabri deni hain...

MD...ohh..hello natraj...main achha hoon..kaisa good newz...

ok bye dear vinisha...hav to go offline...😳😊

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Vinisha

@-Vinisha-

Dazzler

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Posted: 17 years ago

#597

@ annie...WoO yew noe whu writes in which style...saari khabar hai...😆
Oh Okiez....Buh Byeee... 🤗...Gud Nyt,Sd Tc..! 😳

Maharaj Dhanraj Reaches Aryanagar n Agrees 4 Agni n Sapna's Marriage...😃Everyone iz excited n happy 4 d three couples....😳
On d Other hand,VEER wz in his room near da window seeing d moon...😍...Jus den Shera came inside n closed VEER'z eyes frm behind 😳....VEER holds her hand n sees dat she's wearing a beautiful Pink colored Lehnga ...Giving her a princess n royal look...VEER wz fascinated by her luks...for she neva looked so pretty Eva...😳😳😳
Shera - Wat Happened..? Accha nai hai kya..?
VEER took her to d stool nearby n told her to sit dwn...went to d cupboard...[ Meanwhile shera thinking watz VEER trying to do..😕 ]...n Came wid a pair of beautiful anklets..

RT_vinisha....!🤗
living for...😳😳😳
❤️RAJAT❤️forever😍😍😍

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Rashmi

@aandhanika

Dazzler

Posted: 17 years ago

#598

@Annie

Vinisha is right yaar you keep track of every thing ( our writting style) 😆 ... and were you guys taking about me the whole time ??😕

@Vinisha Yes now that you have aproved my big/ long post... i'm back with them 😛😆

Shera was like blushing when she saw veer bringing the anklets for her

Shera- kya yeh mere liyee hai

Veer puts his finger before her lips and said

Veer- ssshh

With that she kept quiet and looked at veer how he was wearing the anklets on her feets... and veer also was looking at shera while wearing the anklets for her

There was an eye lock 😍

Back at the mahal were sia and dharam were

Sia was in her room making a sawl for dharam... she was almost done only one last touch was needed when she acidently pricks her finger with an needle

Sia- aah!

Dharam heard her yelling as he was near her room and got scared thinking that maybe something bad had happend with the love of his life ... he went in her room as fast as he could

When he arrived in her room he saw sia standing by her bed with her back towards dharam and talking to herself (she didn't realise that dharam was in the room)

Sia- offo! chalo koi baat nahi sia.... now back to work only one last touch and this lovely scarf will be done and i hope dharam likes it

She picked up the needle and went on with her work ...after a few minuts she was done and held the scarf up with a big smile

Dharam who was still in the room was staring at his lady love and thought 'kitna kaam karte hai aur woh bhi sirf mere liyee.... i most be lucky's boy in the whole world'

Dharam went to sia and huged her from the back

Sia- dharam tum kab aaye??

Dharam- mein hamesha yaha tha

Sia- kya?

Dharam- haan... kuth tere dil se poocho.... tere hote (lips) se poocho.... tere is kamre se poocho yeh bhi jaanta hai khi mein yaha kab se tha

Sia tarted blushing

Edited by aandhanika - 17 years ago

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Vinisha

@-Vinisha-

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 17 years ago

#599

@ aandhanika....Lolz Nah nt exact;y...Darro mat,hum burai nai kar rahe the....😆...Karni hogi toh saamne hi karenge...*giggle*...!

Originally posted by: aandhanika

Sia- dharam tum kab aaja??

aandhanika...It shud b...'' dharam tum kab aaye??''

Okay..? 😊

Btw aandhanika is a bit long...havin any nick name..? 😃

Story -
Dharam - Kya hua haath mein..? Siya aap hamare liye itna kyu karti hai...dekho lag gaya na tumhe...😕
Siya - ''hum theek hai dharam....aap bekkaar mein inna tensed😆 ho rahe hai..'' 😳

RT_vinisha....!🤗
living for...😳😳😳
❤️RAJAT❤️forever😍😍😍

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Rashmi

@aandhanika

Dazzler

Posted: 17 years ago

#600

@Vinisha Thanx for the correction yaar and please do contineu correcting me like this (you know na my hindi is bad) .... Well my reall name is rashmi... you can call me with that name if aandhanika is to long
Dharam- i can't see you get hurt sia

Sia- dharam humme kuch nahi hua... yeh chodo aur yeh dekhiye

She showed dharam the sawl she had made herself only for dharam

Sia- yeh kaisa hai?

Dharam- bohut sundar hai

Sia- kya tumhe pasand hai?

Dharam- haan bohut pasand.... infact i love it!

Sia was so happy hearing this from dharam

Sia- pata hai dharam meine pehli baar yeh khud apne haatho se banaya...

Dharam- kya tumne woh kahawat suni hai?

Sia- kaisa kahawad?

Dharam- nahi suni hai to ab suniye

" Always kiss the hands of the person who makes something beautifull / special out of something ordenary"

Sia- huh? i never in my life heard this from anyone 😕

Dharam- that's because this is the first time that something beautifull has been made out of some ordenary things in history aur woh bhi ek khubsoorat larki khi haato se

Sia blushes and hugges dharam very tighly

Dharam- ab apne aako kho band karo...

Sia- kyun?

Dharam- no questions ask just close your eyes

Sia closed her eyes... dharam waved his hands befor sia's eyes to make sure that her eyes were trully closed and after he did that he was totaly sure that her eyes were closed

Dharam held sia's hand in his hand and said

Dharam- kabaraye mat ( don't worry)

Sia- jab mein tumhare saath hoon toh kabarana kha sawal bhi nahi hoti ( when i'm with you i have nothing to worry about)

Dharam smilled and took her to the terras whiche wasn't far from sia's room

On the terras was a round table with an big white box on it... this box had a big red ribben on it

Dharam brought sia befor the box and said to cound till 10 and then after 10 to open her eyes

Whille sia was counting to 10 dharam slipt away leaving sia alone there on the terras ( sia was bussy counting to 10 that she didn't even realise when dharam was leaving)

Dharam didn't go to far he was hiding behind te door where sia couldn't see him ( he was stading there as he wanted to see what sia would do)

After sia was done she slowly opened her eyes and saw the box

and wanted to ask dharam if it was for her

Sia- dharam...

She now knew that he wasn't there.... she turned to

the left and then to the right but she couldn't find him and then turned again looking at the box (she knew by now that this all was dharam's plan)

Sia slowly opened the ribben and then the box

she had no words for the things she saw coming out of the box

It was none other then a bunch of light butterflies all toghter..

@Vinisha, Annie, and the other brilliant writters in this topic

Guys i have been only concentrating on the scenes between dharam and sia as there hasn't been a lot of them ... i hope you don't mind but if you do then do tell me.... thanx

Edited by aandhanika - 17 years ago

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