19th August Written Update

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hey guys!
Okay I have tissues. A BIG BOX OF TISSUES.
Zaroorat paray ghee
At least for the beginning of this episode😛

RECAP:
Veer getting crap from the Shramiks😡
Dharam told Rajsaba off👏
Veer remebering Nivriti😭
Nivriti is ill😭
Veer goes to see her!😃👏
Dharam heard Nivriti calling Veer 😲

AND NOW

Veer is climbing over the Palace walls His face is covered but not his hair😉 Can we all just take a moment here to appreciate Veers HOTNESS?😍😳 *SIGHS DREAMILY* Even depressed the guy is Drop dead gorgeous😉
Anyway he gets into the Palace and gets to Nivriti who is lying in her bed murmuring Veers name over and over Veer puts his hand on her forehead and she opens her eyes and sees him😃 and Oh God!😭 Here come the tissues guys Veer is crying!😭 and so is Nivriti and he takes her hand and calls her MAA😭😭 and they both weep and she kisses his hand and God Im just blubbing like a baby already *blows nose*
Veer looks at the tray of food and sees that it hasnt been touched He asks Nivriti If shes eaten? Nivriti says She wasnt hungry Veer helps her up and brings the tray to her and then he takes some food and holds it out to her and asks her to open her mouth
Aww! Hes so sweet! 😳 Taking care of his mum like that!😭😳 And he feeds her and they're both crying and then Veer tells Nivriti: You know why I left and you know that for me to fulfill my laksh I have to stay away from you
DONT SAY THAT VEER!😭😭😭 Becahree Nivriti! Shes crying and she hugs him and Veers crying and Im crying and my tissues are already finished?! God this episode is so emotionally draining! And it ahsnt even started yet
Nivriti says to Veer: I will never come between you and your Laksh😳👏 Go now Veer and complete your Laksh!
*Blows nose and sobs*
Veer looks heartbroken🥺 Bechara and he gets up to leave-
And theres Dharam.
Looking just as Hot and heartbroken as Veer😭😉
Nivriti gets up and asks Dharam to let Veer go Dont call the soldiers Dharam!😲 Let him go! He just came to see his mother yaar!😭
Dharam says: Who says that Im stopping him? He wasnt stopped that day either. He went by his own freewill. I will not stop him today either.
*Aisha sobs harder*
Dharam and Veer look at each other. Dharams crying😭 and I think hes slightly angry at Veer too😭 and Veer! Oh Veer! Hes so upset! You can so tell! But hes trying to hide it! He takes ashirwad from Nivriti and goes to leave😭 He stops in front of Dharam!😭 They stare at each other both heartbroken🥺 and then Veer leaves!
NOOOO!!!! STOP HIM DHARAM!!! FOR THE LOVE OF GOD STOP HIM!!!! IF YOU DONT HE'LL GET STUCK WITH THOSE 🤬SHRAMIK!!!! OH GOD!!!!😭😭😭
Dharam sobs.
But not as much as me😭😭😭

Veer is walking through the woods. Alone in the dark. God this is depressing. And what the heck??? Someones following him? God! Cant you people leave the guy alone?!😡 Its someone dressed all in black (Original 8rolls eyes*) with a stick and turban.😕 Veer knows hes being followed😃 Well what does Veer NOT know?😉 He hides and then attacks the guy! The guys turban falls off and its noone I know😕 Someone new huh?
Veer asks Who are you?
The guy says: Jai Bhavani!
Im really starting to hate that motto😡 Thats not an answer dummy!😡
The guy tells Veer he is a Kranti Kar just like Veer and wants to help him
You do huh? *suspicious*
He tells Veer that at when everyone will go to worship at Mata Devis temple there is also a guy who has weapons called Shamboo.
Wait.
What?
......................................................

*Aisha stunned*
Shamboo?????
🤣🤣🤣

Arre Sagars! Koi aur naam koh choon nahin sakteh teh kya?😆
Anyway! 😃 The guy tells Veer that Shamboo😆 will give them weapons and then they will be able to fight!
Veer gives the guy his turban back and the guy leaves saying JAI BHAVANI! *Rolls eyes*
Veer looks adorable doesn he? *Smiles dreamily*
Ahem. Sorry.

Moving on. To Dharam. Bechara.
Maharaj comes and asks him why he isnt sleeping yet?
Hes jumping around thats why God! Why do you THINK?😡 Stupid Maharaj! Doesnt he even understand his own sons pain???
Maharaj: I know you are hurting
Okay maybe he does ? *sniffs in disgust*
Maharaj: But you have to learn to live alone without him now
NOOOO!!!!! DONT LISTEN TO HIM DHARAM!!!!😲😭
Dharam looks upset poor guy! But still Hot😉 and then Maharaj tells him to go on a yatra tomorrow to Mata Devi temple and then he'll feel better. Maharaj will look after everything while Dharam is gone.
Yeah. Because hes so good at looking after the Kingdom isnt he? *rolls eyes*
Dharam still looking heartbroken agrees to go.
*Sigh*
Everyones depressed in this drama!

Back to Veer😉 I just cant get over how HOT hes looking?😛 How can one guy look soooo good????😃
Anyway hes with the Shramiks🤢 and telling them that they will go to the Mata Devis temple and get her ashirwad before the fight. Comments questions anyone?
Ah yes. The midget in the front.🤢
He says: Phir voh mehel waali baat😡 Shramiks cannot go to the Temple only Aryavarths and the King can go
Veer: This is how it HAS been but now it wont be👏 WHOOO!!!! GO VEER!!!!
Midget: Wont happen😡😡😡
Veer: Yes it WILL👏
God! You try and help people and they just throw it back in your face!😡 Who the hell is this guy?! Some Kranti Wannabe?😡 Hes EXACTLY like Kranti! Only not as good looking and more annoying😡
A woman asks Veer Will you really take us there? Veer says Yes I will Maaji😳 Be ready tomorrow we will all go together😃
Krantiwannabe is making faces in the background😡 Creep!
The woman says This has been her wish all her life and if he makes this wish come true he is definitely the Messiah!
Veer smiles😛 I swoon😳 and drink Pepsi😃
And then another Shramik has to ruin the moment🤢😡
Shramik1:Hes gonna get us killed!
Krantiwannabe: This is suicidal talk!
Shramik2: The Aryavarths wont let us set foot in the place!
God!😡 These Shramiks nah! I just wanna bash them all in!
Veer tells them that They have evry right to go there! Why shouldnt they? In Gods eyes they are all equal!
Krantwannabe: You tell that to your brother King Dharam!
Okay thats it Ive had it!😡 The guy is trying to HELP you! Someone had better kill that Shramik before I get my hands on him😡
Veer says Noone can stop us! Who will go with me?
And like the cowards they are the Shramik stay quiet until the woman says I will go with you!
After that everyone else wants to go too
Freaks
🤢

Next day and everyones gettin ready to go and so is Veer and Dharam both looking stunning might I add😉 although I wish Veer would wear something nicer
Pari gives Veer her blessing and Nivriti looking BEAUTIFUL😳 gives Dharam her blessing Dharam still looks upset Maharaj gives his blessing too🤢 Stupid Maharaj. I hate him.
Then everyone leaves to go and Dharam is on a horse😃 looking KINGLY😉 and Veer is leading his ShramikArmy with red flags😛😉 and then they both MEET😲😃😛
Dharam gets off his horse and stands before Veer😳 and then DharamVeer music is playing! And Im getting teary eyed😭 and its so MOVING! *Sniffs emotionally* and then Dharam has to go ahead
Leaving Veer to fight with the Soldiers who wont let them through😆 Idiots kahin kay!
Veer stops a bunch of other people and says Noone will go to the aarti!
And the soldier tells him to Get lost!
But Veer stands his ground and wont let anyone by unless the Shramik dont get to go too!👏
The RoyalIdiots following Dharam go to see whats the hold up and when the people still dont move the soldier goes to hit them with the whip😡
Veer stops him👏 and tells him If you hit anyone else again I'll break your hand
Whoo. *Fans herself and drinks Pepsi* That guy is so HOT😉
The RoyalIdiots come and ask whats going on?
Hello? Cant you see? Veer is TRYING to look Hot and- Ahem I mean hes TAKING A STAND! WHOO! YEAH!!! Ahem.
Veer says If these people can go then the Shramiks will go too
RoyalIdiots say No Shramik has ever set foot in the Mata Temple!
Veer: This is Matas temple not the Aryavarths palace!👏👏👏 WE ARE ALL EQUAL!!!
DHARAM HEARS HIM😃 AND COMES TO SEE!
Veer says: Everything here for the pooja has been touched by a Shramik! Then why cant we go in? This place is Matas! Here only her will goes! Who are you to stop us? Maharaj Dharam your advisors dont think we are good enough to go in Forgive us but today e WILL go in! IS GOD ONLY FOR THE ARYAVARTHS NOT THE SHRAMIK?
WHOOOO!!!!! WHAT A SPEECH!!!!👏

AND THEN DHARAM SPEAKS

Dharam: Today onwards the Shramik will enter! We give them this honour
WHOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!👏
RoyalIdiot: But Maharaj-
Dharam: This is our ORDER!!!
WHOOOO!!!!!!
GO DHARAM!!!
Veer is like YEAH! THATS MY BROTHER!😃
OOH! THEY ARE SO COOL! AND HOT AND GORGEOUS! OH MY GOD! *Swooning*😉
The RoyalIdiots go to leave and when they say that this is an insult to them Dharam tells them That the only insult is to Mata
😃👏 an then DharamVeer look at each other and everyone goes in😃
And Veer leads the Shramiks in all happy and shouting JAI MATAJI! 😃
Dharam is standing with the RoyalIdiots🤢 and the Pundit tells him to start the aarti Dharam looks around for Veer😃
Veer isnt there
AND THEN
VEER COMES😃😃😃
HE AND DHARAM BOTH HOLD THE TRAY AND DO THE AARTI TOGETHER AND VEER SMILES😉 AND THEY BOTH LOOK AT PEACE AND ITS SO BEAUTIFUL😭😭😭
Im sorry Im crying again! *sniffles happily*
and then the RoyalIdiots leave in disgust
YEAH GET LOST FREAKS! WE DONT NEED YOU ANYWAY!😡🤢
And thats it!

Aisha xxx😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
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wahhhhhhhhhh Aisha....wkd update! i av watchd da vid bt wantd to see ur update! 🤗fnxxxxxxxxxxx...loved da mixed emotions u displayed...its exactly how i felt !😃😃😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
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thank u soo much aisha...🤗so many tissues and pepsi today!!!..hmmm😭
veer nivi scene ws very very touchy.....😭
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Posted: 17 years ago
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thanks for the update aisha

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